Fanfiction for 7stages [Havoc/Mustang, NC-17]

[hysteric_blue]

Title: Their Shades Of Pale
Author: galuxkitty
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairing: Jean Havoc/Roy Mustang
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 5811
Warnings: Graphic sexual situations.
Disclaimer: Fullmetal Alchemist is the rightful property of Hiromu Arakawa. This is a fanwork written purely for both your entertainment and mine

Comments

[raja815]

Oh, wow. Just... wow. You already know how much I've been enjoying this, but reading it all at once it really struck me just how absolutely amazing it is. :D There's such a great balance between humor and awkwardness and hotness...

I loved the entire thing, but some particular squee-worthy moments:

Drunk!Jean is so adorable that I want to pick him up and take him home with me. ^_^ And it was so sweet watching Roy take care of him.

Roy's sexual alchemy. HYDROGEN/CARBON/OXYGEN, the SLICK OT3!!! :D

The little mentions of their previous sexual histories. You always do this very well; I love that we get to see little flashes of their past. I always feel like I know Roy and Jean so much better after I read one of your fics. <3

Roy fingering himself. Seriously, that was just about the single HOTTEST image I've ever seen. I want to paint it with oil paints on a giant canvas and hang it up in my house and see it every day. :D *drool*

Jean at the end. I loved that he spit Roy's cum out. ^_^ No one ever does that in fic, so I thought it was so fun to see. And his reaction at the very end gave me the warm fuzzies all over. He doesn't want to let Roy go. <333

Absolutely wonderful all around. I'm so, so proud to have this dedicated to me. <33333

[ceasefire]

Eeeeeeee, thank you ^_^ Your comments always make me so happy. XD

Drunk Jean is adorable; hopefully he's still this adorable every time he gets drunk, and not an angry!drunk or a sick!drunk.

ROY MUSTANG'S NEW TITLE: THE LUBRICANT ALCHEMIST.

^_^ I like including little things like that, yup. After all, I doubt they'd ever be each others' first times. XD Thank you~

*purrs* I know. Roy is just sex on legs, and it is a rather nice MI to think about.

XD Havoc hates Roy!spooge. Poor Havoc... I don't know why, because I would have thought that would have been more common that someone drinking it down like it was a milkshake....

^_____________^ ♥ It was my pleasure, my dear, and thank you once again.

[summerhorse]

*cracks up* The Lubricant Alchemist. He would be very much in demand (at least in my frakked up version of Amestris where everyone's doing everyone else all the time)!

I loved this fic, really. It was real- the akwardness is so adorable and all that much more believable. But really, they're both sex on legs so it's meant to be. And I really like your shades of white, I'd have a hard time coming up with those ;)

[ceasefire]

*snerks* The elements for making your basic water-basded lube are all made up of carbon, hydrogen and oxygen. Roy could transmute it easily for hours of slippery fun!

Thank you very much ^_^ They would be very awkward at the beginning, Havoc especially, but they'd warm up. And indeed, they are. ^_~. Thanks very much for that, too. ♥