Exception

Oct 10, 2011 21:45

Exception - 833words ;; Dongwoo/Hoya ;; PG-13
What Dongwoo hated, humans, was what Dongwoo loved, but not for long.
A/N: random plot bunny, fail kissing scenes and slight hint of dirty stuffs. supernatural. somewhat based off twilight.

Like how Sungyeol is sweet watermelons, Sungjong's ramen and Woohyun's cheese. )

p: dongwoo/hoya, !fanfic, #f: infinite

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revivifythepast October 10 2011, 14:01:14 UTC
OKAY I HAVE 3 THINGS TO SAY. AND SORRY FOR MY LACK OF A POSSIBLY GOOD COMMENT BECAUSE I AM SHAKING AND CRYING AT MYSELF RIGHT NOW AT THE PERFECTION OF THIS FIC.

1. you have NO IDEA how good this fic is i mean seriously, the whole vampire concept is turning me on. especially when hoya knew that dongwoo was a vamp and he was totally okay with it because as we all know if you love someone, it should be unconditional.

2. the kissing scene, you need more of these. who said you cant write a kissing scene to save your life. it is amazing, and i bet you'll make a good smut writer /chuckles/ i dont know how you do not like your own writing because it is amazing. and i mean it bb. ♥

and lastly, i cannot believe you actually wrote this piece of perfection, because it is just too amazing to be true. everything fits perfectly. and THE LAST LINE, HE WAS SLOW FOR A NEWBORN. does this mean he's a vamp also now because that would be so hot ;w; like very very hot.

okay, anyways, TO SUM THIS STORY UP IT IS AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL AND I THINK IT TURNED ME ON SO BADLY RIGHT NOW BECAUSE I AM RE-READING IT FOR THE nth time. yes it was just that good. ♥

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hyeonseong October 10 2011, 14:30:45 UTC
(dw, all comments are good in their own ways♥)

1. VAMPIRES ARE HOT.
2.;A; but but but but aklsfnaksfn it seemed awk. (and i fail in writing smut. and i shldnt be writing these now. /coughs/ underage /coughs/.)
3. yesyes, he is a vampire now because i want ~vampire~ hoya. ;u; (no its not perfection, i still have a long way to go, and you can blame twilight for making me think of this ideky)

/HUGGLES. YOU DONT KNOW HOW MUCH THIS LAST LINE MADE ME SO HAPPY. ♥♥♥ ;____;

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