LJIdol S11 - Sudden Death Writeoff - Open Topic

Mar 05, 2020 13:28

What the -? You children are back to see me again already, eh? It feels like we saw each other only yesterday. Another story? Alas, I don't know any more stories ( Read more... )

curmudgeon, ljidol, fiction, s11

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kittenboo March 5 2020, 20:08:30 UTC
Omg this was a fun read!

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hwango March 6 2020, 06:32:56 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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bleodswean March 5 2020, 20:52:31 UTC

LOVE LOVE LOVE every word. Terrible though it all may bee.

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hwango March 6 2020, 06:34:00 UTC
Good thing puns don't bug me. = ) Thanks!

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tsuki_no_bara March 5 2020, 20:55:48 UTC
I love that one of the lessons of the story is "make sure your cheese isn't talking to you". also the image of the skeptical bee wearing a tiny medal is super cute.

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hwango March 6 2020, 06:34:52 UTC
I feel like not enough children's stories impart valuable advice such as "don't eat food that talks to you." = )

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karmasoup March 5 2020, 22:15:55 UTC
Moonbeams and Malice sounds like an awesome gothic glam band name! Whispering sounds either naughty or disgusting, or quite possibly both. The “sweetest lies” in this are just fabulous!

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hwango March 6 2020, 06:37:01 UTC
Their first album was called Gibbous and Gloom. = )

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adoptedwriter March 6 2020, 01:54:02 UTC
Amazing! This is great!

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hwango March 6 2020, 06:37:17 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

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