Fic: Oh, Captain

[huskyfriends]

Title: Oh, Captain
Series: Torchwood
Characters: Owen, Jack, Ianto, Gwen, Tosh
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Meat (TW 2.4)
Beta: firefly_124
Disclaimers: I do not own Torchwood or the characters therein, they belong to the BBC and RTD. Any original storylines, characters and places are my property.
Summary: Jack and Owen get some alone time in the Hub.
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Comments

[firefly124]

I really love the mind-game you played with this. On the first read, it's a wonderful double-take to find out what's really been going on. It really takes a couple of reads, though, to sit up and go, "Hey, wait a sec, I see what you did there!" because you wove it all in so carefully.

[huskyfriends]

**blushes** Thank you. And thank you for going over it for me.

[firefly124]

You're very welcome.

[dru_evilista]

Awesome! I read it twice, needed the second go though once I realized the genius twist.

[huskyfriends]

Thank you. You don't know how giddy it makes me that you finished the story and read it again. Glad you loved it. Tell your friends.

[scifiangel]

I'm ashamed to admit I almost stopped reading as I thought Jack was so out of character. Love the twit of this. Ingenious!

[huskyfriends]

I was kind of afraid several people would stop reading, but as you found out, once you get to the end you get an interesting surprise. There is a method behind the madness, mostly.

[alt_universe_me]

This was so mind-twisty. Interesting read!

[huskyfriends]

Thank you. I'm glad you made it to the end and liked it.

[nancybrown]

That was ... very strange. I liked the twist.

[huskyfriends]

Owen finally got revenge without being held responsible, and saved the Earth (at least in his version of the story).

Thanks. Glad you liked it. I try to be different.