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[wordsmithslash]

This was actually the chapter that kept trying to be written when the Ennis' daughters were visiting. I was going to hold off posting it until part eight was better defined but it's been a crappy day and I wanted to cheer myself up

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Down home on the ranch

[anonymous]

Oh, this is so much fun, all these guys and all this teenage angst and testosterone and Jack and Ennis being good dads. What a rollicking good time. And I love the way you write, it's got substance and a good story line. And theyr'e all really good people. So comfortable to be in their company! Can't wait to see where you go next! Thank you!

[slashedshi]

Heph!!!!!!!!!!!!!!OMG I love you so much right now. For some reason i never suspected Heph being gay, but at the same time its totally natural....Was kinda hoping for Bobby and merc gettin together -sigh young love-

Also felt the need to enform you of my stalker tendencies. I had a dream about this fic. Bobby, Merc, heph, everybody!!!! all you characterizations(sp?) and everything. That my dear is when you story is one of the most awsomeever wrote!!!

[anonymous]

Sorry you're having a crappy day. Your beautiful story made mine happier. Hope yours gets better too.

[snakelights]

Oh wow...
I love your bobby and I love hwo Bobby still is incredibly effected by relationship with girls. I was wondering how you were going to deal with that.

finnaly I love what bobby said about lava and cum. Really want to hit the girl after that.

[snakelights]

Question though would Bobby call Jack Jack? I mean I know he does it to Eniss but doesn't he call Jack or Dad? Cause that would make sense in that situation too...

Nice

[snakelights]

Bobby is gay...ish. I loosely followed this story before, but now you have my full attention. Can't wait to see this explored.

[wordsmithslash]

I don't think he'd say 'hey, Jack, come here." and he even refers to him as 'my daddy' when talking about him... but when he was alone with him and teasing him, he'd do it. (now if he can just get comfortable enough to tease Ennis... but I think he has some baggage there)

[sarful]

Too bad your feeling crappy, 'cause that chapter made happy. I love your characterizations of everyone. And 'score,' nice. Looks like Jack is by far the most experienced, but not in a good way...

Never saw Heph as being gay, but it makes sense in how you write. I like how well adjusted to homosexuality Bobby is. Bobby would be the one of the only ones he could really talk to, without the other person getting freaked out... Glad I started reading this, 'cause a fic of a fic seemed weird at first. Can't wait for more. I like Jack and Ennis as dads, its so endearing.