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Fic: The Extent of My Sin for janicechess

Jul 05, 2006 02:30

Title: The Extent of My Sin
Author: chaeldub
Giftee: janicechess
Rating: Teen
Word Count: 6018
Characters/Pairing: Harry/Draco, Harry/Bill… sort of
Warnings: slight language, double entendres

Author's Notes: I hope I covered most of the bases on this, as I had quite a bit of fun writing it. ( Read more... )

Comments 7

mimeofquidditch July 5 2006, 08:40:48 UTC

*giggles* &hearts! HEE ^___^ very nice.

... I want cake.

chaeldub August 8 2006, 12:26:05 UTC

Thanks for reading. I really enjoyed this exchange, can't wait for the next one. *hehehe* I want cake too.

enchanted_jae July 7 2006, 05:52:13 UTC

Obliviated?! Damn damn and damn!

This was exceptionally funny, and I loved it!

chaeldub August 8 2006, 12:28:56 UTC

Obliviated?! Damn damn and damn! - *bwuhaha* ... well I wanted it to be set during 6th yer so I had to have everyone forget what had just occured... well, except for the rings. Glad you found it funny, I don't write humour very often but I think I got some funny into it. It was a great exchange that the girls ran.

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chaeldub August 8 2006, 12:35:51 UTC

♥ Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wibbled over this for so long, really I didn't know whether it would be anything like something you would like or not. Then, as is most of the time, this fic just walked into my head and said "Here I am, write me.", so I did. The idea of writing it backwards probably came from that episode of Seinfeld, but I haven't seen that in years. The Sin Cylinder was as much a plot device to tell the story as it was to make the jumps backwards for each sin. It was a pleasure to write it in the end and I really like the way it turned out. The girls ran a great Comm and I hope they do it again.

penguin88 July 14 2006, 01:32:32 UTC

Ooo... I love it. This story is so unique - I've read a rather pathetic large amount of fanfiction over the past three years, and I've never come across a story quite like this before. It is creative, but it works. Sometimes, the creativity of a story can cause the reader to be unable to suspend their disbelief. I didn't have a problem like that at all when reading your story ( ... )

chaeldub August 8 2006, 12:42:11 UTC

*blushes* ♥ Gee, wow, I think that's one of the best reviews I've ever gotten. I'm glad you liked it so much to leave such nice words and what you thougth worked about it. Telling the story backwards was one of the things I thought would throw people, being a bit to artsyfartsy for my own good, but you obviously made it through unscathed.

well balanced between silliness and humor and good plot - now if only I could do that with all my fics i'd been in a much better place *hahaha*

Thnaks again for reading