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fic: On Where He Stands [Remus/Sirius PG 500 Watchers Challenge]

Sep 29, 2005 17:46

Title: On Where He Stands ( Read more... )

remus lupin, sirius/remus, 500 words for 500 watchers challenge, titles: m-z, txilar, sirius

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paranoidsistah September 29 2005, 18:44:54 UTC

Whoa! There is so much in this that my mind can't focus long enough to comment thoroughly. It's poetic, lush and swirling.

I feel taken in a wave of imagery and sensory overload but in a good way.
I love that at Dumbledore's death and Snape's apparent betrayal he thinks of Sirius(and doesn't notice Tonks or what a fool she makes of herself.)

And I love Sirius tasting of apples. And love that Remus can smell and taste him all the time. Painful though...

Thank you for posting it.
(Sorry I couldn't be more coherent.)

txilar September 29 2005, 19:25:59 UTC

Eeeh, what great things you say! No no, I would never ask for coherency ;) I'm glad you like the sensory overload. It's like that sometimes eh.

I think Sirius would taste of apples. That's my thought anyhow. Caramel too, because doesn't that just go together? =)

Thank you so much.

paranoidsistah September 29 2005, 20:33:29 UTC

Totally go together but seriously, 30 red apples... that's intense. :D

txilar October 2 2005, 10:06:40 UTC

It is... but it's like that sometimes. Mindboggling intense and precise. ;)

paranoidsistah October 3 2005, 23:25:07 UTC

Just caught up on scarvesnhats, the first prompt was a crate full of apples on a bench, totally made me think of this fic and as far as I read no one there did as much with their apples as you did here. :)

(Friended you back btw)

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