The Cruel Seduction

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Title: The Cruel Seduction

Comments

[wulfkub]

Weeks later, she’s at his doorstep, all mousy hair and large, wet eyes. She walks in hopeful little circles, like a wounded animal.

That's the best description I've ever seen of that.

Damned well done!

[persephone_blue]

Damned thank you! I'm alwayd glad for your comments. :)

I'm very proud of that description; I went back an edited it a couple of times. It turned out very well.

[thunder_song]

oh, excellent, excellent, excellent.
EXTREMELY well done. you put my remus/tonks to shame!

[persephone_blue]

*insert happy dance here*

Thank you, thank you, thank you, and keep writing your Remmy/Tonks, man!

[ilthit]

What a cool take on it!

[persephone_blue]

I do my best. I dig your icon.

[radiophonic]

:D *adds to memories*

[persephone_blue]

And that is how you know you've written something above the norm.