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stellarodyssey in hp100

Still Unpredictable

Aug 17, 2005 14:51

Title: Still Unpredictable
Characters: Snape, Harry, Neville, Ron
Rating: R
Word Count: 100
House: Ravenclaw
Challenge: Gigawatts
A/N: The film is 'From Dusk Till Dawn." Cut for violence.

( Still Unpredictable )

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stellarodyssey August 17 2005, 19:30:43 UTC

Thanks. I was worried I cut too much for it to make sense.

soberloki August 17 2005, 19:22:02 UTC

Fucking AWESOME.

It's all about Snape.

stellarodyssey August 17 2005, 19:31:57 UTC

For me it was never about anyone else :) Thanks!

tayefeth August 17 2005, 20:22:20 UTC

For me it was never about anyone else

Same here.

Very powerful drabble. Pity about Neville...

stellarodyssey August 18 2005, 02:05:19 UTC

Yes poor Neville. But someone had to eat the dirt sandwitch and it had to be someone who Harry would care about. I couldn't do it to Ron.

wirelesstouch August 17 2005, 20:28:19 UTC

Yes, great job! Very... realistic.

stellarodyssey August 18 2005, 02:07:45 UTC

Thank you! I had to cut it down from 177 words so it might sound a little . . .um promt?

yogurtnest August 17 2005, 22:35:15 UTC

Wow...this was quite ze powerful drabble.

stellarodyssey August 18 2005, 02:09:25 UTC

Good stuff! Thanks. It's a powerful quote.

discreetfluff August 18 2005, 21:55:42 UTC

Wow.

I never thought I'd be able to love a "Neville-gets-his-ass-handed-to-him" drabble, but that was really, really good.