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SEVEN O'CLOCK

Feb 19, 2005 07:24

Title: SEVEN O'CLOCK
Challenge: Valentine's Day
House: Ravenclaw
Words: 100 (including "O")
Characters: James/Lily

To My Most Divine and Glorious Mistress,
on the Occasion of the Feast of Saint Valentine O, bid me get thee anything thou ask ( Read more... )

Comments 12

antonia_east February 19 2005, 15:13:05 UTC

HA HA HA! Hilarious!

winding_path February 20 2005, 21:24:25 UTC

Thank you!

yma2 February 19 2005, 15:29:44 UTC

:burst out in fir of spontanious giggling:
Great stuff, I love how James shows off and Lily brings him to ground with a bump. Love it!

winding_path February 20 2005, 21:26:26 UTC

It seems to me like very much the dynamic of their relationship. Thanks for the comments!

eggplant_tyrant February 19 2005, 16:49:14 UTC

Hee hee! This is so cute. I love her reply, and how she takes the sting off of it by signing 'love'.

winding_path February 20 2005, 21:27:12 UTC

I think Lily keeps James slightly less ego-inflated, but I do think she loves him.

dobbygrl February 19 2005, 17:18:54 UTC

Really cute and pretty funny as well!!!! Nice Job!

winding_path February 20 2005, 21:29:16 UTC

Thank you!

jelsemium February 19 2005, 17:32:42 UTC

Ha! Ha! This is great! Here's James waxing all poetical about all the things he would do for Lily, and all she wants is for him to be on time!

Good job!

:-)

winding_path February 20 2005, 21:30:11 UTC

I get the feeling James doesn't think of little things, just big ones. Thank you!