Since I did promise you a /good/ comment :Ub *takes out disecting knife*
The beginning? It was absolutely adoreable. It's so warm and fluffy and it's like a shot glass of love straight up.
The part where Alfred's room was half cluttered and half not? It reminded me of their relationship actually; just a bit :D, clean side = Arthur, Messy side = Alfred. and when Alfred asked to have sex? I giggled at how innocent yet dirty that was :P.
"He rolled them over suddenly, causing America to blink in surprise and shake his head as if to clear it. England splayed his hands on his abdomen and lifted himself up, almost away, then slammed back down - and that was what he’d been looking for"
^ Aha! Way to go England, push him down and TAKE want you want :D. I loved this part so much <3
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I'll leave you a better one when I wake up in the morning :Ub
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you better. :TTT
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but yeah. Night Sapph!
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The beginning? It was absolutely adoreable. It's so warm and fluffy and it's like a shot glass of love straight up.
The part where Alfred's room was half cluttered and half not? It reminded me of their relationship actually; just a bit :D, clean side = Arthur, Messy side = Alfred. and when Alfred asked to have sex? I giggled at how innocent yet dirty that was :P.
"He rolled them over suddenly, causing America to blink in surprise and shake his head as if to clear it. England splayed his hands on his abdomen and lifted himself up, almost away, then slammed back down - and that was what he’d been looking for"
^ Aha! Way to go England, push him down and TAKE want you want :D. I loved this part so much <3 ( ... )
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Glad you liked it. The messy room is based off of me when I clean my room, but see any metaphor/allegory/other literary device that you want in it xD
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