Since I did promise you a /good/ comment :Ub *takes out disecting knife*
The beginning? It was absolutely adoreable. It's so warm and fluffy and it's like a shot glass of love straight up.
The part where Alfred's room was half cluttered and half not? It reminded me of their relationship actually; just a bit :D, clean side = Arthur, Messy side = Alfred. and when Alfred asked to have sex? I giggled at how innocent yet dirty that was :P.
"He rolled them over suddenly, causing America to blink in surprise and shake his head as if to clear it. England splayed his hands on his abdomen and lifted himself up, almost away, then slammed back down - and that was what he’d been looking for"
^ Aha! Way to go England, push him down and TAKE want you want :D. I loved this part so much <3.
"England would stop with America buried balls deep in him and just roll his hips, petting America’s chest and stomach as he asked him what he liked, for he still didn’t know and he wanted to. America just swore and moved England himself, and England didn’t try to pretend that it didn’t turn him on even more."
^ Hehe, I loved this part too, with england just stopping and America's just like "fuck it".
Over all, to me this was like a big mug of warm love by a fire and dipped in Chocolate.
The beginning? It was absolutely adoreable. It's so warm and fluffy and it's like a shot glass of love straight up.
The part where Alfred's room was half cluttered and half not? It reminded me of their relationship actually; just a bit :D, clean side = Arthur, Messy side = Alfred. and when Alfred asked to have sex? I giggled at how innocent yet dirty that was :P.
"He rolled them over suddenly, causing America to blink in surprise and shake his head as if to clear it. England splayed his hands on his abdomen and lifted himself up, almost away, then slammed back down - and that was what he’d been looking for"
^ Aha! Way to go England, push him down and TAKE want you want :D. I loved this part so much <3.
"England would stop with America buried balls deep in him and just roll his hips, petting America’s chest and stomach as he asked him what he liked, for he still didn’t know and he wanted to. America just swore and moved England himself, and England didn’t try to pretend that it didn’t turn him on even more."
^ Hehe, I loved this part too, with england just stopping and America's just like "fuck it".
Over all, to me this was like a big mug of warm love by a fire and dipped in Chocolate.
(and don't you dare say that I can't deliever :P)
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Glad you liked it. The messy room is based off of me when I clean my room, but see any metaphor/allegory/other literary device that you want in it xD
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