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prototypic June 17 2009, 00:50:02 UTC
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“What the FU-“ Heechul began. ... Heechul stared at her. She was drenched and there were bits of loofa tangled in her hair. She grinned at him ecstatically. “Mother. What.” He deadpanned...his mother gushed breathlessly. Her cheeks were a patchy pink, her eyes feverishly bright. “Taemin, it’s Taemin!”
.... skinny, eleven-year-old Taemin stood in what was left of the desecrated bathtub, his hands blocking self-consciously in front of him. He was stark naked, dripping just like his mother, and was still slightly soapy... He grinned nervously at his audience.

WTF. i swear i burst out laughing irl. srsly. oh you're so awesome.

Heechul strode forward, pausing before Taemin and staring at him. Then, without warning, he threw an arm around his neck and pulled him into an impossibly tight, suffocating hug. Taemin teetered forward awkwardly, hands clamped firmly in front of him. “I am so proud of you,” he sniffled thickly.

“Thanks, hyung,” Taemin replied, smiling brightly. “Uh….can I get dressed now?”
wtf he's acting kinda like ( ... )

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holykeebler216 June 17 2009, 01:09:04 UTC
lol it IS long im sorry.

lol a niffler is a cute little furry thing that will search for, find, and then take whatever is shiny.

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prototypic June 17 2009, 01:32:13 UTC
iiiii like how you described the transition from the muggle world-into the barrier-and to the other side. giant pack of muggle candy pop rocks wtf xD

......terminal twelven. right. xD

“Wait wait wait,” Jonghyun said loudly. “More importantly, if you’re a First Kim, your brother must be-“

“-Kim Heechul?” Key finished. “No way.”

“Oh come on, look at him, they’re practically identical-“

this really reminds me of that harrypotter scene somehow. and yes taemin and heechul are identical. are you going to work in a hongki too? xD

“Really? That’s an Avanti?” Taemin asked. Heechul turned around to look at him, tucking his wand into the back pocket of his jeans. “Yeah,” he staged-whispered, cupping a hand around his mouth. “And Eeteuk’s the worst one.”

“I heard that.” Came the dry reply from outside the door.

you know. this just gets so much better because my bias is in there 8DD

and omfg i love you for this last line
“Hey, Siwon. Are you quite attached to your fingernails?”
aaaaaad i think it's going to be a hit. it's really ( ... )

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holykeebler216 June 17 2009, 01:52:09 UTC
yay i liked that too! lol idk if hongki will make an appearance. ive never written him before. but hey, biases everywhere, bias for everyone! \o/

aww alsdkfj yay im glad youre going to read it! *wibbles*

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kichi_kawaii June 17 2009, 01:46:36 UTC
ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

PLEASE MARRY ME ;______________;

Ok I'm kidding, BUT DAMN I'M LIKE ECSTATIC AND TOTALLY HYPER AND SPAZZING!

I don't know where to started, but I am right now in love <3

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holykeebler216 June 17 2009, 01:54:27 UTC
im so glad you like it!

its so long im amazed anyones reading it :T

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kichi_kawaii June 17 2009, 01:56:10 UTC
I like long fics, they keep me so entertained :3

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holykeebler216 June 17 2009, 01:58:08 UTC
lol well i've got some in the works XD

i like long ones too. the girl below your comment, schm0use, writes great long ones. you should check hers out :)

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schm0use June 17 2009, 01:47:43 UTC
i like... how you have the preventative warning lololol.

im supah excited for the stuff in the notes, let me tell you!!!

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holykeebler216 June 17 2009, 01:52:42 UTC
LOL I DONT WANT ANY BULLSHIT.

lol i forgot what was in the notes.

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314159 June 17 2009, 03:41:49 UTC
fdsjfdlkfj I am so excited to read more of this. I loved every bit of this first chapter, but my favorite part was definitely the beginning, with Heebum flying around and Heechul throwing a fit and all (though come to think of it, he was basically throwing a fit through the entire fic haha). and Hanchul being bffs makes me happy. update soon :D!

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holykeebler216 June 17 2009, 04:59:07 UTC
alskdj thank you! i promise i will! ahaha im glad you liked heebum zooming around, i can just picture him like >:|

thanks! :D

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skadihelias June 17 2009, 04:58:27 UTC
This...this....

No words can describe how much I love you for this.

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holykeebler216 June 17 2009, 05:00:47 UTC
and i love you for reading! and your icon looks like the style of someone i follow...it isnt jishu, is it?

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skadihelias June 17 2009, 05:12:56 UTC
No, it isn't. It was made by yummycoffee, using an image from Bleach manga :D

Oh, and seriously, you HAVE to continue this fanfic. It's so awesome. Minho is so cool and asdklfjhdlskjf I love him so much. Taemin is so adorable. Heechul is just pure love love love. YESUNG!!!!♥♥♥♥♥ Ew, Siwon with a girl XD Wee!Hankyung on his toy broomstick crashing into wee!Heechul is the best image forever :3

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holykeebler216 June 17 2009, 05:17:32 UTC
darn. took a shot.

ahaha i will, promise. i have plans for this fic. ahaha yeah most everyone is het in this XD sorry to disappoint. omg now im imagining a mini Heechul at like, 3 years old and i want one.

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