de-aged Sulu fic

May 24, 2010 12:48

Someone wanted Kirk/Sulu with de-aged Sulu this weekend and a couple of people filled it before I finished mine, so I threw in some Chekov for good measure.

Title: Code 78
Fandom: Star Trek
Pairing: Kirk/Sulu, Sulu/Chekov (to a lesser degree)
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~5,000
Summary: Sulu gets de-aged and Kirk and Chekov volunteer to take care of ( Read more... )

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hollycomb May 24 2010, 20:46:57 UTC
Thank you for reading and for the feedback! I love de-aged fics, but yeah, I prefer for them to deal with some issues/reveal things about the adult's personality that he/she was trying to hide, and is still trying to hide, I guess, doing so less successfully as a child.

I'm glad this has a Three Stooges-esque feeling, lol (I've never seen it, either, but I know what you mean!), I guess the original idea was that it would be funny to see Kirk and Chekov scrambling for Hikaru's attention with their two different ~parenting styles~

Yeah, I figured the ending might feel a bit rushed -- this is kind of like a chunk of emotion wrapped up in a much longer fic I'm writing about the three of them, so I didn't really flesh out the romance, and I wasn't planning on ending with a ~kiss~, but then I really liked the idea that Kirk would save the picture, Sulu would see it, Kirk would know he saw it -- and then it was too sad to think of Kirk being left to feel awkward/embarrassed without Sulu making some kind of sweeping gesture. ;__;

It was like a storm in a teacup?

Awesome -- that is basically what I intended!! :D Thanks again.

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