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Jael 8/8 wolflupin July 23 2011, 00:16:52 UTC
“It looks like we were too late.”

Jael covered her face with her hands and buried her head into Gavriil’s chest, not resisting as he pulled her away from the body. Suddenly, Gavriil grabbed her wrists and pulled her hands away from her face, “Now li-“

Jael flinched away from Gavriil as something wet splattered against her stomach and thighs. She looked up at him, and then followed his eyes as he looked down, only to see a broadsword sticking out of his stomach. Horrified, Jael barely managed to catch Gavriil as the person behind him shoved him off the sword and into her arms. Kneeling down with him, Jael looked up to someone she had never thought she’d see again.

Kleitos was casually wiping the blood off his sword, a satisfied look on his face, “Hello darlin’. Haven’t seen you in quite some time. You didn’t think you could possibly escape from me in this city, did you?”

For a moment, Jael just stared at him. Realizing Gavriil had stopped breathing, Jael carefully placed his body on the ground and stood so she could look Kleitos straight in the eye. The next second, two soldiers came out of nowhere and grabbed her arms. As she knocked the first two away there were several more surrounding her, grabbing her arms and legs. She kept struggling and had almost freed herself when something smashed into the back of her head, causing her to collapse a split second before everything went dark.

12. Writing sample - First Person:

...This is sadly familiar.

Where am I now? Last I remembered I was on that shore.

Matt? Matt, please be here. Jin? Joe? ...Jinx? Is there anyone else from the Elegante here?

If not, my name is Jael. Would someone be so kind as to explain what this place is and why I'm here? Or show me where I can get food and clothing? Any help would be appreciated.

13. Tattoo: Around her neck, right over her vocal cords.

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ACCEPTED lord_admin July 24 2011, 03:27:07 UTC
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