Oooh, this is now one of my favorites. So fantastically creepy and spot on how I imagine T-Bag would be finishing up his to-do list. Great job, love it. So much. I keep rereading bits, cheering him on in my head. Which is probably sick to anyone else, but y'all understand. :D
“It wouldn’t have worked out between us anyway, Pretty.”
and
“Well, I guess it’s just down to two now.”
And I don't think that lack of slash is a problem at all. The Maytag/T-Bag scene is so nice and intimate (Sweet for T-Bag to get some storytime from one of his boys, instead of him always telling the stories). And of course T-Bag pinging for Michael is always fun.
I love the list structure. Especially poor crossed out James. (notice how Michael comes first of all though?)
- find AbruzziAnd my slash filled mind immediately concocts a scheme where T-Bag sneaks into the hospital, abducts Abruzzi (like pumps him full of drugs, puts him in a wheelchair), sneaks him off to a remote location and taunts him relentlessly for weeks. After all, it was T-Bag who almost killed Abruzzi the last time around, so what reason would he have to kill him again
( ... )
After all, it was T-Bag who almost killed Abruzzi the last time around, so what reason would he have to kill him again?
But this is my AU escape, where T-bag never slit his throat so he's going after Abruzzi's family to avenge the deaths of James and James Jr., thus setting it up for Payback's A Bitch.
I realized after that I had written the beginning with C-Note, so I changed it to fit the little AU escape plan of Payback.
Though after the bloodbath I sure hope that T-Bag got himself a nice change of clothing.
Never thought of that. It would be funny if they still had some of Maytag's clothes there, like in his old room or something and he wore those.
I think the scariest moment is the killing of the little girl because it's so quick and unexpected. Like one almost expects T-Bag to take some more time with her and swift kill comes like a double shock.See, to me he kills very differently when it's not for his own sexual pleasure. Even though she was his type, T-bag was strictly there for revenge, which is why he
( ... )
But darn, I had this whole beautiful T-Bag/Abruzzi setup all rolled out in my head. Sniff. I want my T&A!
It would be funny if they still had some of Maytag's clothes there, like in his old room or something and he wore those.
Why do I expect Maytag to have a seriously funky taste in clothing? Though, with Maytag in jail would they really keep his clothing? Especially if they weren't really fond of him? Maybe in the basement. Or he maybe there is a change of clothing for Patrick lying around somewhere.
*pictures T-Bag loft, cooing over old baby pictures of Jason* *desperately tries to wipe image out of her mind*
You are like RK. Like he said in the InFanity interview, he just keeps throwing adding creepy and disturbing little touches and we lap it up when he expects us to be creeped out. It's the same for your stories ;D
Why do I expect Maytag to have a seriously funky taste in clothing?
T-bag: Ooh, a shiny shirt and leather pants! (snatches)
Or he maybe there is a change of clothing for Patrick lying around somewhere.
This is my own fault, but every time I see his name it's funny. Jason and Patrick. Jason Patric. (snicker) Yes, I'm lame.
You are like RK. Like he said in the InFanity interview, he just keeps throwing adding creepy and disturbing little touches and we lap it up when he expects us to be creeped out. It's the same for your stories ;D
(is very flattered to be compared to the man himself) Thank you! Yeah, I'm always a little scared each time I post a story, but everyone just Grissoms it and that is very cool.
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I love deadpan!T-Bag. Especially
“It wouldn’t have worked out between us anyway, Pretty.”
and
“Well, I guess it’s just down to two now.”
And I don't think that lack of slash is a problem at all. The Maytag/T-Bag scene is so nice and intimate (Sweet for T-Bag to get some storytime from one of his boys, instead of him always telling the stories). And of course T-Bag pinging for Michael is always fun.
I love the list structure. Especially poor crossed out James. (notice how Michael comes first of all though?)
- find AbruzziAnd my slash filled mind immediately concocts a scheme where T-Bag sneaks into the hospital, abducts Abruzzi (like pumps him full of drugs, puts him in a wheelchair), sneaks him off to a remote location and taunts him relentlessly for weeks. After all, it was T-Bag who almost killed Abruzzi the last time around, so what reason would he have to kill him again ( ... )
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After all, it was T-Bag who almost killed Abruzzi the last time around, so what reason would he have to kill him again?
But this is my AU escape, where T-bag never slit his throat so he's going after Abruzzi's family to avenge the deaths of James and James Jr., thus setting it up for Payback's A Bitch.
I realized after that I had written the beginning with C-Note, so I changed it to fit the little AU escape plan of Payback.
Though after the bloodbath I sure hope that T-Bag got himself a nice change of clothing.
Never thought of that. It would be funny if they still had some of Maytag's clothes there, like in his old room or something and he wore those.
I think the scariest moment is the killing of the little girl because it's so quick and unexpected. Like one almost expects T-Bag to take some more time with her and swift kill comes like a double shock.See, to me he kills very differently when it's not for his own sexual pleasure. Even though she was his type, T-bag was strictly there for revenge, which is why he ( ... )
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But darn, I had this whole beautiful T-Bag/Abruzzi setup all rolled out in my head. Sniff. I want my T&A!
It would be funny if they still had some of Maytag's clothes there, like in his old room or something and he wore those.
Why do I expect Maytag to have a seriously funky taste in clothing? Though, with Maytag in jail would they really keep his clothing? Especially if they weren't really fond of him? Maybe in the basement. Or he maybe there is a change of clothing for Patrick lying around somewhere.
*pictures T-Bag loft, cooing over old baby pictures of Jason*
*desperately tries to wipe image out of her mind*
You are like RK. Like he said in the InFanity interview, he just keeps throwing adding creepy and disturbing little touches and we lap it up when he expects us to be creeped out. It's the same for your stories ;D
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I swear, I will write it! Eventually.
Why do I expect Maytag to have a seriously funky taste in clothing?
T-bag: Ooh, a shiny shirt and leather pants! (snatches)
Or he maybe there is a change of clothing for Patrick lying around somewhere.
This is my own fault, but every time I see his name it's funny. Jason and Patrick. Jason Patric. (snicker) Yes, I'm lame.
You are like RK. Like he said in the InFanity interview, he just keeps throwing adding creepy and disturbing little touches and we lap it up when he expects us to be creeped out. It's the same for your stories ;D
(is very flattered to be compared to the man himself) Thank you! Yeah, I'm always a little scared each time I post a story, but everyone just Grissoms it and that is very cool.
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