Prompt Post 13

Aug 11, 2013 21:44

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Re: FILL Re: I did not trip and fall... rosa_cotton October 1 2013, 02:17:59 UTC
Even when the Ri brothers return to their drinks and join in the singing, the other three regard Bilbo with serious, searching expressions. He offers them a small smile. He does not understand what all is going on, but he thinks he is starting to a little bit. And while it is bewildering, there is something endearing about it, too. He breaths in relief as his friends seem mollified and relax, though Bifur waves his fork in the air a final time for good measure, while Bofur looks he is considering dragging Bilbo over to their side of the table and the hatted dwarf opens his mouth.

But there is suddenly a surprisingly large shadow falling over them. Craning his head far back, Bilbo blinks in shock as Balin spins in a circle or three on the table, his ale held high above his head as he sings loudly with his kin. Awed, the hobbit watches as the wise advisor, always so dignified and posed, moves back and forth across the table with increasing speed, his face full of glee, his voice rising in volume with the last chorus. He does a series of high kicks with a laugh. Never did the Halfling suspect he would see his friend in such a state, so jolly, with such impressive flexibility.

Enthusiastically Bilbo claps at the song’s ending, and particularly Balin’s performance, as do the rest of the patrons with loud approval. The white-haired dwarf delivers a number of grand bows to the room. Giggling, he unsteadily steps down onto the bench between Oin and Gloin, and then steps down to the floor. Or at least, that his intention but something, maybe not quite having his balance, lack of focus, too busy still giggling like a young lad… In any event, he perches forward and lands face first on the wooden floor. The laughter and cheering does not die down at this event but increases, with Dwalin proclaiming, “Well done, brother!” None of the company moves to assist the fallen dwarf.

“Alright there, Balin?” Thorin inquires unconcernedly.

“O-o-of courseeee,” Balin answers with a laugh, and pats the floor with his hands.

“That was some tumble, cousin,” Gloin comments with a grin.

“Tum-m-mble? Oh, no.” The dwarf rolls onto his back. His expression is almost one of his old seriousness. “I merely was attacking the floor,” he solemnly informs his audience, “and I believe I won the match.”

His gaze flickers about the room, and a moment later he cracks up laughing, followed by the others.

Propping his chin in his hand, Bilbo can only shake his head. He never imagined he would see Balin so drunk, and a very interesting one he makes. The highlight of this topsy-turvy day, he concludes.

THE END

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Re: FILL Re: I did not trip and fall... rosa_cotton October 1 2013, 03:09:54 UTC
(OP here.)

This was marvelous! Between the tug-o-war over Bilbo, Balin spinning about on the table and the others' unconcerned amusement at Balin's mishap, I was laughing all the way through!

I love that you chose Balin for this story. I hadn't really considered him for this prompt, but he fit perfectly!

Fantastic fill, thank you! :D

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Re: FILL Re: I did not trip and fall... rosa_cotton October 1 2013, 16:11:33 UTC
Oh, I am relieved this met your approval! I didn't mean for the prompt to only appear at the very end, but this got away from me. Writing the tug-o-war over Bilbo was lots of fun. And I'm glad you liked Balin filling the prompt. I wanted to use one of the older dwarves, and thought Balin would be an interesting choice (since I picture him as usually the wise and responsible one, rarely if ever having too much to drink).

Thank you for the great prompt, and for reading! :)

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Re: FILL Re: I did not trip and fall... msilverstar October 6 2013, 04:49:26 UTC
unexpected and very fun fill!

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Re: FILL Re: I did not trip and fall... rosa_cotton October 12 2013, 02:07:34 UTC
I'm glad! Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

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Re: FILL Re: I did not trip and fall... ajir13 October 20 2013, 18:20:15 UTC
Oh my, that was simply amazing! Do you have AO3 account? I'd love to add it to my bookmarks <3

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Re: FILL Re: I did not trip and fall... rosa_cotton October 21 2013, 02:21:34 UTC
Aw, thanks! Glad you liked it.

Yes, you can find "Topsy-Turvy" at AO3 -- http://archiveofourown.org/works/990174.

Thank you again for reading and commenting!

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