Well, the first part has been up for a couple days, so I figured it'd be safe to post the second part.  I made the font a bit larger, so hopefully it's easier to read.  As I said before, I'd love for people to read this and give me critiques on it.

Part Two: Some Assembly Is Required

Bastian watched the scenery pass by with eyes round ( Read more... )

Since I ended up adding a beginning section that introduced Aeolos and Ciardall… well, Part One grew to be too long.  It was all right at first, but I got some helpful edits that must have put it over the maximum word count.  Anyway, he’s the second part of Part One.

Bastian made his way slowly through the market.  He loved market days, especially ( Read more... )

Wow, it's been a while since I wrote.  Last time I checked in, I was gearing up for ScriptFrenzy.  I'm happy to report that I was completely successful in writing my script and it turned out better than I could have expected.  There are some edits I want to make to it before I post it.  However, to whet your apatite for my writing a bit, I'll start ( Read more... )