Crit Post 23

[hmd_me]

How's My Driving?
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[endlessmagic]

@ amatomnes
endlessmagic - Beatrice (Umineko no Naku Koro ni)
lovescucumbers - Nitori Kawashiro (Touhou Project)

@ mayfield_rpg
witchingold - Beatrice (Umineko no Naku Koro ni)

@ guysandolls
dancenotquack - Ahiru (Princess Tutu)

@ sirenspull
logicerrored - Battler Ushiromiya (Umineko no Naku Koro ni)

dear_mun/other
miraclekakera/homolustings - Lion Ushiromiya (Umineko no Naku Koro ni)
wantsallsacks - Asmodeus (Umineko no Naku Koro ni)

All have screened/non ip HMDs in their own journals. As usual, any feedback is appreciated.

[endlessmagic]

I'm sad you dropped Ahiru at Mayfield! Did you make a drop post? I never saw it :( I know this isn't really crit, but I really liked her.

[endlessmagic]

Unfortunately, I didn't since... I did just pick her up. I love playing her to death, but there's so many characters I want to play/am playing right now, and work got unexpectedly a lot busier than I anticipated. And having the same character in two games while wanting to play more... :/ I would have ended up overwhelming myself, which I really don't want to do with RP. While I'll have more free time after Christmas, I still won't have as much free time as I thought I would have after the holiday season is over. It was a really hard decision to make since I love playing her to death, and love Mayfield quite a bit (and I will be off hiatus after Christmas is over)

[signifies]

I am incredibly pleased and proud that you've come this far, bb. From play one character in one game to many characters in many games -- and let's not forget the wide range of personalities between them! And the fact that they're all well played -- it's really amazing. And it's so fun to watch you have fun playing and be able to interact with you. There's no real criticism here, since you've always been a wonderful rper, but I've just got to say that I really love you characters and their voices.

[14th]

@amatomnes
- 14th / Raidou Kuzunoha XIV / SMT: Devil Summoner: Raidou Kuzunoha
- bakescakes / Katsuya Suou / Persona 2

@guysandolls
- arrowcollar / Shouhei Narumi / SMT: Devil Summoner: Raidou Kuzunoha
- parturience / Youji Sakiyama / Sweet Pool

[tracing]

i actually really love both your characters at amat and i'd definitely would love to thread with them more! katsuya especially, since our last thread didn't last too long.

it's hard for me to describe, but the way you write your characters makes them really fun and interesting to read. it's not part of your characterization exactly (but that is spot-on from what i know) but it's your writing. even with a silent protagonist like raidou your interesting writing style makes it so that he's still perfectly ic but fun and interesting to thread with without falling flat like it easily could with a silent protag.

all-in-all, i'm really glad i get to play in a game with a writer as talented and interesting as you, so i hope i certainly get to rp with you more in the future.

[14th]

OH GOSH i can't handle all this praise!! i'm really glad you think my characters are interesting to read, since esp with silent protags it's pretty tricky. i'd love to thread with you more often too - you're welcome to katsuya anytime hehhhhhhhhh

[defedated]

Every time I've praised your Youji, I've meant it 110%; I feel incredibly lucky to have had the opportunity to get you into sweet pool and to play with you, because you're absolutely awesome with him. You have an excellent grasp of his personality - not only the parts of him that translate directly from the canon, but also in the way his new circumstances would garner different reactions and develop him emotionally and psychologically, and when I play with him I feel like his reactions couldn't be more IC than they already are. You're doing an incredible job, and I honestly don't think any part of him could be better, it's so spot-on.

Thank you so much for the opportunity to play with you, bro.

[stoicism]

♔ SOMARIUM
☆ Akihiko Sanada ⇁ [rise_to_caesar] ⇁ Persona 3: FES
☆ Frank Jaeger ⇁ [stoicism] ⇁ Metal Gear Solid: PO

♘ FISSIONMAILED
★ Gray Fox ⇁ [zanzibarasshole] ⇁ Metal Gear 2
★ Null ⇁ [stoicism] ⇁ Portable Ops

[justsocruel]

dirtyvegasrp

Ash Landers ✞ confessmyname ✞ Kuroshitsuji
Alois Trancy ♥ justsocruel ♥ Kuroshitsuji II
Death the Kid (and 'Id') Ω moodboom Ω Soul Eater

dear_mun, privately, etc.

Sebastian Michaelis ♞ blackratio ♞ Kuroshitsuji
Grell Sutcliff ☆ somecupidkills ☆ Kuroshitsuji

There are separate HMDs on each journal with all the usual if you'd prefer that. Thank you in advance, and have a nice day!

[invisibill]

@discedo

Will Stanton | Dark is Rising Sequence |beyondimagining
Danny Fenton | Danny Phantom| invisibill
Takato Matsuda | Digimon Tamers | gallantgoggles