Crit Post 23

[hmd_me]

How's My Driving?
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[14th]

@amatomnes
- 14th / Raidou Kuzunoha XIV / SMT: Devil Summoner: Raidou Kuzunoha
- bakescakes / Katsuya Suou / Persona 2

@guysandolls
- arrowcollar / Shouhei Narumi / SMT: Devil Summoner: Raidou Kuzunoha
- parturience / Youji Sakiyama / Sweet Pool

[tracing]

i actually really love both your characters at amat and i'd definitely would love to thread with them more! katsuya especially, since our last thread didn't last too long.

it's hard for me to describe, but the way you write your characters makes them really fun and interesting to read. it's not part of your characterization exactly (but that is spot-on from what i know) but it's your writing. even with a silent protagonist like raidou your interesting writing style makes it so that he's still perfectly ic but fun and interesting to thread with without falling flat like it easily could with a silent protag.

all-in-all, i'm really glad i get to play in a game with a writer as talented and interesting as you, so i hope i certainly get to rp with you more in the future.

[14th]

OH GOSH i can't handle all this praise!! i'm really glad you think my characters are interesting to read, since esp with silent protags it's pretty tricky. i'd love to thread with you more often too - you're welcome to katsuya anytime hehhhhhhhhh

[defedated]

Every time I've praised your Youji, I've meant it 110%; I feel incredibly lucky to have had the opportunity to get you into sweet pool and to play with you, because you're absolutely awesome with him. You have an excellent grasp of his personality - not only the parts of him that translate directly from the canon, but also in the way his new circumstances would garner different reactions and develop him emotionally and psychologically, and when I play with him I feel like his reactions couldn't be more IC than they already are. You're doing an incredible job, and I honestly don't think any part of him could be better, it's so spot-on.

Thank you so much for the opportunity to play with you, bro.

[jared4subway]

Moot.

Darlingk.

You are so good with everyone you play. You can even do something that a lot of people struggle at - taking somewhat similar characters and not making them sound the same. Each character you've played has had their own unique, interesting voice and it's amazing to go from reading a Raidou thread in Amat to a Narumi thread in GnD. I don't know anything about Youji but I'm sure you handle his poop problem just as skilfully. Katsuya is, of course, perfect and hilarious and you are seriously the only Katsuya I can imagine playing with ever. Ever. I just want to thread with him more, and by more I mean all the time because words can't describe just how sugoi desu I get when we're threading.

You're fantastic and I love you.

[yoite]

FUCK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!

[yoite]

i mean i love you

>:|

[jared4subway]

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[yoite]