Concrit Post 3

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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[red_underthebed]

Wow, you play her everywhere. XD Just how many APH games are there? *knows only of aphdressingroom and smallerworld*

Belgium: Bella is the sweetest succubus Ivan has ever had the fortune of meeting, that's for sure. I will say, however, that Bella seems to be a little too random at times? I know crit about cruelty must sound strange coming from me, but I think she's occasionally mean in ways that either aren't called for or are too extreme for the country that she represents. The difference between sweet!Belgium and I-shoot-little-boys!Belgium is too large to be congruous, imho, and I'd suggest toning the fiery side of her down a notch or two. Of course, Bella is very much your character, more so than usual because I have no idea how she acts in canon, or if she has even appeared in it yet. So you are free to totally ignore me if you wish (though that is always an option). Er, I hope that didn't come across as a Grand Admonishment. If it does, you can kick me and get Italy to help you :'D

Holy Roman Empire: I like how you play him! He's boyish, cute, and appropriately prudish and shy when it comes to Chibitalia. I don't think there's anything that you need to change. If you made him any cuter, I'd probably get eye-cavities or something. XD

[luminousbeat]

There's quite a few though admittedly I didn't know about smallerworld till now and as far a I know I've... really joined most if not all of them on there. And the only reason I do play her everywhere is because, well, I like to try and inspire people to play her. Except I think I end up intimidating them.

Belgium: I'ma tone it down a bit, really. Since I've been experimenting at the different places, tryin' to find the right match. Ehhheheh. Thanks for the concrit on here ♥ I take it very much to heart.

Holy Roman Empire: EYE-CAVITIES ARE WHAT I AIM FOR, DEAR.