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Concrit Post 20

Sep 17, 2010 08:28

Getting things started a little early today! Enjoy.

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cleaves_fate September 17 2010, 13:35:04 UTC

cleaves_fate September 17 2010, 14:24:37 UTC

I hope you're able to get more done with Marta's intro, but from what I've seen from her in there and dollsy, I think you're doing all right. Her voice carries the right peppy, cheerful tone.

fangirls September 18 2010, 13:31:17 UTC

Ah, thank you anon! I'm very sorry for slacking on her intro post--as I told the anon below, I really have no excuse other than that I really didn't expect to get overwhelmed, but I would like to try and fix that in the future. ♥ If you're ever tagging with me and I'm being a slowpoke, please don't hesitate to poke me on AIM.

cleaves_fate September 17 2010, 21:18:27 UTC

I think you play your characters perfectly and I was severely impressed by their applications in Luceti. However, your activity is horrendous and I really hope you'll work to fix this. I don't know if this is just a temporary fluke, considering you've only been in the game for two weeks, but I am astounded it took you a full week to get back to those initial replies to Marta's intro post.

It's a real shame your characters aren't around more because like I said, you do have their voices down, but it's bordering on OOC for Marta not to notice that Emil is... kind of 'dead' right now.

fangirls September 18 2010, 13:27:58 UTC

Ah, thank you anon, both for the compliment and the crit! I'm glad that I'm doing alright when it comes to the matter of playing them. I do understand what you mean by the issue of activity as well. I wish I could say I have a good excuse for that, but really all it amounts to is that I'm not used to the pacing at Luceti; I've never played at a game that doesn't move at a snails's pace...or well, at least not for very long.

At the same, I know that doesn't excuse my inactivity and I do apologize if you're one of the people I'm tagging with. I do plan to try and pick up the pace.

Once again I do apologize; if you're ever in a thread with me and I'm being a slowpoke about it, please don't hesitate to poke me on AIM about it.

cleaves_fate September 18 2010, 19:22:51 UTC

Rereading my previous comment, I realized I didn't touch upon the issue of Marta not noticing the situation with Emil.

I am aware of that issue as well. I let that go for too long and I'll admit I was hoping I could get away with assuming that the reaction.gifs happened off screen if it came down to that; however, if you think it's a bad idea/too close to OOC territory then I'll definitely have to reconsider that one.

Once again thank you for your input. I'm being honest when I say that I really do appreciate it. ♥

cleaves_fate September 19 2010, 17:31:10 UTC

Oh, I can see where you're coming from. Luceti is terribly overwhelming at first. It is one of the largest games out there, at the moment. Plus, characters like Rena and Marta are the ones people are eager to play with, so it's not surprising they got such an enthusiastic welcome. Still, if you're susceptible to being overwhelmed, perhaps you shouldn't have immediately applied for two characters in the same application round. You could've gotten a feel for the game with just one character. Of course, it's too late to say something like that now. Both characters are in and the best thing to do now is finding a way to cope with Luceti's pace, because I'd hate to see you drop one of them. That's totally not what I mean ( ... )

cleaves_fate September 21 2010, 20:01:56 UTC

I did some searching for you, which I hope will help.

Sheena's character actually has a post asking about Emil on her journal, corrinesbell. Since it looks like the mun still has ongoing tags there, it might not be unreasonable to ask if Marta could backdate her replies. That way, you won't feel pressured into making a new post, with the intro still going.

fangirls September 22 2010, 12:47:30 UTC

I'm sorry this response is a bit late, but the weekend was unexpectedly hectic so this is the first time I've been able to really sit down at the computer since Friday.

Yeah, I'll admit that I should have thought it through instead of apping two on a whim. I think I have a bit better of an idea of what to expect now, so I'm going to try and make tweaks here and there so I can keep up with it better. Actually, I'm hoping to get caught up sometime within the next couple days--ideally tonight, but since I'm pretty tired from the long weekend, getting it done tomorrow evening is probably more likely.

Thank you very much for the suggestions as well. It's definitely helpful and I really appreciate your taking the time to write all of that out, so yes. You are kind of awesome. ♥

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