Concrit Post 20

[hmd_me]

Getting things started a little early today! Enjoy.

How's My Driving?∞ Comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from

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[wafflehearts]

@ campfuckudie
Aizawa Kouichi | (Nabari no Ou) immortowl
Schuldig | (Weiss Kreuz) youschuldblame
Rath Illuser | (Dragon Knights) killerofademon
Amasawa Chitose | (The Weatherman is My Lover) weatherfairy
Jo Carpenter | (Bakuretsu Tenshi) tsungunfire
Cyborg #18 | (Dragon Ball Z) pwntryinmotion
Eclipse | (Demon Diary) demonesticate
Shigeka Narushige | (Silver Diamond) koudependent
Ash | (The Tarot Café) odiousialist
Earth [Kirigi] | (Ark Angels) pandoraboxed
Kakei | (Legal Drug) pharmanoncon
Riddle | (Sougiya Riddle) withcondolences
Li Kouyuu | (Saiunkoku Monogatari) lostin30steps

@ stedelweiss
Kanda Yuu | (D.Gray-man) sobalicious

@ dirtyvegasrp
Ash | (The Tarot Café) invidciously

[imedicineseller]

I stalk your Ash so hard, you have no idea. JSYK. He's so spot-on and he makes my heart go dokidoki ;A; (Even if he is a brat.)

In all seriousness, though, rock on, brosis.

[odiousialist]

asjdkglfgjfh .//////////. Y-you really just made my day. Ash is one of my babiesssss and I'm always so nervous about screwing him up and aaaah /)_(\

THANK YOU ♥ ♥ Also someone who knows Tarot Café eeeeeh :D :D :D

[estnoir]

Related journal this time *__*);

Don't be nervous, you're doing great ♥

[dalmasca]

[at campfuckudie]
Vaan (stolemyshirt); Final Fantasy XII
Elliot Nightray (spoilerbrat); Pandora Hearts
Heiwajima Shizuo (vendingrage); Durarara!!
Noda (goesprematurely); Angel Beats!
Nago Keisuke (seigiseigiseigi); Kamen Rider Kiva

[at amatomnes (when I finish his icons)]
Rufus Barma (lustlore); Pandora Hearts

[gardien_de]

YOUR ELLIOT IS SO CUTE OKAY. I've read back through all his threads with his bff and he is a joy to read through.

>: oh yeah and bawww I wish I could stalk the PH cast at Amat hnngh.

[gardien_de]

Keep it up &hearts &hearts &hearts

I WANT TO STALK TOO but lmfao this is the only guy I can...think of....yeaksdhskfkskasd >:

[alwaysuserubber]

campfuckudie, holla!

Monkey D. Luffy, One Piece (alwaysuserubber)
Sokka, Avatar: The Last Airbender (o_sarchasm)
Mojo Jojo, The Powerpuff Girls (monologogo)
Flapjack, The Marvelous Misadventures of Flapjack (wesssssssssssst)

There's a screened, anonymous critpost in Luffy's journal, too, if you're shy. LET'S TANGO

[laserdragon]

I DON'T THINK LUFFY TALKS ABOUT POOP ENOUGH AND YOU SHOULD FEEL BAD

there i said it

[alwaysuserubber]

I'LL NEVER BE GOOD ENOUGH FOR YOU WILL I

[laserdragon]

MMMMMMNOPE, PRETTY MUCH NEVER.

[gallantgoggles]

@Discedo

Takato Matsuda and Guilmon | Digimon Tamers | gallantgoggles

Danny Fenton | Danny Phantom | invisibill

Will Stanton | The Dark is Rising | beyondimagining

[fromacoldplace]

skdjfhadslkjfhakdsj I LOVE YOUR WILL.

I mean. I cannot really say anything about the others, since I don't know their canons, but Will is pure win, and I think that you play the Old One in him extremely well.

(Takato and Danny are nice to interact with is all that I can say about them.)

[gallantgoggles]

kagafshd! Thank you! I am so worried about getting his voice down, so its great to hear that someone thinks he's doing it right. I keep feeling like I'm making him sound too old when he's not actually showing his inner Old One. But its such a lyrical way of speaking he has that he sounds old in comparison to all the more relaxed characters even when he isn't actually using a very advanced vocabulary.

I'm hoping to start moving on getting Takato and Danny more involved soon. Now that Danny has his chip removed and Takato is trying to get Guilmon's chip removed there are all kinds of new opportunities coming up.

[whatisnarva]

*nod* I see what you mean, but... Maybe you'd get a better feeling for the "boy" side of him if you actively tried to seek out characters with a more formal way of speaking, like Huey or the Master or England or and ...idk?

[cleaves_fate]

@luceti
Rena Ryuugu | Higurashi no Naku Koro ni | cleaves_fate
Marta Lualdi | Tales of Symphonia | fangirls

@thedollsyhouse
Mio Amakura | Fatal Frame | lingeringscent
Marta Lualdi | Tales of Symphonia | fangirls
Mafuyu Hinasaki | Fatal Frame | himurobound
Ange Ushiromiya | Umineko no Naku Koro ni | cagedfate

[cleaves_fate]

I hope you're able to get more done with Marta's intro, but from what I've seen from her in there and dollsy, I think you're doing all right. Her voice carries the right peppy, cheerful tone.

[fangirls]

Ah, thank you anon! I'm very sorry for slacking on her intro post--as I told the anon below, I really have no excuse other than that I really didn't expect to get overwhelmed, but I would like to try and fix that in the future. ♥ If you're ever tagging with me and I'm being a slowpoke, please don't hesitate to poke me on AIM.

[cleaves_fate]

I think you play your characters perfectly and I was severely impressed by their applications in Luceti. However, your activity is horrendous and I really hope you'll work to fix this. I don't know if this is just a temporary fluke, considering you've only been in the game for two weeks, but I am astounded it took you a full week to get back to those initial replies to Marta's intro post.

It's a real shame your characters aren't around more because like I said, you do have their voices down, but it's bordering on OOC for Marta not to notice that Emil is... kind of 'dead' right now.