A Note About IPOH Chapter 9...
A little note for anyone who read Chapter 9 of IPOH, for the sake of clarifying my very stupid mistake...
ETA: Okay, I think I was just worrying unduly about something so go ahead and scroll on past this :)
Hi guys :) I've realised I made a pretty big mistake with the last chapter of IPOH: in the final scene, the boys aren't meant to be making love, but just touching each other. I'm really so sorry if I confused you all...I was so focused on getting the atmosphere right in that scene that I didn't explain myself very well at all and my writing ended up a little bit too ambiguous. When people were kind enough to compliment that scene and referred to it as "lovemaking," I went back, read over it, and realised my error as it did read as though the boys were having sex (Then I commenced mentally kicking myself for being so stupid *blushes*) I've taken a little while to edit it and make it clearer, but the changes are very small so there's no need to re-read unless you'd like to :)
I have really specific plans for the first time the boys make love, which is why I decided I'd better clarify my writing and let you all know :) I know that some people don't mind if sex comes into a story early, and others like a long build up to it, and others have no preference...Wherever you fall, I really hope you aren't disappointed, and that you'll enjoy reading the IPOH sex scenes when they do start to appear.
Once again, I'm very sorry for my mistake!
Love Mia
ETA: Okay, I think I was just worrying unduly about something so go ahead and scroll on past this :)
Hi guys :) I've realised I made a pretty big mistake with the last chapter of IPOH: in the final scene, the boys aren't meant to be making love, but just touching each other. I'm really so sorry if I confused you all...I was so focused on getting the atmosphere right in that scene that I didn't explain myself very well at all and my writing ended up a little bit too ambiguous. When people were kind enough to compliment that scene and referred to it as "lovemaking," I went back, read over it, and realised my error as it did read as though the boys were having sex (Then I commenced mentally kicking myself for being so stupid *blushes*) I've taken a little while to edit it and make it clearer, but the changes are very small so there's no need to re-read unless you'd like to :)
I have really specific plans for the first time the boys make love, which is why I decided I'd better clarify my writing and let you all know :) I know that some people don't mind if sex comes into a story early, and others like a long build up to it, and others have no preference...Wherever you fall, I really hope you aren't disappointed, and that you'll enjoy reading the IPOH sex scenes when they do start to appear.
Once again, I'm very sorry for my mistake!
Love Mia