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Yeah this one is late. I'm sorry. Tomorrow's will be late as well as I'm leaving at 5 in the morning for a contest. I won't be back until maybe 7 so, yay.
OMFG AVATAR! Zuko looks better to me now. It also solved my own personal question of shaved or naturally bald. I laughed throughout the entire episode.
Title: I Walk Alone
Culprit Author's Name: Wolf of the Red Moon
Rating:
Full Name: Nightchild (WTF?)
Species: Wolf demon
Hair Color: "golden-blonde hair went down to her waist"
Eye Color: "dazzling yet deathly cold sapphire eyes"
Markings: Pretty much,extreme beauty
Possessions: A bucket full of angst
Origin: Makai, but we all know it to be the "Demon" portion of Hell
Connections to Canon: Meets Kurama and falls in love with him *palmface*
Special Abilities: Wolf-like abilities but nothing else mentioned
Pros: It could be interesting but I don't want to care long enough for that. The Suethor uses correct grammar and, most of the time, spelling.
Cons: The whole "fall in love" thing is working here. Also the buckets of angst that I really don't care about. Her name is just "What?" and the plot of her being banished makes me shake my head. It isn't really what a true demon clan would do in my mind, especially if this is set before the end of YYH. She's also just basically beautiful and it despises me.
Sue's Rating: 39
Sample:
"Nightchild… Night… NIGHT! It's time for you to get up! You can't snooze all day, bloody whelp!" Ah, poor whelp. Oh wait. It's a Sue Night really didn't want to wake up. The wolf youkai slowly managed to open her dazzling yet deathly cold sapphire eyes Godamn! No! to look up at a porcelain-skinned she-wolf youkai with emerald green eyes. She glared down at Nightchild, who was lying on the ground in one of the forests of Makai. The sun was high over head. It was one of those warm, sunny summer days. Yeah, problem is, it snever shines in the Makai Night sat up lazily and rubbed her eyes while her golden, black-tipped wolf ears trembled a few times and her tail flicked. It was gold and tipped in black like her ears. Wow. I've never seen a wolf that looks like that Her golden-blonde hair went down to her waist and she wore a cutoff black shirt and some baggy black pant. "Today is the day you're supposed to go to Ningenkai." The other she-wolf said.
"What? For what reason am I supposed to go to that vile, degrading place?" Night questioned with a chilling tone. Wow, she's an incredibly smart Sue She really didn't like Ningenkai and she detested ningens. They were all so… weird and abnormal. Yeah. We are, aren't we? Not to mention their habits were disgusting and their ways of life sucked. o.0" They had no admiration what so ever for nature… or one another for the matter. And In going to Ningenkai, it would put Nightchild right in the middle of humans and all the nastiness that went with them. Great. Here's your picture for the "My Life Sucks Ride!" Would you like a keychain as well?
"Do you not remember? No, enlighten us Leader ordered you to go to Ningenkai. You are supposed to leave because you don't get along with anyone else and you set every ones temper off… especially the leaders! *gasp* Not the leaders! Wait, if it's a wolf clan, then why are there leaders? Aren't there only two alphas? To add to that, you are getting way to strong for your own good Not that! and if you stay any longer you could do some major damage to the pack and anything else you come in contact with! *fake gasp* You have already managed to get someone KILLED! ...YAY! Violence! At least in Ningenkai the spirit detectives will be able to keep a close eye one you! ..WTF mate? Now go! And the leader says if you are to return, we are to hunt you down and slay you just like any other game we might come across." ...YAY! Violence again! The other practically yelled in her ear. So Night was a bit reckless and had a habit of starting fights and getting into trouble, but that was no reason to banish her from Makai was it? No, she should've been sent out into the wilderness of Makai because, well, I fear that more than Ningenkai Well… I guess it kind of was. No! No tense changes are allowed!
"Alright, alright, I get it already. I'm going." Night snarled as she picked herself up off the ground and brushed off her clothes. She gave the other she-wolf a sharp glare and turned, walking in the direction of the portal to the human world. Did the portal just pop in and go, "Hey! I'm the portal to Ningenkai! Jump right in!" She sighed once she got there. Man she really didn't want to go live with the human crazies. Yeah, we're awful. Why don't you stay in the Makai What the hell was she supposed to do once she was in Ningenkai anyway? It's not like she had any money or a place to sleep… Boohoo And the spirit detectives were going to be right on her heels all day, every day. Feh! Night silently stepped into the portal and disappeared into human world… never to return to Makai another time? Who knows? No one. She died on the way. The end.
OMFG AVATAR! Zuko looks better to me now. It also solved my own personal question of shaved or naturally bald. I laughed throughout the entire episode.
Title: I Walk Alone
Culprit Author's Name: Wolf of the Red Moon
Rating:
Full Name: Nightchild (WTF?)
Species: Wolf demon
Hair Color: "golden-blonde hair went down to her waist"
Eye Color: "dazzling yet deathly cold sapphire eyes"
Markings: Pretty much,extreme beauty
Possessions: A bucket full of angst
Origin: Makai, but we all know it to be the "Demon" portion of Hell
Connections to Canon: Meets Kurama and falls in love with him *palmface*
Special Abilities: Wolf-like abilities but nothing else mentioned
Pros: It could be interesting but I don't want to care long enough for that. The Suethor uses correct grammar and, most of the time, spelling.
Cons: The whole "fall in love" thing is working here. Also the buckets of angst that I really don't care about. Her name is just "What?" and the plot of her being banished makes me shake my head. It isn't really what a true demon clan would do in my mind, especially if this is set before the end of YYH. She's also just basically beautiful and it despises me.
Sue's Rating: 39
Sample:
"Nightchild… Night… NIGHT! It's time for you to get up! You can't snooze all day, bloody whelp!" Ah, poor whelp. Oh wait. It's a Sue Night really didn't want to wake up. The wolf youkai slowly managed to open her dazzling yet deathly cold sapphire eyes Godamn! No! to look up at a porcelain-skinned she-wolf youkai with emerald green eyes. She glared down at Nightchild, who was lying on the ground in one of the forests of Makai. The sun was high over head. It was one of those warm, sunny summer days. Yeah, problem is, it snever shines in the Makai Night sat up lazily and rubbed her eyes while her golden, black-tipped wolf ears trembled a few times and her tail flicked. It was gold and tipped in black like her ears. Wow. I've never seen a wolf that looks like that Her golden-blonde hair went down to her waist and she wore a cutoff black shirt and some baggy black pant. "Today is the day you're supposed to go to Ningenkai." The other she-wolf said.
"What? For what reason am I supposed to go to that vile, degrading place?" Night questioned with a chilling tone. Wow, she's an incredibly smart Sue She really didn't like Ningenkai and she detested ningens. They were all so… weird and abnormal. Yeah. We are, aren't we? Not to mention their habits were disgusting and their ways of life sucked. o.0" They had no admiration what so ever for nature… or one another for the matter. And In going to Ningenkai, it would put Nightchild right in the middle of humans and all the nastiness that went with them. Great. Here's your picture for the "My Life Sucks Ride!" Would you like a keychain as well?
"Do you not remember? No, enlighten us Leader ordered you to go to Ningenkai. You are supposed to leave because you don't get along with anyone else and you set every ones temper off… especially the leaders! *gasp* Not the leaders! Wait, if it's a wolf clan, then why are there leaders? Aren't there only two alphas? To add to that, you are getting way to strong for your own good Not that! and if you stay any longer you could do some major damage to the pack and anything else you come in contact with! *fake gasp* You have already managed to get someone KILLED! ...YAY! Violence! At least in Ningenkai the spirit detectives will be able to keep a close eye one you! ..WTF mate? Now go! And the leader says if you are to return, we are to hunt you down and slay you just like any other game we might come across." ...YAY! Violence again! The other practically yelled in her ear. So Night was a bit reckless and had a habit of starting fights and getting into trouble, but that was no reason to banish her from Makai was it? No, she should've been sent out into the wilderness of Makai because, well, I fear that more than Ningenkai Well… I guess it kind of was. No! No tense changes are allowed!
"Alright, alright, I get it already. I'm going." Night snarled as she picked herself up off the ground and brushed off her clothes. She gave the other she-wolf a sharp glare and turned, walking in the direction of the portal to the human world. Did the portal just pop in and go, "Hey! I'm the portal to Ningenkai! Jump right in!" She sighed once she got there. Man she really didn't want to go live with the human crazies. Yeah, we're awful. Why don't you stay in the Makai What the hell was she supposed to do once she was in Ningenkai anyway? It's not like she had any money or a place to sleep… Boohoo And the spirit detectives were going to be right on her heels all day, every day. Feh! Night silently stepped into the portal and disappeared into human world… never to return to Makai another time? Who knows? No one. She died on the way. The end.