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Mar 23, 2006 20:12

I really want to know how people can be so ignorant. A person contacts someone they've never met and asks them to buy pirated material for a cheap price. Who is that stupid? Well, apparently someone who asked me to buy it.
I swear, how can you do that to a fandom you love and not care about what happens to the series because of this? I might save some money but if the show is cancelled, how do I benefit from it? I would never forgive myself if the show is forced to cancel because it isn't making enough money to continue because of piracy. Would you like to know the fandom?

Poor Avatar. Nick already wants to get rid of it, piracy is a good reason too. I hate people who think that "just because others do it and don't get caught, maybe I should." That never works. You're more likely to get caught because you're being so ignorant and moronic.

Then she responds saying that sharing music and TV shows shouldn't be a crime. Well, it isn't if you're giving it for free. It is if you're making money off of it, moron. It's called piracy and it's every TV show creator's worst nightmare.

I feel like crap today because of this and a whole other mess of issues so enjoy this half-assed report.

Title: The Queen of the Underworld

Culprit Author's Name: Eleneld

Rating:


Full Name: Queen Eleneld
Species: Darkness demon
Hair Color: "raven black; it went to her shoulders"
Eye Color: "pale blue color"
Markings: Probably a Jagan eye since she's a Hiei clone
Possessions: Hiei's soul and looks. Also, a dog demon named I.d. o.0"

Origin: Clone part of Hell
Connections to Canon: Fights our boys because she's a mass murderer. Luckily, Hiei wins but he falls in love with her

Special Abilities: Probably like Shadowbenders over at avatarsues

Pros: No giant text blocks of doom, no bold writing, could be a good storyline.

Cons: Okay, she's the Queen of the Underworld which, in my mind, means she's the Queen of the Mekai. She's arrgoant and acts too Sueish to bear. The story has random commas after dialogue and OOC characters run amok. In itself, it's boring as hell and a giant snorefest. Fangirl Japanese is suddenly running around and italics are randomly used.

Sue's Rating: 49

Sample: I feel like crap so it's unedited
"There are two mass murderers in Human World. And they are not human.", Koenma said. He was in his toddler form and he looked very annoyed. The spirit detectives were listening to his speech.," And these are what they look like..."

A profile appeared on the big screen. A short woman appeared

On it. Her hair was a raven black; it went to her shoulders. Her eyes were a pale blue color. She had a headband on her forehead.

"Her name is Eleneld-san. She is one of the mass murderers. She is a darkness demon. Age unknown. Looks like she's 15. Her only weapon known is a kanta.", Koenma went on.

"A girl? No way. Wait... doesn’t she look kinda like ...", Yusuke said. He was leaning close to the screen to get a better look.

Kuwabara and Kurama glanced at Hiei. Yusuke started to laugh quietly.

"What is it, you stupid human?", Hiei spat. He was trying to ignore all of them. Including Koenma.

"It is weird, isn't it?", Kurama replied calmly. Kuwabara nodded.

"How tall is she?", Yusuke asked Koenma.

"About 4'9", why?", He asked. He also getting annoyed that they weren't listening.

"HAH! She's exactly like Hiei-kun.", Yusuke said.

Hiei left the room muttering," Like me? No one's like me."

"Also she's the queen of the UnderWorld.", Koenma said sternly , "We can't get any info on her partner. But she's at the Docks # 55."

"Okay, lets finish this.", Yusuke said running out of the door with Kuwabara.

"Kurama-san. I think Hiei-san shouldn't know about who she really is. He might just side with her on this one. ", Koenma said before Kurama left. He nodded.

At the Docks

"Hello? Anyone here?", Yusuke yelled into the empty building.

The group walked into the middle of it. The time was about 1:00 in the morning. Crates and boxes hid the walls.

"Hmph. I guess we can go.", Hiei said. He started to head out of the door.

"Hai, I guess. But where is she?", Kuwabara said.

Just then a figure stepped in Hiei, blocking his path. It was Eleneld. Her partner in crime was beside her. It was a woman. She had black waist length hair and yellow piercing eyes. Most of her bangs covered her face.

"My-my-my. Who do we have here?", Eleneld said. She was dressed in black pants and a black tank. Kinda like Hiei's clothes.

"My name is Yusuke Urameshi . And we are the Spirit Detectives.", he said throwing a punch at her. She dodged him

As if it was nothing. Then she kicked him in the ribs. It sent him flying into the wall of the building.

"D-",he started before a pile of metal came down upon him.

"You are such a fool.", she said smirking. Her sharp teeth glistened.

Kurama got out his whip as Hiei got out his kanta.

"Oh. Two demon pretty boys.", Eleneld said. She blew a kiss at them.

Hiei scowled, but seemed to get abit red in the cheeks.

Kuwabara stayed back. "I can't hit girls it's in my code. ", he said.

"Your mercy won't help you live.", Eleneld's partner said," Let me introduce myself. I'm I.d., A dog demon."

"I'll take the poser .You take the dog.", Hiei said to Kurama.

He nodded. Hiei dashed towards Eleneld. She blocked his sword attack with her own kanta.
"I was looking forward to this.", she said. She suddenly felt a pain in her side. Hiei had slit her .

"Dammit.", she cussed aloud. Although the pain her expression showed happiness and excitement.

Hiei smirked.

"You can't beat me.", He said.

"Wanna bet?"

“Yes."
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