Re: A Game for Two [3/3]
anonymous
February 10 2011, 10:15:06 UTC
Incoherent babble: HOLY SHIT THAT WAS LIKE THE HOTTEST FUCKING THING EVER I JUST CAN'T EVEN KLDRJTSDKLGJZSDKGSKJGHSDFJSDCMVDSKLJ
Semi-coherent praise: Let me just say that I love this kink, and you pulled it off perfectly. Even before you got to the watersports, the dialogue set the scene perfectly, and it was so well-done and in character that I fell in love just from reading a few lines of it.
I love the fact that they were roleplaying the Cold War, and afterwards they both acted sweet and got cleaned up together. America reciprocating at the end was amazing, too. And how did you know my other kinks were for America calling his partner "babe" and just generally saying things like "I owe you blowjobs for that"? (This is actually the second watersports fill in which he's said that after his partner played into his fetish, and, oh yes, another of my fetishes is for America to have his partners play into his watersports fetish, you mind-reader).
All in all, this was an amazing story, and if you've written/are planning to write any more like it, I'd love to see. Stay awesome, anon.
Semi-coherent praise: Let me just say that I love this kink, and you pulled it off perfectly. Even before you got to the watersports, the dialogue set the scene perfectly, and it was so well-done and in character that I fell in love just from reading a few lines of it.
I love the fact that they were roleplaying the Cold War, and afterwards they both acted sweet and got cleaned up together. America reciprocating at the end was amazing, too. And how did you know my other kinks were for America calling his partner "babe" and just generally saying things like "I owe you blowjobs for that"? (This is actually the second watersports fill in which he's said that after his partner played into his fetish, and, oh yes, another of my fetishes is for America to have his partners play into his watersports fetish, you mind-reader).
All in all, this was an amazing story, and if you've written/are planning to write any more like it, I'd love to see. Stay awesome, anon.
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