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Au Naturel [part 4/??] anonymous January 21 2011, 03:11:31 UTC
America holds on as best as he could, shuddering deeply as France kisses a trail down his stomach, over his navel, nuzzling fondly at the last traces of belly fat that hours of jogging and sit-ups were not able to fully eradicate. The gesture makes America flail a bit, cheeks heating up as he sheepishly admits, “All right, I get it, I need to lose a few more pounds. Or kilos, whatever.”

“Oh, I think you are perfect like this, America. However, if you still want to lose some weight, I could show you the benefits of the French diet… again,” France suggests, his smile bright and amused.

“Yeah, I know you would love that.” The French diet, if one could seriously call it a diet, worked fantastic, but only as long as he was doing it with France, and even then, it would require multiple sessions before America felt like he was making any progress. In fact, there weren’t enough hours in the day for how many sessions they would have to do in order for him to lose weight in a reasonable amount of time - he had calculated everything out himself, and the number was ginormous. But America had felt that they could always try as much as they can, because really, every little bit helps.

Flashing France a crooked grin, America reaches out and threads his fingers through the long hair, scratching at his scalp as France purrs contentedly under the ministrations. He rubs his cheek against America’s stomach, still purring, until America can feel the vibrations through his skin, and he is torn between laughing and groaning. It’s always like this with France, he thinks, and he can never make up his mind what to do.

With a blissful sigh, America sinks back into the pillows while France presses his fingers over the front of his boxers, lightly, teasingly.

“Oh God, France, more, please…”

France indulges him by sliding his boxers down gently, down off his legs, and as soon as his erection is freed, it is promptly engulfed in a hot mouth, causing America to nearly bite his tongue off from the shock. Backing off, France leans over and laves the shaft with a skillful tongue, before wrapping his lips around the head and sucking at the drops of precum beading there. Eyelids lowered, he then takes America’s cock easily and fully into his mouth with a heartfelt appreciation he rarely shows in public these days.

America grasps blindly for France, and his toes curl tightly into the sheets. His throat has become hoarse from the frantic moans tumbling from his lips as France pleasures him with his usual finesse, and each time France’s stubbled chin scrapes against his inner thighs, he feels another jolt bringing him ever closer to orgasm.

Normally he wouldn’t refuse such awesome oral, but right now he badly needs to feel more of France, more than what he is currently being allowed. He finally catches a handful of France’s hair and with superhuman resolve, carefully pulls him back and away. France looks up at him questioningly, lips shiny and plump from his work, and grinning madly, America maneuvers him onto his back, pinning his wrists to the bed.

“Ah, so soon?” France purrs in mock surprise as America flops onto him gleefully. The weight does knock the breath out of him, but France could not complain, as that would be terribly gauche and ruin the mood. America doesn’t say anything, just rubs himself against France’s length, slowly but vigorously, indulging his need to touch and feel such glorious French body hair all at once, until his neurons nearly short-circuit from the sensual overload.

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Au Naturel [part 5/5] anonymous January 21 2011, 03:15:08 UTC
Separating himself from the other just enough, America grabs at France’s hand and moves it down between them with a desperate urgency. Instinctively, their fingers slide and stroke over hot slick skin, America pumping away hard while France teases and toys with the overly sensitive tip of his cock.

America comes after only a few strokes, crying out in relief and shuddering hard as he empties himself messily. Only a little bit afterwards, France joins him, sighing in satisfaction. Groaning quietly, America rolls onto his side, panting as hard as if he had run a marathon. When he finally is able to speak, he tries to say thanks, but France shushes him with a kiss, long and tender. They break the kiss only because they do not want to suffocate, yet even as they recover, they continue to press their lips together again and again, unable to stop.

“W-wow…” America eventually says, needing to fill up the silence with something more than the sound of lips meeting lips. He feels that isn’t enough to describe the experience and adds, “That was… just… wow.”

Accustomed to his love-making skills leaving even the most talkative of his partners speechless, France smiles in acknowledgement. America likes to cuddle after sex, so he lets himself be embraced within those muscular arms, and even though they are sticky and sweaty and he could really use a cigarette or a glass of wine, France closes his eyes instead, enjoying the moment. As he is about to doze off, he hears America whisper in a tiny voice.

“Love you.”

He would answer, je t’aime, but he needs to sleep and regain his energy, because he knows what his darling boy would say next.

“…Can we do it again?”

[Thank you anons so much for your comments! I happen to love body hair myself, and I am ecstatic I was able to convince a few of you that France's body hair may be a little sexy in its special way. I hope OP was okay with this being a little funny, I can't help myself with these two sometimes. /runs away smiling]

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Re: Au Naturel [part 5/5] anonymous January 21 2011, 07:14:02 UTC
you should be very proud anon. I usually dislike body hair alot. But some how you made me like hairy France. I think you may have changed my whole outlook on body hair. Hopefully I'll remember this later and not go for that bikini wax.

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Re: Au Naturel [part 5/5] anonymous January 22 2011, 01:53:33 UTC
I'm glad you like the fic and have accepted body hair, especially France's, into your life.

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Re: Au Naturel [part 5/5] anonymous January 21 2011, 23:09:17 UTC
<3<3<3<3<3<3<3 Oh, anon. That was ridiculously hot AND so beautiful that I'm getting teary-eyed. I love the descriptions, both visual and sensual. And btw, I'm smiling too.

I rather like body hair too. =3= But even more than that I'm annoyed by how much it's shunned nowadays. Seriously, it's just SILLY. It's just hair, people!

And why is France the only one who has it? Why are all Hetalia guys like prepubertal boys?

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Re: Au Naturel [part 5/5] anonymous January 22 2011, 01:58:28 UTC
Thank you so much, I am smiling that you're smiling!

I do love some manly body hair. I know it's not to everybody's taste, but I don't care, it's just so gloriously manly.

Oh anon, France isn't the only one, I'm pretty sure Cuba has body hair! But yeah, I think that's it...

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Re: Au Naturel [part 5/5] anonymous January 22 2011, 00:02:55 UTC
Author!Anon, this was wonderful!

“Love you.”

He would answer, je t’aime, but he needs to sleep and regain his energy, because he knows what his darling boy would say next.

“…Can we do it again?”

It's so America! And it's so France! And ILthem under any circumstances but you just pulled this off so well.

...also, unf.

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Re: Au Naturel [part 5/5] anonymous January 22 2011, 01:54:11 UTC
Thank you so much, I love hearing that I sort of got them in character. I'm glad you enjoyed!

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Re: Au Naturel [part 5/5] anonymous January 23 2011, 10:34:42 UTC
OP is utterly thrilled by this whole fill! Thank you oh so very much! I was sure to begin with that France's body hair was sexy, and by the end I was a melted little pool of lust. You made my week authoranon! LOVE!

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Re: Au Naturel [part 5/5] anonymous January 23 2011, 19:23:11 UTC
I am so glad you were able to read this, OP! I had a lot of fun writing it, and nothing makes me happier than to hear that you enjoyed it!

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Re: Au Naturel [part 5/5] anonymous January 23 2011, 14:30:50 UTC
Consider me converted. I wish there was more of this well-characterized happy FrUS around. Beautiful, sexy and funny, excellent work ^^

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Re: Au Naturel [part 5/5] anonymous January 23 2011, 19:23:48 UTC
Thank you, I am happy to hear that people like how I characterized them! I really appreciate the comment.

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