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Anything Goes: USUK, AU based loosely on Chobits (I Can't Stop Loving You) [1d/??] anonymous December 18 2010, 21:03:16 UTC
“Huh? O-oh! Your name, yes,” he fumbled over himself while James snickered at him. Finally he composed himself and leaned down so they were face to face. “Your name is Alfred. Do you like it?”

He seemed to think it over, mouthing it. At last his face lit up and he laughed happily. “Alfred. I love it! Thank you, Arthur.”

Oh yes, Arthur was a completely lost cause. And he was never happier. In fact, he was quite ecstatic about it for awhile, even after Erin and Rhys came home and spotted Alfred. Then again, both of them seemed as charmed as James and barely teased him about getting a child laptop. Even when he took Alfred with him to work, he remained happy. Alfred charmed everyone he met, and only few people tried to tease Arthur for him. He was just so damn adorable. He was a constant fixture in Arthur’s life, following him everywhere he went, mostly riding on Arthur’s shoulders or in his arms, cuddled up to his neck. When Arthur went to sleep at night, Alfred begged to be tucked in with him and every morning he would wake Arthur with a cheerful “good morning, Arthur! Are you ready for another day?” When Arthur moved into a new apartment, Alfred had tried his best to help him drag things in and set up furniture. Whenever Arthur wasn’t using him to research or call someone, Alfred played near Arthur’s feet with the toys Arthur couldn’t help but buy for him.

Arthur was completely besotted by his little laptop, his little boy. And Alfred returned those affections, completely and without strings. It probably didn’t say anything good that one of Arthur’s best relationships was with a robot, but he couldn’t bring himself to care.

He loved him right up until the day, six years later, when Arthur rolled over in bed, two hours late to work, only to find Alfred lying, worn out and nonfunctioning, beside him.

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Charlotte : Monaco
James: Scotland
Rhys: Wales
Erin: Ireland

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Re: Anything Goes: USUK, AU based loosely on Chobits (I Can't Stop Loving You) [1d/??] anonymous December 18 2010, 21:16:26 UTC
Good lord, I don't even like Chobits, but this is too intriguing to pass over. <3 But oh god, the cliffhanger chapter ending, nooooooooo. XD

I'm so glad you said who Charlotte was; I could figure everyone else out easily, but for some reason I always forget who Monaco is ... OTL

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Re: Anything Goes: USUK, AU based loosely on Chobits (I Can't Stop Loving You) [1d/??] anonymous December 18 2010, 21:25:45 UTC
I remember a Video Girl AI AU for USUK! Maybe it's that one? But Chobits AU sounds like it's probably been requested before so you're likely right ;

D: What happened to Alfred? I love the Chobits universe so much and this is shaping out to be so adorable so far looking forward to more anon!

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Re: Anything Goes: USUK, AU based loosely on Chobits (I Can't Stop Loving You) [1d/??] anonymous December 18 2010, 21:28:41 UTC
oh hah wha\t. This wasn't meant to be a comment based off of the one above mine. Sorry about that it just kinda looks like it

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Author!anon anonymous December 18 2010, 21:45:12 UTC
I don't think so. Thank you for the comment though.

Alas, computers don't last forever, even if they're shaped like adorable toddlers. The coming chapters will go into more detail.

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Re: Author!anon anonymous December 19 2010, 14:07:38 UTC
I really enjoyed your take on this prompt! :D

Though, I have a question: Will this be shota? I hope not, because I can't stand shota at all x___x;

I hope Arthur will be able to transfer Alfred's data to an adult model, eheh @w@;

Looking forward to reading more! ^^

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Author!anon anonymous December 19 2010, 17:58:51 UTC
I promise, no shota. That's a fairly strong squick for me, although in my notes, sex with a laptop isn't usually possible as they're built like barbie dolls. Companions, which are built to look like adults, however are pretty much made with this in mind which is why there's a stigma about owning one.

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Re: Author!anon anonymous December 23 2010, 06:20:03 UTC
*the anon of the comment*

sorry about the major typos on my comment before. Ahh okay, the way I read the Video Girl AI prompt was kind of similar, so I thought that might have been it.

And that sounds really interesting and I definitely need to catch up on this fic. <3

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Re: Anything Goes: USUK, AU based loosely on Chobits (I Can't Stop Loving You) [1d/??] anonymous December 20 2010, 23:46:12 UTC
About the chobits au prompt there might have been one. If there was then it was filled, I read it. Your taking a much different approach than the other one and it's very good. I'm excited to see where you take this:)

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