Re: Multiple/Canada & Canada/Fem!America If U Seek Alfred17a/?
anonymous
October 29 2010, 03:52:34 UTC
Canada turned back and continued to focus solely on England, only barely hearing the clank of the chains in the background. The clear precome continued to pool in the stretched foreskin, causing it to start to balloon out just slightly and Canada moaned, the barest rush of endorphins from the injury, the throbbing sting turning him on even more. His nipples were still hard even though his body was hot as hell and not cold, and he let his fingers trail from his lips back to over his cheek to tuck another errant bit of hair behind his ear leaving a wicked red trail just tempting England to get up and lick it off. His eyes were bright and he finally released the foreskin, slowly drawing it back letting the copious sticky fluid spill into his hand, some drizzling through his fingers onto the floor between his spread legs.
“I love it when you’re inside me, daddy,” he panted out to England as he stroked his cock, making it nice and wet, running his fingers beneath the foreskin over his cockhead, caressing and teasing more sticky clear fluid from the slit. England took another puff of the pipe, his hand only trembling slightly as he held the bowl. The show, only for him, was so damn sexually charge and bloody hell if he didn’t just want to bend the little cocktease- he still thought of Canada as little even standing over him- over the desk and fuck him til he couldn’t remember his own name. Ah, but that was the biggest part of their game after all, the build up, the steady excruciating climb until Canada was sobbing, his entire body shaking with need as he begged “daddy” to do anything to bring him off. He was looking a right mess now, in fact. Yes, Matthew, you’re doing a fine job. Keep going until you can’t stand it and maybe when you beg me nicely enough daddy will bend you over that table and fuck that sweet arse so Alfred can see exactly why you come for me when I bloody tell you and not for him. “Show me,” England ordered and to the rest of them, his voice hadn’t lost its crisp composure but Canada could hear the faint ragged traces around the edge.
England didn’t care who the hell was looking right now as he continued to rub at the heavy ache of his cock. Let them look. Let the fucking frog talk about his sexual deviance, that french lush only wished he could get himself off so easily. Let America watch his brother too as Canada sat down on the desk, laid back, and spread those long muscular legs wide open to give England and the rest a perfect view of that tight, inviting hole. England loved fucking him like that. He loved gripping the milky baby soft skin of Canada’s inner thighs until there were bruises as he fucked him breathless. And oh how the little bugger knew, his hands, left sticky, right bloodied, both slid oh so slowly across his knees, to his outer thighs covered with only a sparse dusting of light blonde hair, to the inviting and so fucking tempting smooth skin. God those hands moved so damn slowly, but England could see him squeeze, hear him moan as the sensitive nerves picked up every caress, every scrape of nails and he realized that Canada was mirroring the languid and steady motion of England’s own hand perfectly and that thought alone made him give that fucking throbbing ache an extra hard squeeze. Mmm, you remember just how daddy does it, don’t you?
Re: Multiple/Canada & Canada/Fem!America If U Seek Alfred17b/?
anonymous
October 29 2010, 03:55:13 UTC
His thighs stained and dirtied beautifully, Canada brought his left hand up again, licking his own salty essence up greedily, making sure to wet his fingers until they were practically dripping with slick saliva. He sat up supporting himself with one arm, the muscles of his stomach tense and trembling even so but God he wanted so badly to watch England watching him as those wet fingers stole down between his spread legs. His middle finger circle the tight opening and he held his lower lip between his teeth until it turned white. He could see England hand rubbing at the bulge in his pants and it made his mouth so fucking dry just thinking about his cock, sliding between his lips, sliding into his ass and- Dammit, you’re going to draw it out like you always do, aren’t you? Oh God maybe Ludwig should’ve only given you twenty minutes ‘cause I don’t think I can take it today… Not with Al watching… I don’t know why that makes a different but just knowing he’s there, even if I don’t look at him it just makes me so- “Matthew,” England warned him at first sight of the distant expression, that emerald gaze hard. “Focus.” His smile was wicked as he teased, “or is daddy going to have to punish you?”
I’m vaguely embarrassed to have written this, but who am I kidding? It was fun and It’s only getting filthier from here... C&C is always welcome :)
Re: Multiple/Canada & Canada/Fem!America If U Seek Alfred17b/?
anonymous
October 29 2010, 06:52:35 UTC
I don't know how I'm possibly supposed to give you an intelligent critique. It's not just the content. You're style flows so effortlessly. And I can't believe it but I feel bad for Al. I was so angry with him, but maybe Mattie's a little at fault too for pushing Al away. It's weird to feel the desire to cry when reading hot smut. It's an emotional rollercoaster that's sexy all the way hehe Thanks for updating.
Re: Multiple/Canada & Canada/Fem!America If U Seek Alfred17b/?
anonymous
October 30 2010, 03:31:20 UTC
Thanks for commenting and reading. (You and everyone else ^^) I'm glad this part worked for being emotional in all directions, everything seemed to come together well this time. I'll probably continue along a similar vein so the relationships with everyone are more fleshed out and explained so more smut and a little more emotional stuff too so at the risk of sounding crass, keep the tissues handy for multiple uses, haha.
And yeah, although America is good at making himself look bad, Canada definitely has contributed a lot more to this problem than we've seen, and I actually think this is leaning more and more towards an ACE ending but we'll see.
Re: Multiple/Canada & Canada/Fem!America If U Seek Alfred17b/?
anonymous
October 29 2010, 17:37:48 UTC
Embarrassed? That was freakin HOT. I wish the porn fics where more like this one, in this fic, I can actually believe that guys are having sex with guys, they think, behave and speak like guys. And England is making me SO.DAMNED.HOT, wow, I didn't know I shared the pipe thing (plus, daddy kinks are always tremendously arousing *fap fap*) I hope we get some blowjob action. I love it
Let me tell you that I'm looking forward to Russia's part the most, after this. For many reasons, among those, the fact that he has something to say all the time, the fact that he will in part do it to piss America off and not just for Matt's sake, and the fact that he has a huge dick, maybe the only one that can make Al feel not-so-high-above-you (being the teen that he is, he places a lot of importance on that, after allXD). I also like that he will probably be rough, because rough sex is awesome, and you demonstrated how well you write it in the prequel. But please, let there be no rapetruck Russia; not even "let himself get carried away slightly violently" Russia. *whimpers*
Re: Multiple/Canada & Canada/Fem!America If U Seek Alfred17b/? author!anon
anonymous
October 30 2010, 03:51:08 UTC
That was me responding to the other comment too, I'm just terrible about remembering to put it...
And fear not, there will be no rapetruck Russia although yes the sex while happily consensual definitely will not be a well ordered and precise execution of pain and dominance like this part is, it will most certainly be messy and rough. The reason Canada made such a selection of parties to have sex with was to showcase to America the different aspects to his male self as a sexual being.
(And Austria while well intentioned has made a grievous error as far as a "therapist" would be concerned in that he's only taken in one side of this story and taken it at face value *tsks*. [Also, yes Prussia is right, he really does want to see Canada get fucked by both Germans]. On that note France might make an appearance in some way shape or form, though not a sexual one.)
And yeah, daddy!england is seriously doing happy things for me as well. I do have a definite idea in mind for the tone/theme for subsequent encounters- I think America will shock people (hopefully in a good way but I'm aware a lot of people don't share my kinks)
Google "Ashley Sage Ellison" if you don't mind being spoiled/having your illusions shattered where this incarnation of fem!America is concerned...
“I love it when you’re inside me, daddy,” he panted out to England as he stroked his cock, making it nice and wet, running his fingers beneath the foreskin over his cockhead, caressing and teasing more sticky clear fluid from the slit. England took another puff of the pipe, his hand only trembling slightly as he held the bowl. The show, only for him, was so damn sexually charge and bloody hell if he didn’t just want to bend the little cocktease- he still thought of Canada as little even standing over him- over the desk and fuck him til he couldn’t remember his own name. Ah, but that was the biggest part of their game after all, the build up, the steady excruciating climb until Canada was sobbing, his entire body shaking with need as he begged “daddy” to do anything to bring him off. He was looking a right mess now, in fact. Yes, Matthew, you’re doing a fine job. Keep going until you can’t stand it and maybe when you beg me nicely enough daddy will bend you over that table and fuck that sweet arse so Alfred can see exactly why you come for me when I bloody tell you and not for him.
“Show me,” England ordered and to the rest of them, his voice hadn’t lost its crisp composure but Canada could hear the faint ragged traces around the edge.
England didn’t care who the hell was looking right now as he continued to rub at the heavy ache of his cock. Let them look. Let the fucking frog talk about his sexual deviance, that french lush only wished he could get himself off so easily. Let America watch his brother too as Canada sat down on the desk, laid back, and spread those long muscular legs wide open to give England and the rest a perfect view of that tight, inviting hole. England loved fucking him like that. He loved gripping the milky baby soft skin of Canada’s inner thighs until there were bruises as he fucked him breathless. And oh how the little bugger knew, his hands, left sticky, right bloodied, both slid oh so slowly across his knees, to his outer thighs covered with only a sparse dusting of light blonde hair, to the inviting and so fucking tempting smooth skin. God those hands moved so damn slowly, but England could see him squeeze, hear him moan as the sensitive nerves picked up every caress, every scrape of nails and he realized that Canada was mirroring the languid and steady motion of England’s own hand perfectly and that thought alone made him give that fucking throbbing ache an extra hard squeeze. Mmm, you remember just how daddy does it, don’t you?
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“Matthew,” England warned him at first sight of the distant expression, that emerald gaze hard. “Focus.” His smile was wicked as he teased, “or is daddy going to have to punish you?”
I’m vaguely embarrassed to have written this, but who am I kidding? It was fun and It’s only getting filthier from here... C&C is always welcome :)
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*fapfapfap*
Excuse me, I'll come back and give you some useful comments after I'm done in my bunk...
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Thanks for updating.
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And yeah, although America is good at making himself look bad, Canada definitely has contributed a lot more to this problem than we've seen, and I actually think this is leaning more and more towards an ACE ending but we'll see.
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I hope we get some blowjob action. I love it
Let me tell you that I'm looking forward to Russia's part the most, after this. For many reasons, among those, the fact that he has something to say all the time, the fact that he will in part do it to piss America off and not just for Matt's sake, and the fact that he has a huge dick, maybe the only one that can make Al feel not-so-high-above-you (being the teen that he is, he places a lot of importance on that, after allXD). I also like that he will probably be rough, because rough sex is awesome, and you demonstrated how well you write it in the prequel. But please, let there be no rapetruck Russia; not even "let himself get carried away slightly violently" Russia. *whimpers*
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And fear not, there will be no rapetruck Russia although yes the sex while happily consensual definitely will not be a well ordered and precise execution of pain and dominance like this part is, it will most certainly be messy and rough. The reason Canada made such a selection of parties to have sex with was to showcase to America the different aspects to his male self as a sexual being.
(And Austria while well intentioned has made a grievous error as far as a "therapist" would be concerned in that he's only taken in one side of this story and taken it at face value *tsks*. [Also, yes Prussia is right, he really does want to see Canada get fucked by both Germans]. On that note France might make an appearance in some way shape or form, though not a sexual one.)
And yeah, daddy!england is seriously doing happy things for me as well. I do have a definite idea in mind for the tone/theme for subsequent encounters- I think America will shock people (hopefully in a good way but I'm aware a lot of people don't share my kinks)
Google "Ashley Sage Ellison" if you don't mind being spoiled/having your illusions shattered where this incarnation of fem!America is concerned...
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Uh, real comment later when my brains return. *A*
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