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Re: Whatever it Takes 5/? anonymous October 21 2010, 19:25:25 UTC
"Why?" Arthur could see his King die, could see his future Queen burn, his people torn, and dead, thrown into the cold earth alive. Himself, swallowed whole and fading away into nothing. If Alfred joined Ludwig, it would be over. It would be the end.

(Where was his namesake? Was this not the darkest hour?)

The German armies were all but salting the lands they took. With every step they got closer and closer to his shores, and once they could reach him, there would be no mercy. His royals would die, his people would burn and he would go with them. They'd fight, oh they'd fight. His people were proud and strong, but eventually the night would come and then they'd go kicking and screaming into it.

Europe would fall beneath Ludwig and Gilbert. Maybe Russia might hold them back with General Winter, but Europe would fall. He could only hope that eventually, they'd run into Japan, who was slaughtering his way West and then all of them would kill each other.

Alfred looked at him. "What do I care for Europe? All your stupid, little, petty fights." He sneered. "Alls they do is boil over and take entire generations out. I've lost enough for you."

"Besides," he snorted, "The latest offer was rather compelling."

Arthur knew he shouldn't ask but had to anyways. He had to know what was driving Alfred (Hero Alfred) to dance with the devil under a new moon. Where had the hero gone? "What did he offer?"

London was still burning, it would burn for hours yet, though it felt as if the bombs were gone. There were dead in London, burned, crushed, dead of terror - he could still taste the blood in his mouth and feel the ache in his chest. Something pinched and bled - St Clemens Danes crumbled to the ground, throwing fire and molten stone everywhere, and his people were caught in the aftermath.

"You. He offered me you."

Arthur jerked back to the here and now instead of the there and now.

"Imagine that. He offers me you. To sweeten the deal of course," Alfred must have seen his jerk backwards. "Said he thinks perhaps the British Empire ought to feel how the colonies felt for a bit, and well, according to Gilbert, I'm the best one for it."

Arthur wanted to throw up, but there was naught but tea and blood in his stomach. Alfred was smiling at him as he stood in front of the chair he was sitting in. Those blue eyes were as cold as ice as they studied him like a pinned butterfly. "I control Matt, get him out of his hair, so to speak, I get you. All English pride and all. All mine."

He watched, silent and suddenly terrified for his life, his people, his land (his Princess). "And oh, Arthur, what I could do to you."

He was really regretting everything right now.

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Re: Whatever it Takes 5/? anonymous October 21 2010, 19:29:00 UTC
Author notes!

This part of the fill takes place during the London Blitz, specifically during the May 10, 1941 attack in which St. Clement Danes Church burned.

Why is Canada so important here? Because in the last round of Risk I played, the second Canada went to War with America, Germany kicked England's ass.

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Re: Whatever it Takes 5/? anonymous October 21 2010, 20:05:42 UTC
I kinda get where he's coming from, but GAH. AMERICA, BE NOT SUCH A DOUCHETARD. >.<

This is a really great fill, can't wait for more!:D

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Re: Whatever it Takes 5/? anonymous October 23 2010, 19:00:42 UTC
Thanks! Will update as soon as possible.

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OP anonymous October 21 2010, 22:05:39 UTC
I bow before you and offer eternal graitude and love.
This is brilliant (I mean it would be twenty not thirty years and it was America joining WW2 that really got them out of the Great Depression but who cares about minor quibbles when a fic is this fabulous!)
I will reiterate once more my undying love for your America (I really like how he's angry that his brother's suffering in Europe while simultaneously considering invading him) and my ever increasing concern. Alfred's not going to let him off easily.
Thanks for writing this and please continue!

PS I'm fine for whatever kinks you want to throw in but I'd quite like a happy ending. If you've got a different ending planned already that's fine but I'm a bit soft hearted so I'd like a happy ending for Arthur at least.

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Re: OP anonymous October 23 2010, 19:04:14 UTC
Yay!
It really is sort of telling, isn't it, how Alfred views Matthew (No one hurts my brother BUT me)? And yup, Alfred's going to make Arthur work for it. Happy Ending. Will do!

(You'll laugh at me but I'm a game convention, paying more attention to this then the convention)

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Re: Whatever it Takes 5/? anonymous October 22 2010, 05:20:25 UTC
OMG UPDATE PLEEEASSE

Im thinking to save Europe AND his people England will offer himself up 'Ill be your slave just leave my people out of it' ;A; THAT would be epicly sad

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Re: Whatever it Takes 5/? anonymous October 23 2010, 19:04:49 UTC
Maaaaaybbeee? Maybeee not.

We shall see, we shall see.

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Re: Whatever it Takes 5/? anonymous October 22 2010, 23:31:51 UTC
I love where this is going.

"And oh, Arthur, what I could do to you."

That line was gifugdnv, unf

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Re: Whatever it Takes 5/? anonymous October 23 2010, 19:05:26 UTC
And oh, what he's going to do to him. :)

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Re: Whatever it Takes 5/? anonymous October 22 2010, 23:31:54 UTC
Um. I just started reading this and I already feel guilty for being turned on by the darkness of this setup/prompt. *is going to hell* I'm totally enjoying it, though. <3

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Re: Whatever it Takes 5/? anonymous October 23 2010, 19:05:53 UTC
Glad to hear it Anon!

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Re: Whatever it Takes 5/? anonymous October 23 2010, 02:28:43 UTC
Wow, this is an amazing fill! I love how dark--yet justified--America is, especially when it comes to trying to pull Matt away from the war. I can't imagine how Arthur is feeling right now. I am SO following this story.

Also, is this going to be a history AU?

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Re: Whatever it Takes 5/? anonymous October 23 2010, 02:34:20 UTC
It kind of sounds like the only difference is going to be that Arthur is "paying Alfred back" for America's involvement in the war with sex (instead of -- or in addition to! -- the money the English finally finished paying back recently in real life) by becoming his sex slave. So, uh, nothing too AU, it seems? I'm guessing the war will go the same, if not all history.

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Re: Whatever it Takes 5/? anonymous October 23 2010, 19:07:54 UTC
<--Writer
Haven't made up my mind really. There's going to be some really AU elements (I mean, c'mon,here), especially with the relationships between Canada, England and America during the Wars.

But, I'm going to try to keep the time line similar (messed up already /sad), so not quite a total AU.

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Re: Whatever it Takes 6/? anonymous October 23 2010, 21:09:52 UTC
The joke between Alfred and Matthew was that their vision was the exact copy of what their national outlook was. Alfred was short-sighted, with most of his national outlook rarely looking outside his borders. He saw the short-term in crystal perfect detail, sometimes coming up with sudden, brilliant ideas that left Matthew, and everyone else, scratching their heads as to how he'd done it. Matthew was far-sighted, seeing long term effects. He could see what his brother's short term plans would do in the long run, and often was the one trying to temper or change the plans to for a better long term effect.

That wasn't to say they both were incapable of short and long term focuses. Alfred knew at this moment whatever he did would change the world. It was a heady power knowing that quite literally the world's fate rested in his hands.

He rather liked it.

And Arthur had always looked good on his knees.

(That rainy day had been a moment treasured. A sad moment yes, but a treasured one. Not just for what it meant, but what it was. Arthur yielded to Alfred and that was worth so much.)

"I did tell you."

Green eyes looked furious and eyebrows drew in. If this had been fifty years ago, Alfred might have feared for the safety of his country. But it wasn't and he wasn't. The British Empire was falling and everyone knew it. Why else was Ludwig and Gilbert so confident that they'd be able to win? The strength of the English Empire was waning and someone had to take it's place. The German brothers wanted it to be them; they called it their right.

They'd forgotten that Alfred had a name for Empire building too. Manifest Destiny.

America stretched from sea to shining sea, and all of it land he'd won, taken, bought and sometimes outright stolen. He had every climate imaginable and every form of land. The itch had lessened in the years since he'd claimed Hwai'i, but it was still there. Germany offered more, so much more, and it was so sweet of an offer.

It also helped that England had once claimed America and used America. And here Alfred was being given the golden chance to do the same to Arthur.

"So really, Arthur, what could you hope to offer me that would convince me to turn them down?"

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