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Sweet child of mine- chap 7 (5/5) anonymous September 23 2010, 12:37:51 UTC
"Well, it went a lot better then I dared hope," said Lithuania into the phone "He ran into America- but he hadn't noticed anything funny about him, because, well, he was busy being America… and Estonia told me Russia managed to pester him a bit but luckily Belarus came around before he could reach any ominous conclusions…"
"Yeah." Poland's voice was a little muffled, a lot calmer than it was last night, over the phone. "No one but Hungary- who is still a little disappointed she didn't have a chance to see Tomasz in person- stayed for the speech."
"I talked to him a bit, you know." Lithuania smiled. "At first I just tried to get him away from America but I couldn't help it. He… he's grown nicely. "

As they talked into the night, Lithuania's mind was still filled with the picture of the little boy he once had- for a moment there, he almost broke his cover: when Tomasz asked his name without even a trace of familiarity.
But he must think of what was best for his boy. It's better for him if he never knows. No use being selfish, but it was one of the moments where his feelings as human clashed with his emotions as a nation- Lithuania knew it would be very unwise to let Tomasz in on this, not to mention very unsettling for the boy, but Toris… he wanted to give his logic the finger and tell him everything.
He hung up the phone after a very emotional talk with Poland, closing his eyes. He was proud, that's for sure. When he looked at Tomasz up there, heard him talking, he could feel he did maintain more than just his fluency in Lithuanian… He still had some sort of bond with the people. He wasn't sure if it was a blessing or a curse- but it was still there. not as strong as it used to be when he was a little boy though.
Ilona, after all, had lost everything but a hunch for political happenings by age twenty four, and he expected Tomasz to be about the same. But then again, perhaps the large amount of people focused on him like that might have triggered something. Or maybe it was because they did raise him for a longer time? He couldn't know for sure. As kids both he and his deceased sister showed, mostly in their sleep, a firm connection to the earth- mainly around their birthplace, and could tell some things about the general feeling of people. But it diminished to near non-existence as they grew up. At three years old- when they left him at the orphanage- he thought Tomasz already lost his direct connection to people almost completely…
Tomasz. Tomasz and his pout. That pout on his face brought up a fond smile. He still did that… well, he did pick that expression up from his "mother", and even as a grownup it didn’t make him look as foolish as it would anyone else. Must be his "Polish ancestry". He could see the fine similarities between them, the nuances of his face which kept him from looking like a clone of his "father". Particularly something in his eyes… the color was his, for sure, but the shape wasn't as round, and they were more prominent in his face. Just like mama's. Probably what gave him such a baby face.
Lithuania sighed. His mind will not find any peace for a while, he knew. But it was worth it- talking to his son for the first time in thirty years, it was most certainly worth it.

And far from there, Tomasz was asleep, having his old dream again, in a bouncy hotel bed.

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hope you all like it! ^__^

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Re: Sweet child of mine- chap 7 (5/5) anonymous September 23 2010, 13:21:47 UTC
Nicely done there anon! Here's to more chapters and a nice finale.

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Re: Sweet child of mine- chap 7 (5/5) anonymous September 23 2010, 17:39:28 UTC
Tomasz is too cute - I like how you woven the whole "son-of-nations" thing in the plot, it makes a lot of sense and it's also really romantic and idealistic and all sort of nice things. <3

...let's hope this mysterious party leader is worth all the love Tomasz is giving him...

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Re: Sweet child of mine- chap 7 (5/5) anonymous September 23 2010, 22:42:11 UTC
I like it, anon, I do. Particularly the last part gave me fuzzies, although I'm curious about where this will be going now that the political aspirations are growing~

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Re: Sweet child of mine- chap 7 (5/5) anonymous September 23 2010, 23:16:21 UTC
Oh, hey!

This is your old beta here. Sorry I haven't been able to edit anymore; school's been a nightmare.

But this is adorable! Tomasz has totally stolen my heart, and GOD, Liet! Say it with me! "Tomasz, I am your father!" Come ooooon.

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Sweet child of mine- chap 8 (1/6) anonymous October 17 2010, 01:09:16 UTC
(Chapter 8 is here! Horry. Just to remind- this is a 20 minutes into the future kind-a of an AU, as said. Political or diplomatic- all events from about a decade before Tomasz is born an on are purely fictional.)

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These days, Tomasz found himself thinking of his office as no less than sanctuary. A sanctuary with no reporters, no bustling cameramen, no microphones shoved in his face, a small bubble of peace in all this mess. In the last few days he's been interviewed over and over, repeatedly asked so many questions to which the answer was either obvious or meaningless, and survived. He was surprised to find that he could speak competently to a crowd and, in a strange case of reverse stage fright- it came to him more naturally whenever more people were involved. But it was still wrecking his nerves quite a bit and in his office, thank God, he was safe and sound and busy doing his job. Just what he needed to ease his mind, for some reason. It made him feel important, like he was helping with something, and it made him feel better.

He took his time going through the papers he received- something about a party member going to make a public announcement regarding the party's will to reform the law of information security, something the press is sure going to like. After all, was their main agenda not about cleaner politics, and wouldn't bringing out some dirt about financial affairs of certain important government personnel really be a big part of it?
It will be hard to pass in the parliament… but that wasn't his responsibility, as he wasn't even close to being ranked that high in the list.

After looking over the statement and rephrasing in a way that sounded less antagonizing ("seriously, who writes this? It sounds like a threat to invade Russia!"), it came to his mind that a cup of coffee could really do him good right now. He still felt slightly uncomfortable asking someone else to make his coffee for him. Only a few weeks before he was down making coffee for himself and everybody around in floor 1, and the mentality tends to stick - so down to the first floor it was for Tomasz.

He took the stairs, enjoying the fine sensation of moving his muscles after sitting on his behind for unnecessarily long periods of time, receiving a quick "hi Firley bye Firley we'll talk!" from Gofer, who, as always, moved very competently with too many cups of coffee on a tray in his hand, not spilling a single drop and still managing to look like a bumbling idiot. Tomasz couldn't help but smile whenever Gofer was around doing his usual work, and with a smile he entered the first floor coffee room.
The coffee room was as crowded as it always was. The coffee machine- oh my, it was finally working- was making its usual groggity-gurgle noises and bringing blessed coffee to the offices.

"Firely! Good morning! Looking sharp in that suit!" Alicja, noticeably cheerful, welcomed him after a few moments, holding a fat pile of newspapers in her hands. "Look, look! The weekly is all about the festival! They even have a picture of you in it- look, look!" She shoved one of the weekend's magazine's into his hands- "look! Page twenty one! They took a photo of you while you were talking with one of the Lithuanian organizers- It's funny- you look so much like each other! Take a look-! Come on, come on!"

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Sweet child of mine- chap 8 (2/6) anonymous October 17 2010, 01:10:49 UTC
While doubting Alicja drinking coffee while so bubbly was a good idea, he did look for the article. The magazine was filled with pictures- most of people more important then he or the guys who did the battle recreation… okay, so Alicja was off by a page, but there it was.

The picture wasn't even labeled. But their faces were shown clearly. It must have been taken right before they parted- because it caught the Lithuanian just as he pulled his hair back so it won't bother him when he puts on the helmet.

He looked at the picture again. The resemblance was a little uncanny.

"-Hi, Alicja-" he looked at the bubbly woman, who turned to him with a cup of fresh coffee- "Can I borrow it?"

"Sure, why not! I'll send gofer to get it later if anyone else wants to have a look!"

Tomasz nodded to her, and picked up the magazine with his coffee. His heart raced. He wasn't that dense. He was mistaken for Lorinaitisnaitis a few times that day- but now that he could see it with his own eyes- they looked, and he held in a happy, hopeful sound that climbed up his chest- related.

He just wanted to study the picture more. It could be just coincidence. It happened before. He had that annoying generic look, the look indistinguishable from a crowd of one hundred other green-eyed brunets. It could be just his inner child feeding him sick, unrealistic delusions, too willing to find out even a little bit more about whatever family he may have out there. He assumes he was being foolish. But it could be real.
Maybe this time it was the real thing? He wasn't going to let the chance slip.

(Lost battles, Tomasz would always say to himself, were his field of expertise. Too willing to look for chances, too desperate to give up.)

"And here I go on another wild goose chase, no?" he thought to himself as he closed the door behind him.

He shut himself in his office and opened the magazine with a pondering heart, torn between excitement and that voice in his head telling him he was raising his hopes more than is good for him. But miracles happen, and he was a believer since he could remember and it could happen. Just this once he could have his turn, no?

Biting his lips, he looked carefully, and the more he looked- the more the triumph in his chest grew. At some point it even roared. The jaw line was just the same, eye color was off maybe by a shade. Different eyelid shape, though. The cheekbones were similar- his more rounded, and his hair might have been a bit lighter- but blame that on the haircut.

Their looks matched too much for this to be mere coincidence, it had to mean something… and he was part-Lithuanian, wasn't he? He had to contact this person somehow. For his own peace of mind.

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Sweet child of mine- chap 8 (3/6) anonymous October 17 2010, 01:12:28 UTC
But how could he contact Laurinaitis? It took him a moment to realize it was pretty obvious- he could just ask someone around. Somebody must know who to contact in the Lithuanian embassy, and from there it would be easy to get at least an e-mail.

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A few hours later, he discovered it was a lot harder than he thought. He just didn't bring into consideration the fact that contacting someone important (and it looked like Laurinaitis was quite important indeed)- should have been difficult to anyone who wasn't supposed to, i.e. anyone who wasn't that important, e.g. Tomasz Firley.

He asked, but he only got the same numbers in the embassy, who again and again told him to call to the ministry, were he was (not rudely, but quite fiercely) told they could not share the information with him. And no one he knew in the office had access to such information… and asking one of the real bigwigs would raise unwanted questions…

It took him three whole days to realize the answer was there from the very beginning. It took another "Łukasiewicz story" to fresh up his memory. It looked like he wasn't getting along so well with the prime minister- and was quite vocal about it. He never caught a glimpse of one of the famous arguments- but the whole building knew about them. It made a lot of people wonder why the hell Łukasiewicz wasn't getting the pink slip - especially Alicja. He worked with her long enough to know she took making up strange theories about Łukasiewicz as a hobby. It was her who came up- without realizing- with the solution to his problem.

"-it's amazing, really." Said gofer, while filling up a try with cups of different cups of coffee- he explained the colors helps him remember who's was each cup. "-I was just outside the office this time. They were arguing again about this incident with the Russian ambassador." Gofer put one try aside and begun making a second one, "- They weren't yelling this time, thought. And y'know what Łukasiewicz said after the Prime minister finished scolding him?"

"What, what?!" Alicja almost fell off her chair because she bounced on it like en over-excited child who just happened to see a candy bar in her dad's hand..

"He said-" Gofer stopped and tried to mimic something a bit like a valley girl- "Whatevs boss. You're out of this office anyway in three months. If I were you I'd be packing my stuff and preparing for a loooong cool-off time, ya know? Now if you finished playing around being the responsible grown-up in international relationships, I'm off to interact with a nation whose hobby isn’t stalking others-Like, I donno', Lithuania, perhaps?"

Alicja giggled and clapped to gofer's performance. He, in turn, managed to bow without spilling anything. "He's spending a whole lot of time bonding with that Lithuanian guy, doesn't he?" she mumbled to herself. "And the relations between our nations been real good since those pacts a few decades ago so there isn’t much official reason behind this-"

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Sweet child of mine- chap 8 (4/6) anonymous October 17 2010, 01:13:28 UTC
But Tomasz didn't hear the rest. His mind was reeling in the big fish. That was it! He could ask Łukasiewicz, he'll know… but, ugh. Contacting him would prove to be hard… he hasn't even seen him, not counting this flash a few months ago when he hyperventilated and passed out. And he was working directly under the prime minister…

"-sorry guys, gots to fly! Łukasiewicz takes his "I'm pissed off" coffee as soon after a fight as possible- otherwise everyone will have to endure his pink sulkiness of doom… I heard he once made the last minister of economics cry when he was like this. He takes it 'so sweet it will rot your teeth instantly, so strong it will make you bounce and ricochet off the ceiling for a week and so hot it'll burn what's left of your mouth'- at least that's what they told me to bring when he's like this. Never heard him complaining about it so I assume I'm making it right…"

Tomasz beamed. There's the chance. No need to set up a meeting or anything like this to bring someone his coffee…

"Gofer- can I take the coffee up? Please?"

Gofer and Alicja looked at him funny. "What for?"
"Yeah, what the hell, Firley?"

"I- ugh…" He tried to think of a reason. Something that would make sense and won't make him look too strange. Then he decided to go for plan B. "It's complicated. Just… please?"

"Whatever you want, buddy. Last floor, second corridor to the right, office 1569, it's all the way down the hall to the left. I'm off to deliver the rest of these- see ya!" Gofer left behind one mug- it was very large, colored light yellow with little stalks of grain painted around the rim, and he could see the inscription "to my best friend" on it.

"-ooh, Łukasiewicz's mug! Heard it was a present from an ambassador from Hungary." Said Alicja, smiling and almost falling over, spilling her coffee all over the place- but not on him, luckily. She mumbled and grumbled and searched for something absorbent to clean up the mess she made, and Tomasz picked up a disposable cardboard cup carrier and walked to the elevator.

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Poland stormed back into his office and slammed the door behind him with such force he was surprised it didn't crack like last time. It would have made it the third door they'd need to replace in six months. He might not have been as inhumanly strong like Russia or America, or even like he was when he was younger- but he still was stronger then the average human, as were all nations. And at the moment he was way too pissed off to think about his cover. This man- his cursed boss!

He will not go apologize to Russia- he had that slap coming- and a few more, too, if it was up to him- come on! How thick can one man be?! He told him over and over that Ivan was really mentally ill (well, more then the rest of them), and had a tendency to bully whoever he could. He's seen and known from personal experience what Russia could do.

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Sweet child of mine- chap 8 (5/6) anonymous October 17 2010, 01:14:31 UTC
And he wasn't going to just…. Stand there and watch him abusing Latvia like that! It took the poor boy years to stop quivering every time he sees Russia, and he was just recovering from a nasty cold caused by turmoil in one of his big financial companies! For crying out loud, Latvia might not have been a very useful ally like Russia might have been, but he was a good, trustworthy boy.

And before that- he wanted him to take down the pink curtains he hang in his office, and to remove the oil panting he had there, saying it made the office look ridiculous. True, he didn't know that the painting was a 16th century original, and that the girl drown there was his daughter, or that the curtains were hand-made, a gift Hungary gave him when he complained how gray his office was. But it didn't matter. He had no right to tell him how to decorate his office.

"-I like, totally could use a cup of coffee-" He pressed the button connecting to the secretaries' center- "someone please bring my coffee to my office- thanks. You know how I drink it."

And until he gets his boiling cup of relaxation, he was going to do the second-best thing. Rant and Bitch and Whine. He picked up his phone and speed dialed to Lithuania's office. Toris was good at listening to his rants. Good- he answered-
"-Liet~!"

"-let me guess, you're boss is being- and let me quote- 'a total, absolute ass'?"

"-you bet! God. He wants me to apologize to Russia for that slap I gave him after the last world conference. And he just never listens to me! y'know- I just love democracy now- 'cause back then you couldn't just tell a crappy boss to fuck off- I can't wait to the elections anymore! He's totally going to lose. Honestly- I won't say that ANYONE could do better- I've had worse- but- sheesh!"

On the other end of the line Lithuania put the phone on speaker and kept reading the papers, offering Poland an occasional "you're right" and "huh, sure". He would just let him rant until he'll run out of things to complain about. It might take a while, so He'll get some work done in the meantime. He knew Poland for over a thousand years now, and he could never remember the beginning of his own rant at the end so it didn't matter if he was listening or not.

"-and then he was, like, so what? And I said, like, hello, are you stupid or something? And he said no way because it would be against that stupid information security law- I was against it but then it was like, whatever. Y'know, but things change. I don't need that thing now. Not with what happened around in the last decades. Now they just use it to hide all the dirt about themselves and its like, totally not what this law was made for! and god I'm so glad that Tomasz's party want to change it because this law just suck! And talking bout him-I should send you a few of last week papers. He's all over them. Well-"

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Sweet child of mine- chap 8 (6/6) anonymous October 17 2010, 01:15:45 UTC
Lithuania left the papers immediately. Now that was a better subject then Poland's problems with his boss or the financial records he was reading. He smiled to the phone. "-well, He did great."

"- Tomasz sure made his 'dad' one proud parent, don't you agree, Toris?"

Crash!

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Outside a partly-opened door, Tomasz was paralyzed. The cardboard carrier was on the floor, swimming in the coffee and the broken pieces of the mug.
But he was too shocked to be worried about the mug.

It was the last line. He didn't mean to eavesdrop! But- god, he was glad he showed up right there- it must be a sign!

He was right. Laurinaitis did know something about his parents- his father, apparently. Łukasiewicz did too-!

"-Feliks? What happened?"

He could hear the phone, and then, lifting his eyes from the puddle of coffee on the floor-

He looked into Feliks' eyes, and they were perhaps too familiar, like the eyes he'd seen a thousand times before in his dreams.
Too close to be real.

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(Horry for sappy cliffhangers! Just kidding. Next chap- as soon as possible! And thank my beta once more for doing her job so quickly, and may your time at the boarding school will be al least nice! ^___^ Hope all of you anon's like it!)

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Re: Sweet child of mine- chap 8 (6/6) anonymous October 17 2010, 05:09:27 UTC
Another great chapter! Office 1569...I c whut u did thar. So cute. And the mug...I'm kinda sad it broke. Tomasz is so close now! Can't wait for more.

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Re: Sweet child of mine- chap 8 (6/6) anonymous October 17 2010, 07:33:08 UTC
Tomasz <3

And Poland, omg! Usually I find the valleyspeak a bit annoying, but you manage to not overdo it and keep it in line with other things I imagine about his character (like the fact that he likes to put his nose in politics!) and I just adore him.

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Re: Sweet child of mine- chap 8 (6/6) anonymous October 17 2010, 19:11:26 UTC
You're so evil!
This cliffhanger will kill me till next update!

But I really loved this chapter <3
I love how Poland acts and he's so cute~ Btw, I just LOVED all the details, like the mug from Hungary, the curtains and his daughter's painting. It was adorable and make the fic more realistic at least for me.

Can't wait for next update, I hope it's soon!
Thanks again for this, anon <3

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Re: Sweet child of mine- chap 8 (6/6) anonymous October 18 2010, 21:48:37 UTC
Oh, I can't wait to see where this is going. Lovely work, Authornon ♥

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Re: Sweet child of mine- chap 8 (6/6) anonymous October 25 2010, 04:11:53 UTC
Kyaaa~ such a good story! author!anon, you rock! ^^ Keep it up. I can't wait until the next chapter. But I hope it's not over too soon- will Tomasz be found out by any of the other Nations? Like Russia? (dun dun duuuun...) That would be epic, too...

Either way, please update soon! I love this story so much!

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