Re: OP is fashionably late
anonymous
March 25 2010, 19:21:12 UTC
Not that it mattered much. They weren't really there to read. Heh. No, you're not there to read at all, and isn't it totally awesome?
It didn't take him long to respond, slinging his arms around Eirik's neck as the other boy's tongue swiped at his lower lip. Okay this is just so adorable. Especially the "slinging arms around neck" bit. <333 and so's the next paragraph, too.
"You've got this look on your face like you've got some kind of evil plan." :DDD
"I don't know if I like it or not." YOU LIKE IT, BITCH, STOP BEING SUCH A COCKTEASE TO POOR MICHAEL
"I think you should." I SECOND THAT
When he thought about it, it kind of wasn't fair that Eirik had been leading them the whole time. DO NOT LIE, YOU FIND AGGRESSIVE!EIRIK JUST AS SEXY AS I DO
but it gave him a thrill to see his sort-of-boyfriend's mussed hair and flushed face and anxious expression What do you know, I feel the same way.<3
and know that he was the cause of it. :DDD
he chalked Eirik's assertiveness up to just being hot-blooded Canon yay :D
"You should," Michael repeated, this time more affirmatively, and he pulled Eirik into another deep kiss before he could do anything else. Stop being so mushy lovey dovey and adorable you gaiz I am losing my patience
just how far he would let this go What. Isn't it painfully obvious that the correct answer is 'until both of them have satisfied their libido thoroughly enough'.
What actually happened was that Michael kissed Eirik one more time, studied him with a thoughtful expression for a moment, and then gripped his cock through the front of his pants. And what I actually said was 'omgYES'. Also, Seme!HK is so hot. I love that they changed roles, from seme!Eirik and uke!Michael to seme!Michael and uke!Eirik.
The movement was so sudden that it would have made someone less trained in handling their emotions yelp in surprise. Luckily, Eirik was able to control himself just in time. Is it okay to laugh? Because I couldn't stop after reading this part.<3 Apparently being stoic is worthwhile.
Michael tried not to laugh. Oh. So it's okay if Michael wants to laugh too.<3
He was pretty sure that wouldn't be very sexy. Godammit Michael it's not about the sexy it's about being a total turn off /huff
"What are you…" Even though Eirik wasn't a big talker, it was rare to see him at a loss for words. I have no idea what to say about it, just wanted to mention that I love this part so much. And you, author!anon, for writing their characters so well.
/dialogue!love Seriously I just love it.
inwardly pleased to have the upper hand You little smug bastard :D Don't tell anyone, but I'm pleased, too, that you have the upper hand down his pants:D /incredibly lame pun
There was no need for words, though, because for once, body language was saying it all I have only three words - Best. Sentence. Ever.
Eirik immediately bit his lower lip to keep himself from gasping and arched into the touch, pressing himself against Michael in the process. Uke!Eirik is so. Fucking. Hot.
"Keep going and I'll see what I can do," Eirik whispered back, a note of insistence beneath his shaky tone. /fans self
And what kind of person would Michael be to say no to that? A horrible, horribly evil person. Keep the fuck going, dammit
mostly out of paranoia that some ever-present member of his family was going to walk in at the wrong time AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA again those canon bits both amuse and please me to no end at the same time. and I love you for that, AA.
He and Eirik, he figured, were similar enough that they might like the same kinds of things. I love this sentence so. Fucking. Much. I cannot even begin to explain, and I won't. Just. AA, never stop writing. Especially HK/Iceland. You make them so perfect for each other. You make them perfect the way they are portrayed, and I love it so, so much.
Re: OP is fashionably late
anonymous
March 25 2010, 19:28:02 UTC
sliding his hand over the length of Eirik's cock with teasing slowness at first. /frustrated cry I swear it's not me, it's Eirik. Anyway, as I said - you are such a fucking cocktease, Michael.
Eirik couldn't hold back a grunt, shifting just enough against Michael's body to brush against him in the right place. Shit yes yes YES
/reads the next paragraph And you said you aren't confident about your smut abilities? /envy
Remember what you like, he thought to himself like a mantra OMG reference to that "Eirik and Michael are similar enough to like the same things" thing!
all that mattered right now was Eirik. You hcorny teenagers.<3
Eirik, who was leaning close enough to whisper in Michael's ear in a way that sent a jolt up his spine. And mine too, apparently
"Didn't know you could - would - Jesus Christ, Michael," Eirik panted, pausing a second to take Michael's earlobe into his mouth. Michael let out a short hiss and sped up the motion of his hand. "Fuck, I promise I'll make it up to you later, I just - I need -" /drool WTF, Anon. you cannot write this without actually expecting me not to want to read the "make up later", right? /drools some more
And that was all it took; Eirik came with a low whimper in Michael's ear. Okay, funny thing, I read this and since usually they are so quiet and stoic and indifferent I thought the whimper came from a vouyer!Elisaveta. /shot It's okay, though, because a whimpering Eirik is so much hotter and sexier.<333
biting his lip so hard to keep himself quiet that he was surprised it didn't draw blood. You silly person, you could've just kissed him instead.<3
"That's disgusting," he remarked bluntly. "You're lucky I was wearing a white shirt to begin with." AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHHHAHAHAHA Eirik, never stop being you. That is, awesome.
"You're welcome, darling." So you decided to return to cute!mode? Just when I got used to sexing!mode? so unfair.
The pet name made Eirik flinch, which was exactly what he'd been going for. Oh you. You know each other so well.<3
He smirked a little to himself, satisfied Did I meantion before you can be a smug bitch sometimes Michael
"Good going." He snorted. "No one would think to find us like this in the history section." /cough OP begs to differ. Which she can't do right now, since she burst out laughing again.
Okay so basically what I was trying to say thorugh 9 pages in word is that I love you like a thing that's loved, AA, for writing this amazing fill. I hope you forgive me for being late and not commenting before. I am ridiculously happy after reading this three times in a row, and I think I might just do it again, just because it's so hot and amazing and well written and they are characterized so well.:D
Also, if you feel that this handjob did not lead to anything, I'd just like to say I will be more than eager to read the "make up later" part. A lot. More. Than eager.
And I'm glad that more Hong Kong/Iceland is about to come up, since there's a depressing lack of this pairing, both fanarts way and fanfics way. So thank you for expanding it. <3
Author!anon is kind of in awe
anonymous
March 27 2010, 17:24:14 UTC
OP, do you realize that you left me a comment longer than my actual fic? No really, I pasted it into Word and compared it and everything And do you realize how awesome that is? I just, oh my god thank you ;___; I've written a few fills now and this is the first time I've ever gotten a response from the OP (aside from a crack fill I did), but I can still say without a doubt that you are the BEST OP EVER.
I'll go into a few bits of my headcanon for this universe in response to some things you mentioned, because you deserve it:
- Michael and Eirik are juniors. Kristian and Matthias (and Tino and Berwald, for that matter) are seniors. Yao, on the other hand, is a teacher, so it would be pretty damn scary if he found them. HK and Taiwan are siblings by blood, while Kiku and Yong Soo were kind of just unofficially adopted by Yao.
- Michael's a pretty prominent member of the student council's events committee solely because he's able to sell tickets and whatever else better than anyone. That might be how he and Eirik met (I really mean 'might,' because I haven't quite figured that out OTL), and it's how a lot of the students at the school know him. It can be a little awkward for him to be part of the student council because of Arthur, but that's Arthur's fault, not his.
- Kristian and Matthias have an on-again off-again relationship that's been going on since their sophomore year or so. Matthias always thinks it's on and Kristian always thinks it's off, so of course he'd be more than happy to help by distracting Kristian. Attempting to corrupt Eirik a weird hobby for Matthias, partially because he knows it drives Kristian crazy and partially because he just thinks it's fun. He's the only one of the Nordics who knows about Eirik and Michael's relationship, mostly because he was insinuating it before it actually existed. Oh Matthias.
Anyway, thank you very very much for the feedback! You don't know how much it made me smile. I've been considering doing a partial de-anon of this but wasn't so sure if I should do it, and now I think I'm probably going to. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much, OP! ♥ ♥
Re: Author!anon is kind of in awe
anonymous
March 27 2010, 17:27:07 UTC
Derp, I meant "Attempting to corrupt Eirik is like a weird hobby for Matthias." That's what I get for changing my wording and not looking back. It's happened to me in fills, too.
Re: Author!anon is kind of in awe
anonymous
March 28 2010, 16:35:51 UTC
Um, but almost half of my comment was copy-pasted from your fic, so I don't think it counts.:P I believe that the least an OP could do is write a comment back after the request was filled. isn't it kinda rude not to? But THANK YOU. Actually, in my coutry's fandom, it's quite ordinary writing comments that way. And now I feel special and loved. "BEST OP EVER"? /puts on a paper crown and dances around
- Michael and Eirik are juniors. Kristian and Matthias (and Tino and Berwald, for that matter) are seniors. I KNEW IT
- That might be how he and Eirik met (I really mean 'might,' because I haven't quite figured that out OTL) THAT'S SO ROMANTIC. And here I thought that they shared a table in some classes that they take together or something. Your idea is so much better, though. It can be a little awkward for him to be part of the student council because of Arthur, but that's Arthur's fault, not his. I, uh, don't understand why it's awkward, and why it's Arthur's fault. /stupid
- Matthias always thinks it's on and Kristian always thinks it's off That's so like them.<3 mostly because he was insinuating it before it actually existed. Oh Matthias indeed.<333
You're welcome, AA.:D I'm glad. How does one do a partial de-anon? I think you should de-anon this as soon as possible so we can continue discussing this somewhere else, because here it's just eating the comment-space. Also, if I knew how to do those little hearts, I totally would've. So, um, I'm glad you liked my feedback and I'm really happy that you told me about your headcanon<333
Re: Author!anon is kind of in awe
anonymous
March 29 2010, 04:08:24 UTC
Still counts in my world. I mean, I've seen OPs do reviews like yours, but never for a fic this short. I've only seen it done in multipart fills. YOU GO OP COCO /high five
Hong Kong was a colony of England's for a while IRL, so I figured that'd also translate to this universe. Most likely what happened was that Arthur was kind of like a mentor to Michael for a while, but he was too aggressive about it and they eventually had a falling out. These days, Michael is pretty casually friendly towards Arthur, while Arthur (being socially awkward in generally) doesn't really know how to act around Michael. Don't worry, you're not stupid.
When I say partial de-anon, I mean that I'm going to write something in the same universe and post that to the main comm, so you should look out for that there. Hong Kong/Iceland isn't going to be the main pairing, but they'll be there! And there will be much rejoicing. Hopefully.
P.S. If you want to do the little hearts, you type "& hearts;* without any spaces. ♥
Heh. No, you're not there to read at all, and isn't it totally awesome?
It didn't take him long to respond, slinging his arms around Eirik's neck as the other boy's tongue swiped at his lower lip.
Okay this is just so adorable. Especially the "slinging arms around neck" bit. <333 and so's the next paragraph, too.
"You've got this look on your face like you've got some kind of evil plan."
:DDD
"I don't know if I like it or not."
YOU LIKE IT, BITCH, STOP BEING SUCH A COCKTEASE TO POOR MICHAEL
"I think you should."
I SECOND THAT
When he thought about it, it kind of wasn't fair that Eirik had been leading them the whole time.
DO NOT LIE, YOU FIND AGGRESSIVE!EIRIK JUST AS SEXY AS I DO
but it gave him a thrill to see his sort-of-boyfriend's mussed hair and flushed face and anxious expression
What do you know, I feel the same way.<3
and know that he was the cause of it.
:DDD
he chalked Eirik's assertiveness up to just being hot-blooded
Canon yay :D
"You should," Michael repeated, this time more affirmatively, and he pulled Eirik into another deep kiss before he could do anything else.
Stop being so mushy lovey dovey and adorable you gaiz I am losing my patience
just how far he would let this go
What. Isn't it painfully obvious that the correct answer is 'until both of them have satisfied their libido thoroughly enough'.
What actually happened was that Michael kissed Eirik one more time, studied him with a thoughtful expression for a moment, and then gripped his cock through the front of his pants.
And what I actually said was 'omgYES'. Also, Seme!HK is so hot. I love that they changed roles, from seme!Eirik and uke!Michael to seme!Michael and uke!Eirik.
The movement was so sudden that it would have made someone less trained in handling their emotions yelp in surprise. Luckily, Eirik was able to control himself just in time.
Is it okay to laugh? Because I couldn't stop after reading this part.<3 Apparently being stoic is worthwhile.
Michael tried not to laugh.
Oh. So it's okay if Michael wants to laugh too.<3
He was pretty sure that wouldn't be very sexy.
Godammit Michael it's not about the sexy it's about being a total turn off
/huff
"What are you…" Even though Eirik wasn't a big talker, it was rare to see him at a loss for words.
I have no idea what to say about it, just wanted to mention that I love this part so much. And you, author!anon, for writing their characters so well.
/dialogue!love
Seriously I just love it.
inwardly pleased to have the upper hand
You little smug bastard :D
Don't tell anyone, but I'm pleased, too, that you have the upper hand down his pants:D
/incredibly lame pun
There was no need for words, though, because for once, body language was saying it all
I have only three words - Best. Sentence. Ever.
Eirik immediately bit his lower lip to keep himself from gasping and arched into the touch, pressing himself against Michael in the process.
Uke!Eirik is so. Fucking. Hot.
"Keep going and I'll see what I can do," Eirik whispered back, a note of insistence beneath his shaky tone.
/fans self
And what kind of person would Michael be to say no to that?
A horrible, horribly evil person. Keep the fuck going, dammit
mostly out of paranoia that some ever-present member of his family was going to walk in at the wrong time
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA again those canon bits both amuse and please me to no end at the same time. and I love you for that, AA.
He and Eirik, he figured, were similar enough that they might like the same kinds of things.
I love this sentence so. Fucking. Much. I cannot even begin to explain, and I won't. Just. AA, never stop writing. Especially HK/Iceland. You make them so perfect for each other. You make them perfect the way they are portrayed, and I love it so, so much.
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/frustrated cry
I swear it's not me, it's Eirik.
Anyway, as I said - you are such a fucking cocktease, Michael.
Eirik couldn't hold back a grunt, shifting just enough against Michael's body to brush against him in the right place.
Shit yes yes YES
/reads the next paragraph
And you said you aren't confident about your smut abilities?
/envy
Remember what you like, he thought to himself like a mantra
OMG reference to that "Eirik and Michael are similar enough to like the same things" thing!
all that mattered right now was Eirik.
You hcorny teenagers.<3
Eirik, who was leaning close enough to whisper in Michael's ear in a way that sent a jolt up his spine.
And mine too, apparently
"Didn't know you could - would - Jesus Christ, Michael," Eirik panted, pausing a second to take Michael's earlobe into his mouth. Michael let out a short hiss and sped up the motion of his hand. "Fuck, I promise I'll make it up to you later, I just - I need -"
/drool
WTF, Anon. you cannot write this without actually expecting me not to want to read the "make up later", right?
/drools some more
And that was all it took; Eirik came with a low whimper in Michael's ear.
Okay, funny thing, I read this and since usually they are so quiet and stoic and indifferent I thought the whimper came from a vouyer!Elisaveta.
/shot
It's okay, though, because a whimpering Eirik is so much hotter and sexier.<333
biting his lip so hard to keep himself quiet that he was surprised it didn't draw blood.
You silly person, you could've just kissed him instead.<3
"That's disgusting," he remarked bluntly. "You're lucky I was wearing a white shirt to begin with."
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHHHAHAHAHA
Eirik, never stop being you. That is, awesome.
"You're welcome, darling."
So you decided to return to cute!mode? Just when I got used to sexing!mode? so unfair.
The pet name made Eirik flinch, which was exactly what he'd been going for.
Oh you. You know each other so well.<3
He smirked a little to himself, satisfied
Did I meantion before you can be a smug bitch sometimes Michael
"Good going." He snorted. "No one would think to find us like this in the history section."
/cough
OP begs to differ.
Which she can't do right now, since she burst out laughing again.
Okay so basically what I was trying to say thorugh 9 pages in word is that I love you like a thing that's loved, AA, for writing this amazing fill. I hope you forgive me for being late and not commenting before. I am ridiculously happy after reading this three times in a row, and I think I might just do it again, just because it's so hot and amazing and well written and they are characterized so well.:D
Also, if you feel that this handjob did not lead to anything, I'd just like to say I will be more than eager to read the "make up later" part. A lot. More. Than eager.
And I'm glad that more Hong Kong/Iceland is about to come up, since there's a depressing lack of this pairing, both fanarts way and fanfics way. So thank you for expanding it. <3
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I'll go into a few bits of my headcanon for this universe in response to some things you mentioned, because you deserve it:
- Michael and Eirik are juniors. Kristian and Matthias (and Tino and Berwald, for that matter) are seniors. Yao, on the other hand, is a teacher, so it would be pretty damn scary if he found them. HK and Taiwan are siblings by blood, while Kiku and Yong Soo were kind of just unofficially adopted by Yao.
- Michael's a pretty prominent member of the student council's events committee solely because he's able to sell tickets and whatever else better than anyone. That might be how he and Eirik met (I really mean 'might,' because I haven't quite figured that out OTL), and it's how a lot of the students at the school know him. It can be a little awkward for him to be part of the student council because of Arthur, but that's Arthur's fault, not his.
- Kristian and Matthias have an on-again off-again relationship that's been going on since their sophomore year or so. Matthias always thinks it's on and Kristian always thinks it's off, so of course he'd be more than happy to help by distracting Kristian. Attempting to corrupt Eirik a weird hobby for Matthias, partially because he knows it drives Kristian crazy and partially because he just thinks it's fun. He's the only one of the Nordics who knows about Eirik and Michael's relationship, mostly because he was insinuating it before it actually existed. Oh Matthias.
Anyway, thank you very very much for the feedback! You don't know how much it made me smile. I've been considering doing a partial de-anon of this but wasn't so sure if I should do it, and now I think I'm probably going to. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much, OP! ♥ ♥
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I believe that the least an OP could do is write a comment back after the request was filled. isn't it kinda rude not to?
But THANK YOU. Actually, in my coutry's fandom, it's quite ordinary writing comments that way. And now I feel special and loved. "BEST OP EVER"?
/puts on a paper crown and dances around
- Michael and Eirik are juniors. Kristian and Matthias (and Tino and Berwald, for that matter) are seniors.
I KNEW IT
- That might be how he and Eirik met (I really mean 'might,' because I haven't quite figured that out OTL)
THAT'S SO ROMANTIC. And here I thought that they shared a table in some classes that they take together or something. Your idea is so much better, though.
It can be a little awkward for him to be part of the student council because of Arthur, but that's Arthur's fault, not his.
I, uh, don't understand why it's awkward, and why it's Arthur's fault.
/stupid
- Matthias always thinks it's on and Kristian always thinks it's off
That's so like them.<3
mostly because he was insinuating it before it actually existed.
Oh Matthias indeed.<333
You're welcome, AA.:D I'm glad.
How does one do a partial de-anon? I think you should de-anon this as soon as possible so we can continue discussing this somewhere else, because here it's just eating the comment-space.
Also, if I knew how to do those little hearts, I totally would've. So, um, I'm glad you liked my feedback and I'm really happy that you told me about your headcanon<333
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YOU GO OP COCO /high five
Hong Kong was a colony of England's for a while IRL, so I figured that'd also translate to this universe. Most likely what happened was that Arthur was kind of like a mentor to Michael for a while, but he was too aggressive about it and they eventually had a falling out. These days, Michael is pretty casually friendly towards Arthur, while Arthur (being socially awkward in generally) doesn't really know how to act around Michael. Don't worry, you're not stupid.
When I say partial de-anon, I mean that I'm going to write something in the same universe and post that to the main comm, so you should look out for that there. Hong Kong/Iceland isn't going to be the main pairing, but they'll be there! And there will be much rejoicing. Hopefully.
P.S. If you want to do the little hearts, you type "& hearts;* without any spaces. ♥
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