Hollland & the wapons of massdestrucction [2/?!]
anonymous
March 11 2010, 21:12:13 UTC
Hollanda nd the weapon of massdestructin CHAPTER TWO
together with his sister goes Holland inside a discotheek in the suspisious streets. there inside are six thuosands peoples dancing but Holland doesnt care because they are on the mission to saves everyone from evil power! but he takes a braek an smoke a little cigarrettes. »stop smoke the cigarrete for we must hurry!« screams Belgium »or else i wil break your windmill!« »but sister i am nervuos!« screamed Holland back and dropping the cigarete on the floor. then the floor is on fire!!! peoples starts screams a lot and is chaos!!! »idiot brother! look what you do« sayed Belgium »now peoples can not dance anymor.« »no!« yell Holland and stomping the foot on the cigarette but the fire is big and he has burned his shoe »my shoe has fires!!« »take off it« hims sister say and she throws het burning shoe in the wall. then the wall is on fires too but at least not the foot of Hollands. »we must leave here!« scream Holland and he runs with his sister but they do not find exits for it is a disco labyrint. peoples are burning and screaming and sometimes dances. from his pocket takes Holland a cigarett and he touchs a burning person with it so it gets lights. »no times to smoek!« sayes Belgium very angry but then is happy. »look! there is exits!« she jumps out from the place an a microsecond after her brother also jumps out the house falls down!!! »it was your fault that this has happened« Belgiums sigh. Holland kicking at the burned house which was a nice diskothek. »wait!« shout Holland with surprise. »some guy is there!« »whats?!« it was true!! from the ash of the burned disco house cames up a mysterios man...
TO BE MORE CONTINUTE..........?!
(ahuors notes: remember to dont smokes in disco!!)
Re: Hollland & the wapons of massdestrucction [2/?!]
anonymous
March 11 2010, 23:31:12 UTC
danks to you peoples for good comments!! but remembers that in netherland peoples are busy so maybe dont have times to reads things. then you cans read it out louds to your sibling instead. - sinecerely from ahutor anon
Re: Hollland & the wapons of massdestrucction [2/?!]
anonymous
March 12 2010, 00:48:08 UTC
Dutch!anon here who did the reading before!~ C: This is amazing <33 I'll do a reading tomorrow (when it's not 1:45 AM and I wouldn't wake my mom up by doing so) (also, so much thanks to everybody who replied to the reading before, I feel so flattered you all liked it! I'm so happy with all of them! (My only regret was forgetting to read the author's notes xD (shall I include them with the reading of the second chapter?)
Re: Hollland & the wapons of massdestrucction [2/?!]
anonymous
March 12 2010, 03:59:20 UTC
Artist!Anon here, who is friends with Voice!Anon, is making drawings to make a video of this. Kind if like a storyboards if sorts. If I can find a place to upload my vid to, I shall link asap.
Re: Hollland & the wapons of massdestrucction [2/?!] Recording
anonymous
March 12 2010, 10:08:35 UTC
Dutch/Voice/Recording!Anon is back!
And with the next chapter!~ http://www.box.net/shared/1cm6qvgacc Enjoy! (Also, I added in the authors notes of the previous chapter, because regretfully I forgot to do so last time, I hope nobody minds) This one took a few more takes, especially to stop myself from getting too excited and reading way way too fast xD. Either way, I hope everybody likes it! <3 And Artist!Anon, you have no idea how much I love you <3
Re: Hollland & the wapons of massdestrucction [2/?!] Recording
anonymous
March 12 2010, 22:04:02 UTC
it was been wonderful again and i have enjoyed it greatfully. the works of artiest-anon also was good and nice and very good. a lot of liefde from de ahtuohr anon.
together with his sister goes Holland inside a discotheek in the suspisious streets. there inside are six thuosands peoples dancing but Holland doesnt care because they are on the mission to saves everyone from evil power! but he takes a braek an smoke a little cigarrettes.
»stop smoke the cigarrete for we must hurry!« screams Belgium »or else i wil break your windmill!«
»but sister i am nervuos!« screamed Holland back and dropping the cigarete on the floor. then the floor is on fire!!! peoples starts screams a lot and is chaos!!!
»idiot brother! look what you do« sayed Belgium »now peoples can not dance anymor.«
»no!« yell Holland and stomping the foot on the cigarette but the fire is big and he has burned his shoe »my shoe has fires!!«
»take off it« hims sister say and she throws het burning shoe in the wall. then the wall is on fires too but at least not the foot of Hollands.
»we must leave here!« scream Holland and he runs with his sister but they do not find exits for it is a disco labyrint. peoples are burning and screaming and sometimes dances. from his pocket takes Holland a cigarett and he touchs a burning person with it so it gets lights.
»no times to smoek!« sayes Belgium very angry but then is happy. »look! there is exits!«
she jumps out from the place an a microsecond after her brother also jumps out the house falls down!!!
»it was your fault that this has happened« Belgiums sigh. Holland kicking at the burned house which was a nice diskothek.
»wait!« shout Holland with surprise. »some guy is there!«
»whats?!«
it was true!! from the ash of the burned disco house cames up a mysterios man...
TO BE MORE CONTINUTE..........?!
(ahuors notes: remember to dont smokes in disco!!)
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I think I love you. ♥♥♥♥♥♥
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OP hopes the dutch anon will do a reading again.
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Now, I demand a reading for this master piece!
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- sinecerely from ahutor anon
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This is amazing <33 I'll do a reading tomorrow (when it's not 1:45 AM and I wouldn't wake my mom up by doing so)
(also, so much thanks to everybody who replied to the reading before, I feel so flattered you all liked it! I'm so happy with all of them! (My only regret was forgetting to read the author's notes xD (shall I include them with the reading of the second chapter?)
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=D
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http://s621.photobucket.com/albums/tt299/Mitzrael_Arch/?action=view¤t=hollandWoMD.flv
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PERFECTLY AWESOME
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And with the next chapter!~
http://www.box.net/shared/1cm6qvgacc
Enjoy!
(Also, I added in the authors notes of the previous chapter, because regretfully I forgot to do so last time, I hope nobody minds)
This one took a few more takes, especially to stop myself from getting too excited and reading way way too fast xD.
Either way, I hope everybody likes it! <3
And Artist!Anon, you have no idea how much I love you <3
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a lot of liefde from de ahtuohr anon.
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/worships
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