Re: Quando Parli [1 b / ?]
anonymous
March 6 2010, 16:06:51 UTC
Despite himself, Romano smiled. So he hadn't spent half his life running away from people for nothing ? Good to know. He walked around the (huge, to his chagrin) house of his, walked into the kitchen and grabbed a few tomatoes. He was hungry now. "Ve, fratello, did you know big brother Spain speaks Italian ?" Shit, he had forgotten his brother. Romano turned around slowly, and the look on his face clearly read "What are you doing here ?" "Well, I came over yesterday, you forgot ? Ve..." the younger said. "No. Unfortunately." he answered, glaring. "Listen, I'm going out." his brother was about to interrupt. "Somewhere, don't ask why. Just let me go." "Oh. Okay. Did you tell big brother Spain goodbye ? He came here just for you !" After a little pause, he added "Ve." "No, I didn't. And the one he talked to was you, not me, Veneziano. I'm leaving now." With that, he ran out, one tomato in his hand (where had he left the others ?), the juice slowly dripping down the flesh and along his hand, along with the blood.
One last scream of "LOVIII !" was all he heard before he sped away on his Vespa.
reCAPTCHA says "the fiascos". WHAT IS THIS, I DON'T WANT MY STORY TO BE A FIASCO DDDDD: Author!Anon doesn't like the character limit, by the way ._.' Second note : In my head!canon, a lot of things are different concerning Veneziano. I think he is an overprotective little brother and his "Ve~"s are just so adorable I have to make him say it all the time :'D
Re: Quando Parli [1 b / ?]
anonymous
March 6 2010, 21:26:09 UTC
This was wonderful and amazing and not a fiasco at all don't worry
OP here, and I loved what you've done here! oth the Italies and Spain are in-character, and you haven't made them excessively stereotypical. I agree with your interpretation of Veneziano xD
"Ve, fratello, did you know big brother Spain speaks Italian ?"
Shit, he had forgotten his brother. Romano turned around slowly, and the look on his face clearly read "What are you doing here ?"
"Well, I came over yesterday, you forgot ? Ve..." the younger said.
"No. Unfortunately." he answered, glaring. "Listen, I'm going out." his brother was about to interrupt. "Somewhere, don't ask why. Just let me go."
"Oh. Okay. Did you tell big brother Spain goodbye ? He came here just for you !" After a little pause, he added "Ve."
"No, I didn't. And the one he talked to was you, not me, Veneziano. I'm leaving now." With that, he ran out, one tomato in his hand (where had he left the others ?), the juice slowly dripping down the flesh and along his hand, along with the blood.
One last scream of "LOVIII !" was all he heard before he sped away on his Vespa.
reCAPTCHA says "the fiascos". WHAT IS THIS, I DON'T WANT MY STORY TO BE A FIASCO DDDDD: Author!Anon doesn't like the character limit, by the way ._.'
Second note : In my head!canon, a lot of things are different concerning Veneziano. I think he is an overprotective little brother and his "Ve~"s are just so adorable I have to make him say it all the time :'D
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OP here, and I loved what you've done here! oth the Italies and Spain are in-character, and you haven't made them excessively stereotypical. I agree with your interpretation of Veneziano xD
*waits for next part*
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