This was everything I could have asked for. Right down to your turns of phrase and wording. The emotional quality and the sheer raw of the want, the pacing, the beautiful and elegant writing, everything. And god, you can write.
This was beautiful and quiet and fierce. It was everything I think of when I think Japan and England. I... am having a hard time giving feedback 'cause I am still so enamored with it. XD;;
I adored the lunging and the silk. The tea, yes, the tea is just so, just perfect. The table, oh god, the table and the falling off of it and not caring. The scars, England's hands being bare. Japan's coyness and control. England's wanton nature shining through despite their control. The shortened prepping. England's noises. Finding the angle and oh my god, England's reaction, his dark and wild eyes - that is possibly my favorite part, "startled with the amazement of it" and the sudden stillness in the middle of it all. Gorgeous.
sldkjsl <3 Love Japan keeping his yukata on the entire time.
There are so many wonderful lines in this (the velvet-soft as it dreams of killing) that I can't quote them all, dammit. And the flutter! lskdjslk, you are trying to kill me. And I love you for it.
aksjko <3
Oh my god. I love you madly, author!anon. Madly.
This was everything I could have asked for. Right down to your turns of phrase and wording. The emotional quality and the sheer raw of the want, the pacing, the beautiful and elegant writing, everything. And god, you can write.
This was beautiful and quiet and fierce. It was everything I think of when I think Japan and England. I... am having a hard time giving feedback 'cause I am still so enamored with it. XD;;
I adored the lunging and the silk. The tea, yes, the tea is just so, just perfect. The table, oh god, the table and the falling off of it and not caring. The scars, England's hands being bare. Japan's coyness and control. England's wanton nature shining through despite their control. The shortened prepping. England's noises. Finding the angle and oh my god, England's reaction, his dark and wild eyes - that is possibly my favorite part, "startled with the amazement of it" and the sudden stillness in the middle of it all. Gorgeous.
sldkjsl <3 Love Japan keeping his yukata on the entire time.
There are so many wonderful lines in this (the velvet-soft as it dreams of killing) that I can't quote them all, dammit. And the flutter! lskdjslk, you are trying to kill me. And I love you for it.
Thank you.
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