China/Korea - First Time [1/?]
anonymous
November 7 2009, 04:01:50 UTC
NOOB!anon please go easy on me i mean this is my first fill and i want to know if i should finish it! _____________________________________________
yong didn't see this coming at all he didn't think his brother would do this to him but, him the person who raised him and left him is touching him like he never had before.
"Aniki please don't suck there this doesn't feel right" moaned Korea as arched his back with pleasure.
"Don't make this harder then it suppose to be Korea your the one who made me this way you really should have kissed me, Aru." China said very serious it seemed "turn over, aru"
Kores did what he was told to but at a cause China had suddenly jumped him from behind, now he is tied up, hot, and very embrassesed.
"Korea you have to relax, aru" As China grabbed the tube of slick gel and pour it in his hands.
Korea really didn't do what he was told but, he couldn't help being nervous he didn't want to say it but, he was afraid."No, please don't Aniki t-this isn't right we are both boys!" As Korea studdered at China's touch.
"Aiyah, Enjoy it while it last first time always the best now relax, aru~♥! China knew this was going to be very fun for him and he isn't going to let this waste "shall we start, aru." _________________________________________
Re: China/Korea - First Time [1/?]
anonymous
November 7 2009, 05:41:02 UTC
Aw man, I was the first anon who wanted to take a stab at this. Do you mind if I post another ChinaxKorea author!anon? And to OP do you mind multi fills?
Anyway, for your first post not bad on the smut. I wish you put in more detail around it, like how they got into this and the results. I'd like to see a continuation :)
Re: China/Korea - First Time [1/?]
anonymous
November 7 2009, 05:58:10 UTC
shure you'll be better then me LOL my english is not good im from gorgia so redneck O-o and yeah i cant put detail i mean i SUCK at it but the next chapter there will be mor and that was just a opening o_o
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yong didn't see this coming at all he didn't think his brother would do this to him but, him the person who raised him and left him
is touching him like he never had before.
"Aniki please don't suck there this doesn't feel right" moaned Korea as arched his back with pleasure.
"Don't make this harder then it suppose to be Korea your the one who made me this way you really
should have kissed me, Aru." China said very serious it seemed "turn over, aru"
Kores did what he was told to but at a cause China had suddenly jumped him from behind, now he is tied up, hot, and very embrassesed.
"Korea you have to relax, aru" As China grabbed the tube of slick gel and pour it in his hands.
Korea really didn't do what he was told but, he couldn't help being nervous he didn't want to say it but, he was afraid."No, please don't Aniki
t-this isn't right we are both boys!" As Korea studdered at China's touch.
"Aiyah, Enjoy it while it last first time always the best now relax, aru~♥! China knew this was going to be very fun for him and he isn't going to let this waste "shall we start, aru."
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what'd you think :)
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Anyway, for your first post not bad on the smut. I wish you put in more detail around it, like how they got into this and the results. I'd like to see a continuation :)
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And of course I won't mind if there are multiple fills for this, the more the merrier I say <3
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