Re: Baltic - Comfort & Kisses Part 2 (Ending-small Epilogue)
anonymous
October 11 2009, 15:01:47 UTC
Norway sat next to Finland chatting quietly over coffee and some of Denmark’s tinned biscuits that he had brought with him to the home that Finland shared with his fellow Nordic nation Sweden. Suddenly the short slender man stopped speaking as his eyes glazed over and he stopped mid-sentence. A moment later recognition returned to his gaze and he shivered as if suddenly cold. It all happened so fast that Norway wondered if the event had even happened at all.
“Um, Tino? Are you . . ”
Tino suddenly set his cup down firmly and interrupted him, his tone serious. “Norway, thank you for the lovely biscuits, but I must leave. Please feel free to stay as long as you like. I will return in a day or so.”
Norway stared in shock at the sudden change in the other nation. He watched as the other man quickly took up his outerwear and keys and headed toward the door. He started to stand up and reached out trying to stall the other man a moment.
“Wait! Where are you . . . I mean, why are you?”
Tino stopped briefly and turned back, his hand still on the doorknob as shouted back. “I’ve got to go rescue that fool, Berwald again!”
Re: Baltic - Comfort & Kisses Part 2 (Author's Notes)
anonymous
October 11 2009, 15:17:20 UTC
Regarding Epilogue- So what's going on with Tino when his eyes glaze over? Here's a little bit of interesting Finnish folklore that I threw in for fun. It's called Etiäinen! (In Finnish folklore, an Etiäinen is a spirit sent forth by a shaman or by a person in great distress. It will appear either where the shaman wishes or find the person with whom the sender has the strongest emotional bond. An Etiäinen also means a precognitive vision or dream: someone can, for example, see or hear a family member or a guest coming before the person in question really arrives. For people in Lapland and other parts of Finland too etiäinen is a completely normal phenomena. It can be compared to someone knowing it will rain soon. If it's looked at from a biology point of view it can be explained as an instinct that in harsh natural conditions developed in people who really needed it.)* -Description courtesy of Wikipedia.
Re: Baltic - Comfort & Kisses Part 2 (Ending-small Epilogue)
anonymous
October 11 2009, 19:20:55 UTC
*totally applaud the wonderful ending of part 2!!!* Thank you once again so much! It was totally worth reading this all, btw are you also gonna post this on fanfiction.net or at Hetalia club? ^^
Re: Writer-Anon Blushing from compliment
anonymous
October 11 2009, 21:05:39 UTC
Oh, Thank you so much for the glowing review! I'm glad you liked the ending. Seriously, you think it's good enough to post elsewhere? I haven't ever really tried to do much writing before. This story was basically a trial run for me. *laugh* As far as posting it anywhere else. . .well--needless to say I currently don't have an account at either site, at this time, to post it anywhere else. But maybe I will look into doing that now. :) Thank you again for the encouraging words!
“Um, Tino? Are you . . ”
Tino suddenly set his cup down firmly and interrupted him, his tone serious. “Norway, thank you for the lovely biscuits, but I must leave. Please feel free to stay as long as you like. I will return in a day or so.”
Norway stared in shock at the sudden change in the other nation. He watched as the other man quickly took up his outerwear and keys and headed toward the door. He started to stand up and reached out trying to stall the other man a moment.
“Wait! Where are you . . . I mean, why are you?”
Tino stopped briefly and turned back, his hand still on the doorknob as shouted back. “I’ve got to go rescue that fool, Berwald again!”
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So what's going on with Tino when his eyes glaze over? Here's a little bit of interesting Finnish folklore that I threw in for fun. It's called Etiäinen!
(In Finnish folklore, an Etiäinen is a spirit sent forth by a shaman or by a person in great distress. It will appear either where the shaman wishes or find the person with whom the sender has the strongest emotional bond. An Etiäinen also means a precognitive vision or dream: someone can, for example, see or hear a family member or a guest coming before the person in question really arrives. For people in Lapland and other parts of Finland too etiäinen is a completely normal phenomena. It can be compared to someone knowing it will rain soon. If it's looked at from a biology point of view it can be explained as an instinct that in harsh natural conditions developed in people who really needed it.)*
-Description courtesy of Wikipedia.
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Thank you once again so much! It was totally worth reading this all, btw are you also gonna post this on fanfiction.net or at Hetalia club? ^^
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Seriously, you think it's good enough to post elsewhere? I haven't ever really tried to do much writing before. This story was basically a trial run for me.
*laugh*
As far as posting it anywhere else. . .well--needless to say I currently don't have an account at either site, at this time, to post it anywhere else. But maybe I will look into doing that now. :)
Thank you again for the encouraging words!
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