In Which France has a Brilliant Idea: End [1/1]
anonymous
September 26 2009, 17:22:53 UTC
End: In Which Francis Receives an Email
The email was short and abrupt. When Francis had merrily pulled up his browser-in the middle of brushing his hair and singing his favorite song under his breath, half-dressed and too-chipper for anyone, really-he’d been instantly alerted that his email to Romano had a new reply.
With a smart click, he pulled up the new message, and was pleasantly surprised when he realized he’d received a picture in return.
It was a tomato. It wasn’t a remarkable one, not any more luscious or red or well-shaped as any other tomato. It was lying on an island counter next to a bowl of leftover pasta, a mess of sauce, everywhere, but still. It was a tomato.
Grinning wolfishly, he exited out of the browser and returned to brushing his hair.
If Antonio was replying Lovino’s emails, something damn good must have happened last night.
notes: - I-I didn't put any Italian into this piece, despite the spotty Spanish and French. Unfortunately, languages aren't really my thing. - Predictable ending is predictable, but I hope this fill is still acceptable.
Thanks so much for reading this fill, if the ems and parenthesis and crazy tangents haven't discouraged you yet. My own style of writing drives me crazy. It was fun, though, since this writer!anon is so out of practice a little Spain/Romano writing doesn't hurt.
Oh wow. I just... this was my first time requesting something, and I totally wasn't expecting it to be filled. I'm so happy, author!anon~~, you don't even know! I just made a squeaky noise of joy! (And did I mention it's my birthday? I'm pretty sure this day can't get any better)
Yay, I really loved this! Your Spain was so good, and the whole thing was really funny (oh France...), and how did you know that embarrassed denial is my favorite thing ever in fics?!?
Re: In Which France has a Brilliant Idea: End [1/1]
anonymous
May 25 2010, 20:01:32 UTC
This.. this is marvelous. SO entertaining and smooth. I enjoy reading every bit of it. Oh Spain and Lovino is my favorite pairing and you did them so well. I just love how you characterize Romano. He is such a tsundere but he makes it all more cute. And yes your Antonio is superb suggesting that he is not all that stupid he just doesn't choose to think or worry about small matters. And the way he talks about what Romano is doing behind that door and how he brushes off knowingly Romano's denials and keeps on pestering him... that my friend is oh so LOVELY.
The email was short and abrupt. When Francis had merrily pulled up his browser-in the middle of brushing his hair and singing his favorite song under his breath, half-dressed and too-chipper for anyone, really-he’d been instantly alerted that his email to Romano had a new reply.
With a smart click, he pulled up the new message, and was pleasantly surprised when he realized he’d received a picture in return.
It was a tomato. It wasn’t a remarkable one, not any more luscious or red or well-shaped as any other tomato. It was lying on an island counter next to a bowl of leftover pasta, a mess of sauce, everywhere, but still. It was a tomato.
Grinning wolfishly, he exited out of the browser and returned to brushing his hair.
If Antonio was replying Lovino’s emails, something damn good must have happened last night.
notes:
- I-I didn't put any Italian into this piece, despite the spotty Spanish and French. Unfortunately, languages aren't really my thing.
- Predictable ending is predictable, but I hope this fill is still acceptable.
Thanks so much for reading this fill, if the ems and parenthesis and crazy tangents haven't discouraged you yet. My own style of writing drives me crazy. It was fun, though, since this writer!anon is so out of practice a little Spain/Romano writing doesn't hurt.
And yes, dat ass is sexy.
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Yay, I really loved this! Your Spain was so good, and the whole thing was really funny (oh France...), and how did you know that embarrassed denial is my favorite thing ever in fics?!?
brb, dying of win.
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This is LOVE. hetalia is Loooove~~
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