Eyes Wide Open [3.5/?]
anonymous
August 9 2009, 19:16:54 UTC
He'd worried for a bit about how he was going to get the pills into America, but things worked out in the end: America didn't suspect a thing. Everyone thought he was really sweet and considerate for volunteering to send America back to the hotel, but the best part was that America himself thought that he was really sweet and considerate to send him home.
America was really being really grabby, which was a good sign. It showed that America missed him already. And this time, it was America who made the first move, nuzzling against his neck and giggling.
"You... yooooooooooouuuuu! You smell like vodka!"
He ran his fingers through that golden hair, pulling America back so that he could do some kissing. "Vodka totally doesn't have its own smell," he told America, though the glazed look in those eyes told him that the man probably wouldn't remember that simple fact by the morning. But that was fine, so long as they had the night.
"You taste like vodka," mumbled America against his lips, licking his lips. "I think I liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiike vodka."
It was a confession, wasn't it? It was. It really was. He'd thought then that nothing could spoil it, nothing could spoil the love between the two of them.
Then came morning, and America was being his usual flirty self again. Maybe not quite as flirty, considering it looked like he was suffering from a bad hangover, but wasn't it cruel to flirt at all when you already had a partner? And they'd gone all the way too! It wasn't like they were just playing around like some other people.
If one thing good came out of all the flirting, it was that he would get another chance to make love to his darling America. The summit was almost over, and he'd been so worried that he wouldn't be able to see America again once he had to go home, but it seemed that America had agreed to follow them home.
The next time, next time, he would make it clear to America that his feelings were not meant to be toyed with. Next time, he wasn't going to be so nice. He would have to make sure that America remembers.
a different anon says:
anonymous
August 9 2009, 19:41:23 UTC
author!anon...I was so sure before, that it was Russia...but then you made a comment up-page about "Are you sure it's Russia?" and then I was confused...
But...
I think I've got it now. Not gonna spoil it for everyone else. Just wanted to let you know, I'm onto you. ; )
(Unless it really is Russia, then...I'm just reading into things too far...D: )
Re: a different anon says:
anonymous
August 9 2009, 19:43:46 UTC
oiufhd I TOTALLY MISSED THAT ABOUT `are you sure it`s russia` but then that LINE and I thought, `Russia would`t say that` and ...dsfhoihfoushdfi oh god if it is who I think who it is, author-anon, you are a genius...
Re: Eyes Wide Open [3.5/?]
anonymous
August 9 2009, 20:08:15 UTC
This anon is very conflicted and confused XD
Most of this fill points to it being Russia. Anon dislikes rape-truck!Russia but loves Territorial!Russia. So... conflicted.
And then there was that not-so-subtle hint that it isn't Russia.... Confused. I have a vague idea who this might be, but there are a lot of usual suspects when it comes to a nation being obsessed with America-- so I could be wrong.
Either way, ignore me. I love this fill and I want to have Writer!Anon's babies <3
OP: The suspense is killing me! Thank you, writer!anon!
anonymous
August 9 2009, 20:33:08 UTC
I did not expect this to be picked up so quickly, or that such a talented writer!anon would fill this! Your writing and characterizations are incredible. You could feel the suspense, the mystery, the obsession - everything I was looking for in each and every word. This is an amazing piece of art (yes, art) that you've given us to enjoy, writer!anon.
What I really have to commend you is definitely the suspense/mystery. Yes, I adore the underlying sexiness and creepiness, but you're definitely keeping us on our toes! Is it Russia? It seems like it is. But maybe it's not. You've left me as in the dark as America and as fascinated with this as the obsessor!
I'll stop here, because I will probably go on and on about the brilliance of this. I applaud you. Thank you so much for this, writer!anon. I eagerly await the next installment.
Re: Eyes Wide Open [3.5/?]
anonymous
August 9 2009, 21:35:54 UTC
This is quite the mystery you given us, I wonder who this mysterious assailant may be? The vodka comment made me think of Finland. (Should I be ashamed of myself?) I honestly have no idea though. At least I feel like I can rule out Russia (too obvious, or are you trying to mislead us?) and England (unless the man refers to himself in the third person). I can't wait for the next chapter <3
Re: Eyes Wide Open [3.5/?]
anonymous
August 9 2009, 22:49:17 UTC
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF KEYBOARD SMASH!!
Dear author!anon, I thought I knew. Yes, yes, I thought, "Oh, Russia. How obvious." Then you slapped me in the face with your AWESOME. My heart skipped a beat.
I re-read this, anon. And I realized. Yes. You. YES. YES!!! I will not say anymore. But, I know, anon. At least, I think I know... And I love you for it. Oh, how I adore you...
I am so in love with what you have written. I read this on a whim and I was surprised beyond my wildest dreams. YOU ARE MY CUP OF TEA, ANON!
Let me just say, that the INTERACTION between America and Russia... their dialogue is very amusing.
"I am trying to get more tourists to come to spend their tourist money, so is like flirting, da?" Ho ho... Oh, Ivan~ You write him very well.
America was really being really grabby, which was a good sign. It showed that America missed him already. And this time, it was America who made the first move, nuzzling against his neck and giggling.
"You... yooooooooooouuuuu! You smell like vodka!"
He ran his fingers through that golden hair, pulling America back so that he could do some kissing. "Vodka totally doesn't have its own smell," he told America, though the glazed look in those eyes told him that the man probably wouldn't remember that simple fact by the morning. But that was fine, so long as they had the night.
"You taste like vodka," mumbled America against his lips, licking his lips. "I think I liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiike vodka."
It was a confession, wasn't it? It was. It really was. He'd thought then that nothing could spoil it, nothing could spoil the love between the two of them.
Then came morning, and America was being his usual flirty self again. Maybe not quite as flirty, considering it looked like he was suffering from a bad hangover, but wasn't it cruel to flirt at all when you already had a partner? And they'd gone all the way too! It wasn't like they were just playing around like some other people.
If one thing good came out of all the flirting, it was that he would get another chance to make love to his darling America. The summit was almost over, and he'd been so worried that he wouldn't be able to see America again once he had to go home, but it seemed that America had agreed to follow them home.
The next time, next time, he would make it clear to America that his feelings were not meant to be toyed with. Next time, he wasn't going to be so nice. He would have to make sure that America remembers.
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But...
I think I've got it now. Not gonna spoil it for everyone else. Just wanted to let you know, I'm onto you. ; )
(Unless it really is Russia, then...I'm just reading into things too far...D: )
Anyway, this is going great! I love it! <3
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Most of this fill points to it being Russia. Anon dislikes rape-truck!Russia but loves Territorial!Russia. So... conflicted.
And then there was that not-so-subtle hint that it isn't Russia.... Confused. I have a vague idea who this might be, but there are a lot of usual suspects when it comes to a nation being obsessed with America-- so I could be wrong.
Either way, ignore me. I love this fill and I want to have Writer!Anon's babies <3
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What I really have to commend you is definitely the suspense/mystery. Yes, I adore the underlying sexiness and creepiness, but you're definitely keeping us on our toes! Is it Russia? It seems like it is. But maybe it's not. You've left me as in the dark as America and as fascinated with this as the obsessor!
I'll stop here, because I will probably go on and on about the brilliance of this. I applaud you. Thank you so much for this, writer!anon. I eagerly await the next installment.
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KEYBOARD SMASH!!
Dear author!anon,
I thought I knew. Yes, yes, I thought, "Oh, Russia. How obvious." Then you slapped me in the face with your AWESOME. My heart skipped a beat.
I re-read this, anon. And I realized. Yes. You. YES. YES!!!
I will not say anymore. But, I know, anon. At least, I think I know... And I love you for it. Oh, how I adore you...
I am so in love with what you have written. I read this on a whim and I was surprised beyond my wildest dreams. YOU ARE MY CUP OF TEA, ANON!
Let me just say, that the INTERACTION between America and Russia... their dialogue is very amusing.
"I am trying to get more tourists to come to spend their tourist money, so is like flirting, da?"
Ho ho... Oh, Ivan~ You write him very well.
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