OP is very happy :)
anonymous
August 4 2009, 07:04:08 UTC
Someone's filling this? Yay!
So no one knows who really attacked America? Interesting twist on it. I especially like it since one of the ways that America tends to metaphorically "heal" (or at least, deal with the trauma) is to unite against the enemy and unleash hell on them. Weakened and with no knowledge of the enemy would no doubt leave an indelible mark on America the Nation-tan/country.
I commend you for not making Russia the attacker. While Russia does make a convenient villain and Russia-US relations in the 20th/21st century haven't always been the best, I agree that Russia would probably know better than to do something like that. They may bitch/compete with each other, but I don't think either of them are dumb enough to literally attack each other.
But I especially like how you emphasized the scars and how America is now in a dependent position. Again, a huge blow. I'm sure Alfred, even though he appreciates the help, hates having to rely on others. It makes the vanishing pretty plausible.
Great start! Thanks for filling this, wonderful Author!Anon! I look forward to future updates and can't wait for more!
reCaptcha: "landlady $19.4-million" -- Poor Alfred. If things weren't bad enough, now his landlady is demanding millions in rent.
So no one knows who really attacked America? Interesting twist on it. I especially like it since one of the ways that America tends to metaphorically "heal" (or at least, deal with the trauma) is to unite against the enemy and unleash hell on them. Weakened and with no knowledge of the enemy would no doubt leave an indelible mark on America the Nation-tan/country.
I commend you for not making Russia the attacker. While Russia does make a convenient villain and Russia-US relations in the 20th/21st century haven't always been the best, I agree that Russia would probably know better than to do something like that. They may bitch/compete with each other, but I don't think either of them are dumb enough to literally attack each other.
But I especially like how you emphasized the scars and how America is now in a dependent position. Again, a huge blow. I'm sure Alfred, even though he appreciates the help, hates having to rely on others. It makes the vanishing pretty plausible.
Great start! Thanks for filling this, wonderful Author!Anon! I look forward to future updates and can't wait for more!
reCaptcha: "landlady $19.4-million" -- Poor Alfred. If things weren't bad enough, now his landlady is demanding millions in rent.
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