[Gazefic] Make it that far

[hereticpop]

Ruki should come with a warning. Reita spirals.
winks: at evilgeniuskoji because I wouldn't try a stab at this pairing otherwise.
[edit.04.06.2009] majorly edited to prevent the bleeding of your eyes. ;p

Comments

[phylosophie]

authorsnotes: in case you have doubts, it's Reita's pov. and god, isn't this halfassed. consider me experimenting.
HOLY...
Isn't this exactly the kind of hot mess we're supposed to be making fun of? D:
NNNNnnnnOOOOOOOooooo, the bad fanfics have infected you!

[hereticpop]

the thing is, I don't know. I'm currently trying to find the line between the bad and the good and am trying my luck with different kinds of narrative. see what works and what doesn't.

thank you for an honest opinion. I really appreciate it. ♥

[evilgeniuskoji]

Well, I'm really flattered that I've been able to encourage you to try something new. =O I do like this pairing after all.

Not too crazy about the format, but I get what you're going with it (though I would've thought that the one with the crazy line of thought would be the drunk Ruki).

I liked the part about Ruki's eyes being blue--they have been, for a really long time. And I did like his last line--that snark is just really atypical of Ruki.

I'm glad you're experimenting! You should do some more. =O Can't improve otherwise.

[hereticpop]

before, I was usually like: "Reita/Ruki"? - *skip* XD your writing made me kind of curious about it.

I feel like I haven't given this shit enough thought. there are some parts I really like, but overall it's not exactly what I was aiming at. I'll blame it on Reita who is still rather undefined a character parading around in my head. :P

thank you very much for support! I'd probably drown in different little pieces in a matter of few days if I had enough energy to write down all the stuff I'm inspired to. XD

[evilgeniuskoji]

Well! I'm glad I managed to do that. =D It's a fun pairing to write and read, if done right.

I agree with you. I like some bits of it, and I think that if you can pull it together you'd do good. Probably. I'm having trouble with his character too. I despise the all-around confident playboy or whatever image the general fandom has of him, so I've been trying to build my own interpretation of his character, but a lot of the time he's too shy and polite, a well-raised mama's boy and hard to maneuver around cruder characters like Ruki. xD

That's great! I hope we get to read more of it. Cause, you know. Developing a character is fun, too.

[hereticpop]

I edited it and I think it makes more of a whole piece now. decided to keep it rather simple.
so yeah, I'm just letting you know in case you might want to have a look. ^.^'

[gratiela]

I have no idea why i never commented here OMG since that's when I completely fell in love with your writing! <3
Probably because I still feel at a loss of words?

stumbling among my memories in case you're wondering why now :p

[hereticpop]

really? I mean, then I'm happy I've written it. :D I almost completely forgot about it. XD
thank you, dear. <3

[shit, your Ruki icon is a very delicious Ruki icon *.*]

[cateris]

omg

*adds to memories*

And here they are. The bitches I have to deal myself BUT YOU DO IT SO AWESOMELY I SWEAR VFGIBJGFINJGFIHJNIGHJNIGHJNIGHNGI

First point of view sucks a big dick, but yours is full of glitter and HUGE and OMG what a first class blowjob! You completely OWNED first POV and SO FEW (if never) authors in gazette fandom EVER pull it off.

[hereticpop]

SRSLY GOOD LUCK WITH THESE BITCHES i find this pairing so incredibly rotten with cliches that it's hard to write them. not that i normally write them, it was just this one time. still not sure how i feel about them.

and, ugh, i was scared of first person POV and not really a big fan of it for a long, long time, but then i started writing a lot of original fiction in first person and i guess it came from there. still not a big fan of it in fanfic, though. I'M ASDFGUTJKL HAPPY THAT YOU THINK IT WORKED.