[Gazefic] Make it that far

[hereticpop]

Ruki should come with a warning. Reita spirals.
winks: at evilgeniuskoji because I wouldn't try a stab at this pairing otherwise.
[edit.04.06.2009] majorly edited to prevent the bleeding of your eyes. ;p

Comments

[evilgeniuskoji]

Well, I'm really flattered that I've been able to encourage you to try something new. =O I do like this pairing after all.

Not too crazy about the format, but I get what you're going with it (though I would've thought that the one with the crazy line of thought would be the drunk Ruki).

I liked the part about Ruki's eyes being blue--they have been, for a really long time. And I did like his last line--that snark is just really atypical of Ruki.

I'm glad you're experimenting! You should do some more. =O Can't improve otherwise.

[hereticpop]

before, I was usually like: "Reita/Ruki"? - *skip* XD your writing made me kind of curious about it.

I feel like I haven't given this shit enough thought. there are some parts I really like, but overall it's not exactly what I was aiming at. I'll blame it on Reita who is still rather undefined a character parading around in my head. :P

thank you very much for support! I'd probably drown in different little pieces in a matter of few days if I had enough energy to write down all the stuff I'm inspired to. XD

[evilgeniuskoji]

Well! I'm glad I managed to do that. =D It's a fun pairing to write and read, if done right.

I agree with you. I like some bits of it, and I think that if you can pull it together you'd do good. Probably. I'm having trouble with his character too. I despise the all-around confident playboy or whatever image the general fandom has of him, so I've been trying to build my own interpretation of his character, but a lot of the time he's too shy and polite, a well-raised mama's boy and hard to maneuver around cruder characters like Ruki. xD

That's great! I hope we get to read more of it. Cause, you know. Developing a character is fun, too.

[hereticpop]

I edited it and I think it makes more of a whole piece now. decided to keep it rather simple.
so yeah, I'm just letting you know in case you might want to have a look. ^.^'

[evilgeniuskoji]

It does make sense. =O I think that, if you want, you should keep experimenting. IT won't hurt, and I'm sure you can make something of it. I just like reading what you write anyway. ^^

[hereticpop]

yay. I might want to try different things in the future. at the moment I'm finishing a story following the Ruki & brain one. XD I hope it will be entertaining. thank you once again. :)