ah sweetie, the best thing is a broken-healed jae! ::::many hugs:;: such a good story. good tension and regrets. short and succinct cutting between characters and great pacing. i love their interaction and then the explosion of emotion.
Hello, precious ^_^ Glad to see you once again. We seem to share good tastes in fics, non? "pacing"..."explosion of emotion"...good god have I not remembered anything about critiquing from my Creative Writing class? Aiiish...Good call, Reecie...good call *pets*
:::::cheers:::::: oh so nicely done! well done!
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*hands out cookies*
Thanks for reading!
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...wait: there's chocolate. *wanders downstairs.
^__^
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"pacing"..."explosion of emotion"...good god have I not remembered anything about critiquing from my Creative Writing class? Aiiish...Good call, Reecie...good call *pets*
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it is a wonderful fic!
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