They Met and Parted (part 2)

Jun 25, 2008 15:43

Title: They Met and Parted
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shini_no_shisha June 27 2008, 12:20:00 UTC
umm.. well you asked me to write a comment on this fic so I will XD ( ... )

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shini_no_shisha June 27 2008, 12:20:42 UTC
*sweatdrop* this is really a long comment 0_o
I'm really sorry about that..... >_< hope you're not annoyed with it....

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heiryzmylisza June 27 2008, 13:02:23 UTC
eehhh? a BA in literature?
omg... i hope other than this fic, i didn't really fail as a writer...*pouts*

ahaha... i liked the way you analyzed these things... like i said, constructive criticisms help writers ne? i'm glad you told me those things so that in the future i really wouldn't commit the same mistakes again? erm... yeah, i get your point about the explanation thing. i know i'm lacking that one in this fic so i'm planning, i repeat, planning to write a sort of epilogue, if you could call it like that? that would probably explain things? i sure do hope that what i might write would help other readers understand why this fic led to such a tragic end...

and i can't really blame poeple if they don't like what i write, what pains me is just that they have to say it in a very harsh way...

ahaha, i'm so sorry for bothering you early in the morning!!! >____omg. about that one. it's still under construction? with my bday preparations and school stuff, i really can't write something decent with that one. but i do hope that i could ( ... )

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shini_no_shisha June 27 2008, 13:58:19 UTC
hahaha don't worry I read some other stories from you and I liked them xDDDD Having a BA in lit doesn't mean I'm more strict XDDD I just tend to annalyze XD ( ... )

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heiryzmylisza June 27 2008, 14:14:30 UTC
you're just like koyama ne? ahaha... even with the member ai!!! you do care about what other people feels!!! *clings on to you*

lol. 2 chaps a year? ahaha, if it was me, i think i would have left it hanging...just like my ouran/news fic. rofl.XD

well, i'm glad to hear that ne? ^_______^
hontouni arigatou!!!

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shini_no_shisha June 27 2008, 14:57:48 UTC
hahaha no one ever said I was like Kei-chan before XDDD one of my friend calls me Massu type xDDDDD though. Hehehe well I don't mind Kei-chan *clings to him* (actually my biggest point in common with Kei-chan is how we both flail over our nefew/niece XD)

Actually for that little update I tend to forget but it was just one of the most awesome fanfic I ever read in my life so I cling to it! The author updates with REALLY long and perfectionist chapters XD

dou itashimashite!

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shini_no_shisha June 27 2008, 14:59:56 UTC
oh and I'll wish you a happy b-day right nwo since I have a hard time remembering family b-day dates XDDD I'll probably forget ^^ have a nice day ^^

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heiryzmylisza June 27 2008, 20:57:53 UTC
eehhh? lol. flailing over a nephew?
ahaha... i don't think i'm that type of person! lol.

anyway, well, i guess those kind of chapters do make up for their absence ne?

thankies!!! ^_______^
don't worry, i'm bad with remembering bdays too!!!

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