dearie.... though this fi is emo... I ove you for it!!!!
The first part are actually kind of rshed I think, but since this is supposed to be a one-shot, then I guess it's ok.
I really like the way it flows... I mean the way you brought our feelings up then you drop it down BAM!!!
I awas lie.... what the.... what the hell is Massu doing!!!! And then... Tesshi died!!! OMG!!!!
But overall, I like it!!!! Hmm... wondering why people are writting emo fics about them these days ne~ XDDD
And about the debate up there...
before I write about my opinion... there's one thing I should tell you. When people even bothers to criticized or do a 'debate' on your fic. then congrats!!!! Coz that means your fic is actually great!!!! There's so many great authors out there that experiened it. If your fic is just plain bad, then I don't think anyone would even take their time to write 'it sucks' hehehe....
Anyway, I definitely don't agree with omnipresentdmat and honooko.
First I think you potrayed tegoshi and massu well on the first part, not the emo one. About the emo part, I can't say that you potrayed them well or not coz... I (and also everyone else) don't have a clue how will they be when they are in emo moods.
Celebrities (especially johnny's boys) aren't suppose and are hardly ever in an emo mood when they are in the TV or when they meet their fans.
So how are we supposed to know how they were in emo mood. That's why I really think that t's allright if you wote tegomass that way.
besides, a fan-fiction is a fiction that we wrote about a character or people that we like, based on their characters. But in reality, do we actually know how their characters really are? And different people really have a different way of thinking.
For example, to me Tegoshi is a young boy who is still innocent in some ways but is growing to be mature but deffinitely not a slut. But there are others who thought that tegoshi is the type of person who walks in and out of love hotel because of some wrong gossips and just because he wrote an ero lyrics. To me, writting ero lyrics doesn't mean that you are someone who always think about sex.
see, the way people sees a character f someone are different. So people shouldn't start saying that you killed their characters.
Hope you get what I mean.
fiuh~ this is the longest comment I've ever made.hehehe....
don't worry, i got what you mean! ^_____^ and that's really nice ne? ahahaha... and i really love your long comment!!!
oh well, we can't really please everybody right? i decided to write something different and people didn't like it, what can i do right? ahaha... that means more fluff in the future of Sushi!!! lol.
naahhh... i still want to be emo once in awhile. lmao.XD
glad that you love the comment ^____^ I don't usually write long ones ne~ since I'm not really good at commenting in words(even though I write fics XDD)
And yeah, we deffinitely can't please everyone. besides, I don't think pleasing people is an author's job ne~ (It's JE boy's job to please people!!! LOL!!) Coz if we write stories based on what and how people want it then it can't be called as our work ;)
So just write whatever you want ok!! even if a fic is emo and really dark, if an author write it well, people will love it ^___^
The first part are actually kind of rshed I think, but since this is supposed to be a one-shot, then I guess it's ok.
I really like the way it flows... I mean the way you brought our feelings up then you drop it down BAM!!!
I awas lie.... what the.... what the hell is Massu doing!!!! And then... Tesshi died!!! OMG!!!!
But overall, I like it!!!! Hmm... wondering why people are writting emo fics about them these days ne~ XDDD
And about the debate up there...
before I write about my opinion... there's one thing I should tell you. When people even bothers to criticized or do a 'debate' on your fic. then congrats!!!! Coz that means your fic is actually great!!!! There's so many great authors out there that experiened it. If your fic is just plain bad, then I don't think anyone would even take their time to write 'it sucks' hehehe....
Anyway, I definitely don't agree with omnipresentdmat and honooko.
First I think you potrayed tegoshi and massu well on the first part, not the emo one. About the emo part, I can't say that you potrayed them well or not coz... I (and also everyone else) don't have a clue how will they be when they are in emo moods.
Celebrities (especially johnny's boys) aren't suppose and are hardly ever in an emo mood when they are in the TV or when they meet their fans.
So how are we supposed to know how they were in emo mood. That's why I really think that t's allright if you wote tegomass that way.
besides, a fan-fiction is a fiction that we wrote about a character or people that we like, based on their characters. But in reality, do we actually know how their characters really are? And different people really have a different way of thinking.
For example, to me Tegoshi is a young boy who is still innocent in some ways but is growing to be mature but deffinitely not a slut. But there are others who thought that tegoshi is the type of person who walks in and out of love hotel because of some wrong gossips and just because he wrote an ero lyrics. To me, writting ero lyrics doesn't mean that you are someone who always think about sex.
see, the way people sees a character f someone are different. So people shouldn't start saying that you killed their characters.
Hope you get what I mean.
fiuh~ this is the longest comment I've ever made.hehehe....
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and that's really nice ne? ahahaha...
and i really love your long comment!!!
oh well, we can't really please everybody right? i decided to write something different and people didn't like it, what can i do right? ahaha... that means more fluff in the future of Sushi!!! lol.
naahhh... i still want to be emo once in awhile. lmao.XD
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glad that you love the comment ^____^ I don't usually write long ones ne~ since I'm not really good at commenting in words(even though I write fics XDD)
And yeah, we deffinitely can't please everyone. besides, I don't think pleasing people is an author's job ne~ (It's JE boy's job to please people!!! LOL!!) Coz if we write stories based on what and how people want it then it can't be called as our work ;)
So just write whatever you want ok!! even if a fic is emo and really dark, if an author write it well, people will love it ^___^
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