mcfly-slash ... Who you gonna run to?

Jan 24, 2007 11:03

okay, so here i am again. after a saturday of getting a taste of lindsay lohan's lifestyle (minus shagging harry judd unfortunately), a sunday of feeling rotten and a monday of fall out boy, i am back to the lifestyle of a writer. and back to drama-mood since i'm obviously much better at writing drama than at writing fluff. and i'm bringing you ( Read more... )

angst-drama, poynter-jones, mcfly, poynter-judd, multipart

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hearts_slash January 26 2007, 12:31:30 UTC
you know what, i think it's seriously amazing that you can tell i am not english. it's like .. dunno .. it proves me that you actually read and pay attention to my stories. not that others don't do but you do it just .. differently i guess. and just because i'm curious about your german .. are you german as well?

With saying things without saying them in mind, here's something you might like to think about. Imagine writing this story again, but so that Harry never tells what he feels about Dougie - maybe he doesn't realise, or maybe he doesn't want to admit it - yet it's so obvious that the reader is practically shouting, "you love him, you idiot!" What would you need to do differently? Might be fun to try that, sometime.
you know what? that is a kick arse idea! i think i'll really try it. not with this story tho, with a completely new one or something.

hey, just wondering .. do you have msn? because i really would love to chat to you some time (when i'll finally have permanent internet working at home instead of always running of to the internet café) anywhooo .. add me xxpammylanexx@hotmail.de

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first_spike January 26 2007, 22:36:15 UTC
Well, I've worked with (and proofread and edited stuff written by) people from Germany, France, and a few other places, so it's probably something I learned from doing that.

i think i'll really try it Go for it!

I've got MSN and LJ-Talk, though I don't usually have them running unless I'm expecting to talk to someone. Email me when you get your connection - addresses are on my user profile

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hearts_slash January 29 2007, 13:15:01 UTC
right then, i'll remember to add your adresses then. i'm not that often on msn either because i usuall get caught up in a chat and then my money goes down the drain :)

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