Title:
Organization XIV 2 Author:
Karax the Dancing Winds
Rating:
Run-of-the-mill OOC, some logic flaws, and a would-be-Mary-Sue OC.
Full Name (including any titles): Zyrex, Britniax, and Karax.
Full Species(es): Oushia opu Krakusherius Basus (OOC Basis)
Hair Color (include adjectives): Unknown
Eye Color (include adjectives): Unknown
Unusual Markings/Colorations/Physical Features: Nothing yet.
Special Possessions (if any): Zyrex had Darkblade. Karax wears sunglasses.
Origin: Unknown
Connections To Canon Characters: Zyrex could defeat Marluxia, and loved Larxene. Britniax is Demyx's date.
Special Abilities/ Other Annoying Traits: Nothing as of yet.
I Say/Notes: The writing is fine to me. Only some typo here and there. What I hate about this was the fact that they are all OOC from the beginning. The redeeming points? Roxas/Namine.
Part One Chapter 4
It seemed strange to him. There was no sound that was audible. All he could hear was his own footsteps. It felt creepy.
*Xemnas* Rarg! *scared* Raggy! Ronsters!
"Where in the world are they? If they're all dead..."
*Xemnas* I would miss the chance to feel the satisfaction of their cold, dead body! Mmm…dead bodies…
Xemnas walked through another doorway and thought he saw someone enter their own portal. Then he began to hear what he thought was laughter.
"Maybe... I'm just going crazy. What did I come here for anyways? I've no reason to be here."
Dear diary, Xemnas had insomnia. Still not laid.
SNIP. Xemnas was frozen. Literally.
Marluxia walked out of the shadows. "Well, well, well... Look who it is everybody. It's the quiter! To bad he couldn't 'quit' becoming an ice statue." He laughed and moved closer to the ice statue of Xemnas. "Let's put him in the foyer of the castle. Agreed?"
Luxord, Saix, Britniax, Zyrex, Karax, Axel, Roxas, and Demyx, who were standing behind him, all nodded.
Axel I can understand, but Saïx? I’m surprised that he’s not screaming ‘All shall be lost to you!’ at this point.
*Saïx*One of them can summon Peter Pan, right?
"It's amazing what freezing cold and burning liquid nitrogen can do, isn't it? I happen to find it facsinating...Too bad for you though..."
-Foyer (pronounced foy-yay for those of you who don't know french... shame on you!)-
Sure, mock my linguistic inability. Meanwhile, let me amaze you with a language you’re not familiar of: SIALAN!
Vexen, Larxene, Zexion, Zigbar, Namine, and Xaldin all stood in front of the mew decoration.
‘Mew’ decoration? Is this a Pokemon/Kingdom Hearts crossover I’m not aware of?
It was elegant, but annoying to look at at the same time.
Pretty much like Axel’s ‘Got it memorized’ line, or some of AkuRoku fics.
SNIP. Marluxia ask Karax about something.
"I've been meaning to ask you about your title... The Zephyr Blade...It does't fit you."
*Karax* So? What do YOU care?
*Marluxia* I’m thinking of a cooler nickname: Imaginary Member. Britniax’s got Frankendoodle Girl.
"What are you suggesting? That I need to change?"
"NO! I didn't mean anything like that! I just mean you should change your title to something that suits the way you fight. I was thinking something
like...The 'Dancing Winds'. What do you think?"
*Karax* Xaldin’s still here?
"Sure..." She walked away from him. "Don't you have final preparations to make? The party is tonight... Just make sure you're ready, is all. Later..."
"Yeah... thanks..." He didn't know why she didn't like him that much. Maybe is had to do with him and Larxene... "I hope everything goes okay tonight..." He sighed and left for the ballroom to finish his preparations. Tonight was, and would be remebered as, the biggest and most important night of all. The night when the World That Never Was would be having a celebration for a certain event.vent?
What event? What event would be important enough for the WHOLE World That Never Was to celebrate? If it’s not ‘billions of usable hearts’, I swear… Oh wait, they got HEARTS now!
Chapter 5
The stars were shining brightly and the pale moon gave a off a dim light. Roxas thought that it would be too crowded to dance with Namine inside the ballroom.
Too crowded? Surely Marluxia doesn’t allow non-human-shaped Nobodies to dance? He did? Well, that means my DuskxDancer OTP is coming to life!
SNIP. Roxas waited for Namine.
"You look...beautiful." His eyes met hers, and he felt as though he was staring into an endless abyss.
*Namine* It’s for storing shuriken in case of heterosexual vore.
"Are you ready?"
She looked at him with her icy eyes. "Thank you, Roxas. Yes, shall we go?"
He led her the cliff where Karax would often sit, and they began to dance a waltz.
"This is wierd! There's no music to dance to."
Oopps…accidentally pressed the ‘mute’ button.
All of a sudden, Nelly Furtado appeared out of nowhere and began to sing 'All Good Things (Come To An End)'. Namine and Roxas began to dance, Namine resting her head on his shoulder. "Thank you." She whispered into his ear.
Nelly Furtado, huh? Explain how come one of OUR world’s star appeared in World That Never Was. Does Sony create Gummi Ship because it was so famous or what?
*Howard Stringer* We promise it will have Blu-Ray. In fact, it will be the next generation vehicle. It’ll be so famous we’ll only prepare 50 copies worldwide! And we’re going to advertise it to Vatican by placing a smiling man to the camera while on his head a crown of thorns with Gummi Ship miniature. The man will say, “Ten Days of Passion”.
-BALLROOM-
Since when? Why Marluxia would build a ballroom anyway?
*Marluxia* I originally wanted to call it Balls-crushing Room, but the tag was too short.
Eight members of the organization stood in the ballroom, waiting for something to happen.
*Xaldin* That Deus Ex Machina never arrived at the correct time!
*Deus Ex Machina* Sorry, I’m using the local time.
Saix took the stage with microphone in hand. "Attention. We are going to start this dance that was arranged by our own Marluxia, with a slower song. Please give it up for some group I forget the name of. They will be singing 'Concrete Angels'."
SNIP. Demyx/Britniax, Marluxia/Larxene, Zyrex/Karax.
-3 Hours Later (a.k.a. 11:00pm)-
"Okay, we've had our 'romantic' night, so, our next performances will be from groups like Nickleback, Billy Talent, Three Days Grace, Daughtry, finger eleven, and, Good Charlotte. First on the list is Good Charlotte with 'The River'.
*Narrator* Trendy guest stars were shamelessly carried out to grab ratings. But there were bigger problems off-screen. Marluxia created a ruckus on a Hawaiian airline jet, attacking several flight attendants. While he was in rehab, his part is played by his good friend, Mary Poppins. Fans reacted to these episodes with yawn. Angry yawn. Desperate to polish their tarnished image, the Organization agreed to a live appearance at Neverland State Fair.
*Larxene* Right from the start I had a bad feeling about that gig.
*Narrator* All this on ‘Behind the Slaughter’, after the commercials.
Karax, I'll let you take it from here."
*Saïx* *singing* Take it from meeee…
He handed the microphone to her. "Thanks, Saix." She grabbed her black and red guitar. "I've been invited by Joel and Benji to play this song with them, so, I hope you enjoy." The curtains were drawn back and the group was revealed. "Hit it."
"She's so great, isn't she, Demyx? I love her for those sorta skillz!"
Demyx was sitting down, watching Britniax have fun on stage, playing her guitar and managing a somewhat difficult solo he would've killed for.
Well, Demyx’s was a sitar…
He gave a long, deep sigh. "I wish that was me..."
Selfish little bastard.
SNIP. Karax recognized that Axel was down.
"Come ON!!! Don't tell me you're upset about me and him. I don't mean for this to be harsh, but we never were 'official'. I'm sorry, kay? It's just that we have a lot in common and..." He still turned away from her, but she growled at him. "WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU!!? I'M TRYING TO EXPLAIN SOMETHING TO YOU, BUT YOU JUST TURN AWAY!!! You know what, forget it. Don't come crying to me as soon as something goes wrong or you just wanna say something. You got problems, go tell someone who gives a damn!
*Axel* So that leaves…Roxas.
*Roxas* Hell no. Go tell someone else.
*Karax* …I’m not ACTUALLY asking you to tell someone who GIVES a damn.
I've been willing to listen, and I've been willing to talk, but now... I'm through, Axel. I'm through for good!!"
*Zooms in Axel’s sad face, soap-opera style*
She stormed out of the room, not caring who she ran into.
*Narrator* She later regret that action as she ran into Berserker’s weapon.
*Karax* Ouch didn’t cover it.
Axel looked upwards towards the exit and realized something, raizing a hand and shouting.
"Karax wait! Please!" She just kept walking and was soon out in the black streets of her home.
"Nice job, man. You totally blew that one, dude."
"Yeah... Thanks, Xigbar. I can see that." He moved away from the Sharpshooter and began to mutter. "What am I gonna do now? I have to do something, or else she'll never speak to me again..."
Here’s an idea: Pretend you’re gay, and attract Zyrex.
*Axel* Why would I do something like that?
You’re the gay bitch, right?
*Demyx* I shall take the role of the sporker as he was being pummeled by Axel. Axel, it’ll hurt more if you stab him on the ribs! Yeah, that’s it!
Chapter 6
Four days had passed since Axel was shot down. Because of what'd happened, things just didn't seem to be the same. The dull moon didn't seem as dull, the sky was darker... It just wouldn't be the same without her in his life.
*Demyx* …this isn’t the Axel, right?
*Axel* You know it is.
*Demyx* The Axel, the perfume for men?
Zyrex was thrilled to a certain degree, believing that he would no longer have to worry about the Dancing Flames getting in his way. Karax however... something just wasn't right with her. She was still smiling and laughing, celebrating and... quieter. Quieter...
Here I thought she was the sad, emo-type…damn fic destroying my hopes.
She was quieter tahn what she used to be before she told Axel to 'fuck off.' (I use the term rarely in reality unless someone... or something... really pisses me off. Then I get angry...).
And who dared to ignore the mention of AUTHOR’s life that got nothing to do with the story? WHO? LIFT YOUR HAND!
SNIP. Zyrex was drunk with Xigbar and Demyx.
"I'm...soooo...HIGH!! Can't get enough of that! Give me some more and DIE!!!" He waved hid arms in the air while holding a bottle of Vodka.
Just keep drinking and you’ll die anyway. *Commercial* Say ‘NO’ to drugs!
He tried to stand, but when he did so, he fell on broke his booze. "Aw man! That blows, dude. Gimmie another!" He reached for the one Demyx was holding.
So if the bottle of Vodka was broken, won’t the pieces stab Xigbar?
*Xigbar* I have the *literal* abs of steel!
"Get your own, man! This one's mine."
Unfortuneaately, Britniax had turned around the corner. As soon as she saw Demyx fighting Xigbar over a bottle of Vodka, she grabbed him by the collar of his cloak and threw the booze to the ground.
"Awww! Why'd ya do that? You were welme to jon uth."
"Get real. Come on, Demyx. It's past your bed time!"
*Demyx* *being Bart* Oh mom!
So she dragged him off, leaving Zyrex and Xigbar to get more drunk than they already were.
"Dude, leth ge ouwa ha. Bring da vodka..."
*Xigbar* What? Truly your forgiveness I implore, but I can’t seem to understand ‘tis language you speaketh. So faintly you speak that I scarce was sure I heard you. Would you so kindly, oh so kindly, repeat of the words that you hath spoken?
"Get your own man. I'm stayin' right here. Go wherever you want, Xigbar, just don't drag me with you."
- Meanwhile in Vexen's Lab-
*Singing* In Vexen’s laboratory…
Vexen was working on some type of strange pink flourescent liquid, staying up late each day. He'd been working on this project for the past five days. Axel had been helping him, but was still moping.
*Vexen* Axel, you missed the spot.
*Axel* *singing* Well, what are you waiting for? Take a mop, and join in!
*Vexen* *singing* Gonna mop the laboratory, gonna mop it clean…
"Vexen, I'm thinking about leaving."
Vexen knocked over three vials. "No! Damn it! Now I havce to combine it again!!"
*Vexen* You know damn well they’re bad at the Fusion Dance!
Axel looked at number IV. "Did you hear me? I think I'm gonna leave the World That Never Was. For good. So that I can never come back either."
"Why waiting? Just because Karax got mad at you doesn't mean you should leave. It was just a little mishap. Both of you did overreact, though. It doesn't surprise me that she yelled at you like she did. do it now."
"So? I'm still gonna leave, and you aren't gonna stop me. Nobody will. I'm gone." He drew his weapons and cut himself across the chest. Moments later, he vanished in a puff of smoke.
Correction: He didn’t need to do that. He could just summon the gate.
*Axel* I’m running out of MP. And God knows Ether had been expensive lately.
"Axel! You fool..."
Ah! Perhaps the most IC line I’ve ever seen from Vexen!
Chapter 7
Vexen was mopping up the acids that Axel had knocked on the ground. They were eating away at the flooring, making a small indent of where the liquids had been. He was mumbling something as he was finishing up. "Such a fool... How did I get to know such an idiot!"
Blame Tetsuya Nomura.
*Newspaper’s headline three days later* “Famous Game Director Murdered. Frozen in a Block of Ice. Suspected to be Walt Disney rip-off”
Footsteps crept up behind him. "What'd you just say? Something about a fool?"
*Zexion* Is Lexaeus on crack again?
He peered over his shoulder. "Zexion... Why the hell are you here? Shouldn't you be drawing up your next battle plans?"
SNIP. Marluxia held the meeting for the first five members of Organization XIV. That’s him, Vexen, Larxene, Saïx, and Britniax.
"Something good won't come of this. I can feel it..."
It already came out. It was the fic.
-Afternoon: Chamber of the Inner Five-
Marluxia was surrounded by four of the other members. Larxene sat on his right, while Saix was on his left. Vexen was on Saix's right and Luxord was on Larxene's left. Their meeting had started, even though Vexen had been late.
"I've had some concerns that have come full circle. One of them being about Xemnas. I've recieved reports that he's been plotting something against the whole organization. Yes, I do believe that he's capable of such a thing.
Then why don’t you just kill him when you overtake the Organization? You could spare all the trouble.
He once led us, and I know that he's able to wipe us out. He could've done so when he was here.
And yet all you do was freezing him…is it me or Logic isn’t back from his vacation to Alcatraz?
Also, things seem to be getting slow here and we aren't doing our work like we should be. We are a group of eradicators, but we haven't been doing our job as such."
Instead you were celebrating Valentine. Real leadership skills, Marluxia.
*Russ Cargill* It takes real leadership skills to pick something you don’t know.
Luxord was flinging cards into the air, one by one. "What are you suggesting, Marluxia? If you want everyone to pick up slack, you'll need to address this to the whole organization, not just the four of us."
*Luxord* You also need to take our hearts back. We’re cooler without them.
"I know. But what about Xemnas? He's the main problem that I want to observe."
Larxen didn't speak. Instead, she groaned and her face looked solemn. Saix was getting impatient. "I say we take him out permenately. That way, he won't be a problem. The problem with this, however, is that he'll most likely know that we're coming after him."
He was still frozen, right? So keep it that way! What’s all this hassle for?
"Exactly. That's where Zyrex, Karax, Demyx and I come in. I need the four of you to come up with a way to distract him from figuring us out.
*Xemnas* You won’t distract me with your foursome. You do, however, disgust me with those water clones equipped with ten genitals and those vines that looked like tentacles whose tip looked like genitals.
Larxene, Luxord, Saix, Vexen... You have your mission. Get to it and let me know once you come up with something." He looked around the white room. "Dismissed."
*Marluxia* It’s not the bell that dismisses you, I dismiss you.
-Late Afternoon: Chamber of the Outsiders-
Roxas and Zexion looked around the grey chamber. Nine members, including themselves, lined the walls. Voices of every nobody could be heard.
"Silence!" Roxas looked around and then at Namine. "We need to get started or we won't finish until six, when the whole organization meets." The voices began to get quieter. "Now, about the... Where's Axel?"
Everyone began to look around, at least, those who were stupid enough to do so. "Zexion, you said you saw him earlier today. Where is he?"
Zexion turned away. "Don't ask. Last I saw, he headed to Vexen's lab. Ask him."
*Zexion* I’m definitely NOT watching you and Roxas make out. Roxas, you had to train on the part where you bit her upper lip.
An hor or so had passed and thei meeting was finally over. All nine members were glad that it was over and that they could get up and leave. Both Roxas and Zexion had talked about their next move against the Inner Five and Xemnas.
HUHWHAT?
Both of them wanted power over the organization, more so Zexion than Roxas. As long as the fifteeen year old could be with his witch, he was happy.
Quote: [HUHWHAT?]
Xigbar had gone back to his favorite drinking spot with Zyrex. This time, they were both mindlessly drunk. Unfortunately for Marluxia, it was only the beginning of a horrible experience that would haunt him for the rest of the year, possibly his whole life...
*Xigbar* It’s sporking-less Naga Eyes, right? RIGHT?
*Zyrex* No…it’s a fusion of ‘cockvore’, ‘hydracock’, ‘heartless’ genitals’, and ‘Orgy XIII’. Add in a few more ‘seamen’ and MUCH, MUCH more ‘WTFery’, and then multiply the mixture ten times.
*Xigbar* NO!*Zyrex* There’s something worse! YOU’RE the bitch!
*Xigbar* *curses in a language combination of English, Japanese, Spanish, French, Hebrew, Dutch, and Klingon*