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Full Name (including any titles): Zyrex, Britniax, and Karax.
Full Species(es): Oushia opu Krakusherius Basus (OOC Basis)
Hair Color (include adjectives): Unknown
Eye Color (include adjectives): Unknown
Unusual Markings/Colorations/Physical Features: Nothing yet.
Special Possessions (if any): Zyrex had Darkblade. Karax wears sunglasses.
Origin: Unknown
Connections To Canon Characters: Zyrex could defeat Marluxia, and loved Larxene. Britniax is Demyx's date.
Special Abilities/ Other Annoying Traits: Nothing as of yet.
I Say/Notes: The writing is fine to me. Only some typo here and there. What I hate about this was the fact that they are all OOC from the beginning. The redeeming points? Roxas/Namine.
Ever since Marluxia had been put in charge, the marker attacks had ceased, and the whole organization had been re-organized in this order: 1.Marluxia 2.Vexen 3.Saix 4.Larxene 5.Britniax (Lexaeus had had enough of being in the organization,so he left, leaving his position open for the taking)
That, or all that sugar was bad for the body afterall!
6.Roxas 7.Karax 8.Luxord 9.Axel 10.Zexion 11.Xigbar 12.Namine (yes, she's in the organization. Why? Because I said so...) 13.Demyx 14.Xaldin
Yeah, who could mess with the Author? WHO? LIFT YOUR HAND!
There was a new order being forced into the organization, but the three painful days had passed by rather quickly. All had their dark powers back again and were back to their normal lives of chaos and hysteria. However, not much has happened in the past three days, but relations between the members began to grow in good ways. Axel and Karax were getting closer, but she still hated Xemnas, Saix, Larxene and Xaldin.
The old days were classic…wait.
Namine and Roxas were going out on dates at least once a week and that was pretty much it.
*Narrator* However, they have a problem:
*Roxas* Why don’t you know how I feel, Namine?
*Namine* Why don’t YOU know how I FEEL, Roxas?
Nothing else was happening, so it was as if they were on vacation.
No gathering hearts or such. Yep.
Xemnas was sitting at his new home, watching hockey on his 52" plasma tv, with surround sound. It was a sweet life for him, the best thing that ever happened to him. It was also the most riviting game of the hockey season.
*As Xaldin* Sora was in the front of the gate!
*Xemnas* Not now, Xaldin! It’s almost a touchdown!
*Xaldin* Touchdown?
*Xemnas* Hey, I’m busy gathering hearts. I don’t know hockey terms.
*Xaldin* Oohh…that’s a hole-in-one!
"I'm Bob Barker, and I'm Brendan Fraser, and we're here live at the Raidiant Garden Center, where the final game of the OHL,(Oblivion Hockey League), where the Raidiant Warriors and Destiny Chickens are playing for the Oblivious Cup!
Hey, that’s nice names. Oblivion League has a cup named Oblivious Cup! The author’s aware they mean different, right?
Now, best bets for winning the cup are actually with the Chickens, even though they are a bunch of chickens like their name says!"
Sora and Riku shot a puck and threw one left skate at them. "We fully resent that!! We are not chickens!"
*Sora* I’m a swan!
*Riku* And I’m a pelican!
*Wakka* I want to say I’m Kokatorimon, but I realized that little thing known as ‘Copyright’.
"Oh yeah? Well..." Bob went and threw back the puck. Sora and Riku went running in circles as though they really were chickens that had been beheaded, even though the puck was twenty feet away from them.
Apparently, Sora’s cowardice was magnified exponentially few years ago when he destroyed 1000 Heartless with no sweat. Very logical. Riku had
Xemnas had his feet up on the table, one crossed over the other. "I don't know why I watch this stuff. Maybe it's because there's no reason to spy on the new Organization XIII...XIV..." He sighed. Xemnas, through all the creulty he was put through (he was able to get all the feathers off, but patches of skin had been ripped off) actually missed the organization. He missed their carelessness, their goofing off.
Umm…Xemnas? Which Organization XIII is this again?
SNIP. Useless part.
Demyx visit an OC named Britniax. Let’s hope she’s not a Mary Sue.
"Yeah... that was just so I could get away from the others..."
"...and come talk with me? That's...sweet." She looked back at the starry sky. "I'm just thinking... It's nearly Valentine's Day, (two days away...) and Marluxia's organizing a dance/party for couples within the organization."
Hey, the last time I played KH:COM was three months ago. Remind me which scene shows that Marluxia care about that again?
Demyx began to blush, his face turning as red as a cherry tomato. "I was thinking about that, and I was wondering..."
Britniax's face lit up. "Sure! I'd be glad to go with you. You do want me to go with you, right?"
Demyx was blushing more that ever. He looked as though he had a fever and was about to pass out. "Y-yeah. I'd love it if you came with me. It'll be fun." He left Britniax alone to finish what she was doing.
Oookay…hearts, when did you get in the Organization XIII?
Once Demyx had left, Karax stepped in. "Good for you."
"What? Oh...him? There's nothing between us, got it? Nothing..." She, too, was blushing.
"Hey, how are things with Axel? You shouldn't be so hard on him. He just likes you, is all."
That line will make obsessive AkuRoku/Roxel fans mad. Be prepared.
Karax tuned away from her. "You think I don't know that?" She sighed. "I just don't want to crush him. He's twenty, or so, and I'm only seventeen. I don't know if you can see it, but there's a three year difference. I just don't want to crush him... It's difficult, don't you see?"
Britniax ran in front of her; she was unable to get Karax to turn around once again. "Age shouldn't matter! Think about me and Demyx. We're three or so years apart, but that won't stop him. And then there's Namine and Roxas to consider. Sure, they're the same age, but they care deeply for each other!" She closed her eyes and sighed. "If I have to, I'll force the two of you together for the Valentine's party!"
…Organization XIV: Where Dates Were All That Matter and Nobodies Care!
Karax glared away. "You can try, but I guaruntee that it won't work. Axel and I... we're two completely different people. We have..."
"Lots in common! Why don't you like him? He's a decent guy, a little bit of a pyromaniac, but he's not that bad..."
*Britniax* He’s at the peak of perfection, I tell you!
"It's my business, Britniax." Her hair began to reflect the moonlight. "You'd do best to worry about yourself."
Karax walked away into the darkness, leaving Britniax in the dull light of the moon. "Sometimes, you sound older than me... It's a little scary, to be honest..."
It was one day until Valentine's and all those who were in couple began spending more time with one another to learn more about on another, except for Axel and Karax. They were staying away from each other after another arguement ensued. It was somewhat of sad day for Marluxia, another Nobody, known as Zyrex had appeared and the organization grew once again. Zyrex was threatening to win over Larxene before he had even gotten a chance to ask her to the party.
Why was he sad? *Gasp* Could it be because he had heart? Anyway, isn’t he the leader? Just don’t accept Zyrex! Furthermore, doesn’t accepting Zyrex mean that it was now Organization XV?
Zyrex was 18, and had the look of one who had been through a great tradgety. He had a scar on his left face, reaching from his eyebrow down to his chin. His hair was an indigo color, but none of that mattered to Marluxia. He didn't like the new kid.
Don’t judge a book by its cover! Like me! I don’t spork this fic just because it said on the summary: “Chronicling the lives of the members of the organization...still. But things are different now that Marluxia's in charge...” I spork it because…nah, screw it.
Zyrex, on the other hand, didn't care about Marluxia and what he wanted. But what he wanted was to be accepted as a Nobody, and to win Larxene over within 29 hours.
Look up. That line is my Oxymoron of the Day.
Karax and Larxene were sitting off to the side, watching Marluxia and Zyrex bicker over the same stupid reason: Larxene and who would get to take her to the party.
"They'll never stop fighting over me, will they?"
Larxene in Organization XIV…I Mean XV: She who was Loved Despite the Bitchy Temper and All That Gore.
Karax nodded. "Nope." She looked at Larxene. "I can't believe I'm saying this, but...You still want popcorn?"
If only you were in a game, I would agree with you.
"Mmm-hmm."
"Let's go... This is getting boring.
Frankly, my dear, I don’t give a damn.
Marluxia and Zyrex were taking a break from their fight, and came to a conclusion. They would ask Larxene who would take her. But, there was one problem: Larxene had left to go find her long awaited sweet, savoury, buttery popcorn.
Finally! Larxene showed her real side: Popcorn Lover!
*Joey* Popcorn lover!
*Ross* VD Boy!
"Well, what now?"
"I dunno. Who gets her?"
How about this: …NONE?
Marluxia sighed. "I dunno... How 'bout a battle between the two of us, you know, to decide? It's fair, isn't it?"
Sure…Marluxia’s fair…sure…that deck-destroying attack was totally fair…sure…
Zyrex and Marluxia fight. Zyrex had a weapon named Darkblade.
So, they fought and fought, while Larxene and Karax had finally gotten their long awaited buttery popcorn.
"What is is with boys and fighting?"
What is it with Author and OOC?
"I don't know...Why ask me?"
-With Roxas and Namine-
They made such a cute couple, and were looking forward to what Marluxia had planned. It was true, or at least, Zexion thought it was cute that the two of them were together.
Zexion thought something was cute…sure…
He was also upset, upset that he didn't have anybody special. All four of the girls had been taken, and he was alone. But because of his boredom, he decided to spy on the happy couple.
Zexion: Obsessive Stalker.
"So, Namine... Do you want to go with me?"
She was nearly asleep, leaning on his shoulder. Everynow and them, she would sigh.
‘Them’? Watch out, Roxas! She’s cheating on you!
"Namine? You awake?"
*Roxas* If you are, go back to sleep. Don’t wake up from this fic alone!
She smiled. "Yes, I heard, and sure, I'll go with you. It'll be fun..."
"Tired?" He looked at her, his blues eyes reflecting the light of the pale moon of their world.
"You should get some sleep. Tomorrow's gonna be a long day."
"Yeah." She kissed him on the cheek and left him alone. "Good night, Roxas."
I am biased as a Namine/Roxas fan, and man, this is SWEET!
Chapter 3
Marluxia had lost to the Crimson Harbringer, allowing him to enter the organization. Zyrex was happy.
Hey, Organization XV was now a bunch of drama kings and queens. What’s with the scary name? Why can’t you use a better name, like Pinky Boy for Marluxia? Or Sweaty Shy for Demyx? Or even Hottie-hot Hottie for Axel!
He'd scored two points in one task, or so he thought. Sure, he'd beaten Marluxia, but that didn't mean that he'd won Larxene.
No one could beat the electric ninja. My 20+ retries shall be the proof of that.
Frankly, she didn't like him on their first meeting. There was something about him that seemed...unnatural and inhuman.
Pretty much like 20 thousands other new members of Organization.
Karax had gone off to her spot on the cliff to be alone. She didn't like to watch fighting, and thought it was more worthwhile to do some thinking. Zyrex saw her aand went to see what was up with her.
"You come here often?"
She glnced at him through her sunglasses, and sat down.
"Are you ok?"
"Leave. I like to come here alone, and with you standing there, I'm not alone, am I?"
…Can’t argue with such logic.
"You're cold, you know that?"
"So what? The others don't care what I do during the day and night, so why do you?"
*Zyrex* Well, befriending an angsting friend will make me cooler…
*Karax* Not as cool as being angsty itself.
*Zyrex* Damn.
He came up next to her, and kneeled down. "I don't. I'm just curious about why you come here."
"In other words, you care about what I do. Leave."
This form of coldness from an OC…plus points!
He sighed and sat down. "Why are you so cold, Karax? Did something happen in your past?"
No 12 chapters filled with angsty past…no 12 chapters filled with angsty past….no 12 chapters filled with angsty past…
She slapped him, hard. There was a red hand where she'd slapped him. "You don't need to know, and I don't want you to know. Leave!"
*Zyrex* Hey! If you tell the readers what your past is, you’ll get cooler!
*Karax* Really? How many chapters should I use to explain my past?
*Zyrex* I’m not really a pro…33 chapters, minimum. The first 11 chapters should cover your previously happy part of life. These chapters must exaggerate a lot, to magnify the effect of your sadder part of your past…
*Karax* *Diligently taking notes*
He stood up. "I was once as innocent as anybody else. I had a sister...God, I'd give anything for her to still be here beside me...I miss her, a lot."
Karax stood up and faced him, taking her sunglasses off. "What happened to her?"
The formerly cold OC started to warm around an angsting OC. Negative points!
"She was...taken by the Heartless. After that, I was taken, and... That's about it."
Karax sighed. "I'm...sorry. There's just a dark aura surrounding you. It's making me uneasy, that's all. Do you, by any chance, control more darkness than the average Nobody?"
Sure, he does…he’s a Gary Stu, right?
A black flame burned in the plam of his left hand. "Yeah! Cool isn't it?"
Whoo-hoo…black flame…Axel, you got yourself a prey.
She disappeared into her portal. "I guess..."
Zyrex's eyebrows were raised. "Strange woman..."
-XEMNAS'S SUITE IN ANOTHER WORLD-
He was bored of watching sports and was now watching TWTNW on his 52" plasma tv, (that'd be nice to have, wouldn't it?). He didn't like that Marluxia was in charge, the members all had new places, and that there was yet another new member. Because of this, he decided to go there and make a few changes.
YES, ZEMUNASU! Bring back the Organization XIII we all love!
-THE WORLD THAT NEVER WAS-
SNIP. Xemnas search for the members.
"Where are they?"
Forget them, Xemnas. They had gone to the Land of Fatal OOC.
Full Species(es): Oushia opu Krakusherius Basus (OOC Basis)
Hair Color (include adjectives): Unknown
Eye Color (include adjectives): Unknown
Unusual Markings/Colorations/Physical Features: Nothing yet.
Special Possessions (if any): Zyrex had Darkblade. Karax wears sunglasses.
Origin: Unknown
Connections To Canon Characters: Zyrex could defeat Marluxia, and loved Larxene. Britniax is Demyx's date.
Special Abilities/ Other Annoying Traits: Nothing as of yet.
I Say/Notes: The writing is fine to me. Only some typo here and there. What I hate about this was the fact that they are all OOC from the beginning. The redeeming points? Roxas/Namine.
Ever since Marluxia had been put in charge, the marker attacks had ceased, and the whole organization had been re-organized in this order: 1.Marluxia 2.Vexen 3.Saix 4.Larxene 5.Britniax (Lexaeus had had enough of being in the organization,so he left, leaving his position open for the taking)
That, or all that sugar was bad for the body afterall!
6.Roxas 7.Karax 8.Luxord 9.Axel 10.Zexion 11.Xigbar 12.Namine (yes, she's in the organization. Why? Because I said so...) 13.Demyx 14.Xaldin
Yeah, who could mess with the Author? WHO? LIFT YOUR HAND!
There was a new order being forced into the organization, but the three painful days had passed by rather quickly. All had their dark powers back again and were back to their normal lives of chaos and hysteria. However, not much has happened in the past three days, but relations between the members began to grow in good ways. Axel and Karax were getting closer, but she still hated Xemnas, Saix, Larxene and Xaldin.
The old days were classic…wait.
Namine and Roxas were going out on dates at least once a week and that was pretty much it.
*Narrator* However, they have a problem:
*Roxas* Why don’t you know how I feel, Namine?
*Namine* Why don’t YOU know how I FEEL, Roxas?
Nothing else was happening, so it was as if they were on vacation.
No gathering hearts or such. Yep.
Xemnas was sitting at his new home, watching hockey on his 52" plasma tv, with surround sound. It was a sweet life for him, the best thing that ever happened to him. It was also the most riviting game of the hockey season.
*As Xaldin* Sora was in the front of the gate!
*Xemnas* Not now, Xaldin! It’s almost a touchdown!
*Xaldin* Touchdown?
*Xemnas* Hey, I’m busy gathering hearts. I don’t know hockey terms.
*Xaldin* Oohh…that’s a hole-in-one!
"I'm Bob Barker, and I'm Brendan Fraser, and we're here live at the Raidiant Garden Center, where the final game of the OHL,(Oblivion Hockey League), where the Raidiant Warriors and Destiny Chickens are playing for the Oblivious Cup!
Hey, that’s nice names. Oblivion League has a cup named Oblivious Cup! The author’s aware they mean different, right?
Now, best bets for winning the cup are actually with the Chickens, even though they are a bunch of chickens like their name says!"
Sora and Riku shot a puck and threw one left skate at them. "We fully resent that!! We are not chickens!"
*Sora* I’m a swan!
*Riku* And I’m a pelican!
*Wakka* I want to say I’m Kokatorimon, but I realized that little thing known as ‘Copyright’.
"Oh yeah? Well..." Bob went and threw back the puck. Sora and Riku went running in circles as though they really were chickens that had been beheaded, even though the puck was twenty feet away from them.
Apparently, Sora’s cowardice was magnified exponentially few years ago when he destroyed 1000 Heartless with no sweat. Very logical. Riku had
Xemnas had his feet up on the table, one crossed over the other. "I don't know why I watch this stuff. Maybe it's because there's no reason to spy on the new Organization XIII...XIV..." He sighed. Xemnas, through all the creulty he was put through (he was able to get all the feathers off, but patches of skin had been ripped off) actually missed the organization. He missed their carelessness, their goofing off.
Umm…Xemnas? Which Organization XIII is this again?
SNIP. Useless part.
Demyx visit an OC named Britniax. Let’s hope she’s not a Mary Sue.
"Yeah... that was just so I could get away from the others..."
"...and come talk with me? That's...sweet." She looked back at the starry sky. "I'm just thinking... It's nearly Valentine's Day, (two days away...) and Marluxia's organizing a dance/party for couples within the organization."
Hey, the last time I played KH:COM was three months ago. Remind me which scene shows that Marluxia care about that again?
Demyx began to blush, his face turning as red as a cherry tomato. "I was thinking about that, and I was wondering..."
Britniax's face lit up. "Sure! I'd be glad to go with you. You do want me to go with you, right?"
Demyx was blushing more that ever. He looked as though he had a fever and was about to pass out. "Y-yeah. I'd love it if you came with me. It'll be fun." He left Britniax alone to finish what she was doing.
Oookay…hearts, when did you get in the Organization XIII?
Once Demyx had left, Karax stepped in. "Good for you."
"What? Oh...him? There's nothing between us, got it? Nothing..." She, too, was blushing.
"Hey, how are things with Axel? You shouldn't be so hard on him. He just likes you, is all."
That line will make obsessive AkuRoku/Roxel fans mad. Be prepared.
Karax tuned away from her. "You think I don't know that?" She sighed. "I just don't want to crush him. He's twenty, or so, and I'm only seventeen. I don't know if you can see it, but there's a three year difference. I just don't want to crush him... It's difficult, don't you see?"
Britniax ran in front of her; she was unable to get Karax to turn around once again. "Age shouldn't matter! Think about me and Demyx. We're three or so years apart, but that won't stop him. And then there's Namine and Roxas to consider. Sure, they're the same age, but they care deeply for each other!" She closed her eyes and sighed. "If I have to, I'll force the two of you together for the Valentine's party!"
…Organization XIV: Where Dates Were All That Matter and Nobodies Care!
Karax glared away. "You can try, but I guaruntee that it won't work. Axel and I... we're two completely different people. We have..."
"Lots in common! Why don't you like him? He's a decent guy, a little bit of a pyromaniac, but he's not that bad..."
*Britniax* He’s at the peak of perfection, I tell you!
"It's my business, Britniax." Her hair began to reflect the moonlight. "You'd do best to worry about yourself."
Karax walked away into the darkness, leaving Britniax in the dull light of the moon. "Sometimes, you sound older than me... It's a little scary, to be honest..."
It was one day until Valentine's and all those who were in couple began spending more time with one another to learn more about on another, except for Axel and Karax. They were staying away from each other after another arguement ensued. It was somewhat of sad day for Marluxia, another Nobody, known as Zyrex had appeared and the organization grew once again. Zyrex was threatening to win over Larxene before he had even gotten a chance to ask her to the party.
Why was he sad? *Gasp* Could it be because he had heart? Anyway, isn’t he the leader? Just don’t accept Zyrex! Furthermore, doesn’t accepting Zyrex mean that it was now Organization XV?
Zyrex was 18, and had the look of one who had been through a great tradgety. He had a scar on his left face, reaching from his eyebrow down to his chin. His hair was an indigo color, but none of that mattered to Marluxia. He didn't like the new kid.
Don’t judge a book by its cover! Like me! I don’t spork this fic just because it said on the summary: “Chronicling the lives of the members of the organization...still. But things are different now that Marluxia's in charge...” I spork it because…nah, screw it.
Zyrex, on the other hand, didn't care about Marluxia and what he wanted. But what he wanted was to be accepted as a Nobody, and to win Larxene over within 29 hours.
Look up. That line is my Oxymoron of the Day.
Karax and Larxene were sitting off to the side, watching Marluxia and Zyrex bicker over the same stupid reason: Larxene and who would get to take her to the party.
"They'll never stop fighting over me, will they?"
Larxene in Organization XIV…I Mean XV: She who was Loved Despite the Bitchy Temper and All That Gore.
Karax nodded. "Nope." She looked at Larxene. "I can't believe I'm saying this, but...You still want popcorn?"
If only you were in a game, I would agree with you.
"Mmm-hmm."
"Let's go... This is getting boring.
Frankly, my dear, I don’t give a damn.
Marluxia and Zyrex were taking a break from their fight, and came to a conclusion. They would ask Larxene who would take her. But, there was one problem: Larxene had left to go find her long awaited sweet, savoury, buttery popcorn.
Finally! Larxene showed her real side: Popcorn Lover!
*Joey* Popcorn lover!
*Ross* VD Boy!
"Well, what now?"
"I dunno. Who gets her?"
How about this: …NONE?
Marluxia sighed. "I dunno... How 'bout a battle between the two of us, you know, to decide? It's fair, isn't it?"
Sure…Marluxia’s fair…sure…that deck-destroying attack was totally fair…sure…
Zyrex and Marluxia fight. Zyrex had a weapon named Darkblade.
So, they fought and fought, while Larxene and Karax had finally gotten their long awaited buttery popcorn.
"What is is with boys and fighting?"
What is it with Author and OOC?
"I don't know...Why ask me?"
-With Roxas and Namine-
They made such a cute couple, and were looking forward to what Marluxia had planned. It was true, or at least, Zexion thought it was cute that the two of them were together.
Zexion thought something was cute…sure…
He was also upset, upset that he didn't have anybody special. All four of the girls had been taken, and he was alone. But because of his boredom, he decided to spy on the happy couple.
Zexion: Obsessive Stalker.
"So, Namine... Do you want to go with me?"
She was nearly asleep, leaning on his shoulder. Everynow and them, she would sigh.
‘Them’? Watch out, Roxas! She’s cheating on you!
"Namine? You awake?"
*Roxas* If you are, go back to sleep. Don’t wake up from this fic alone!
She smiled. "Yes, I heard, and sure, I'll go with you. It'll be fun..."
"Tired?" He looked at her, his blues eyes reflecting the light of the pale moon of their world.
"You should get some sleep. Tomorrow's gonna be a long day."
"Yeah." She kissed him on the cheek and left him alone. "Good night, Roxas."
I am biased as a Namine/Roxas fan, and man, this is SWEET!
Chapter 3
Marluxia had lost to the Crimson Harbringer, allowing him to enter the organization. Zyrex was happy.
Hey, Organization XV was now a bunch of drama kings and queens. What’s with the scary name? Why can’t you use a better name, like Pinky Boy for Marluxia? Or Sweaty Shy for Demyx? Or even Hottie-hot Hottie for Axel!
He'd scored two points in one task, or so he thought. Sure, he'd beaten Marluxia, but that didn't mean that he'd won Larxene.
No one could beat the electric ninja. My 20+ retries shall be the proof of that.
Frankly, she didn't like him on their first meeting. There was something about him that seemed...unnatural and inhuman.
Pretty much like 20 thousands other new members of Organization.
Karax had gone off to her spot on the cliff to be alone. She didn't like to watch fighting, and thought it was more worthwhile to do some thinking. Zyrex saw her aand went to see what was up with her.
"You come here often?"
She glnced at him through her sunglasses, and sat down.
"Are you ok?"
"Leave. I like to come here alone, and with you standing there, I'm not alone, am I?"
…Can’t argue with such logic.
"You're cold, you know that?"
"So what? The others don't care what I do during the day and night, so why do you?"
*Zyrex* Well, befriending an angsting friend will make me cooler…
*Karax* Not as cool as being angsty itself.
*Zyrex* Damn.
He came up next to her, and kneeled down. "I don't. I'm just curious about why you come here."
"In other words, you care about what I do. Leave."
This form of coldness from an OC…plus points!
He sighed and sat down. "Why are you so cold, Karax? Did something happen in your past?"
No 12 chapters filled with angsty past…no 12 chapters filled with angsty past….no 12 chapters filled with angsty past…
She slapped him, hard. There was a red hand where she'd slapped him. "You don't need to know, and I don't want you to know. Leave!"
*Zyrex* Hey! If you tell the readers what your past is, you’ll get cooler!
*Karax* Really? How many chapters should I use to explain my past?
*Zyrex* I’m not really a pro…33 chapters, minimum. The first 11 chapters should cover your previously happy part of life. These chapters must exaggerate a lot, to magnify the effect of your sadder part of your past…
*Karax* *Diligently taking notes*
He stood up. "I was once as innocent as anybody else. I had a sister...God, I'd give anything for her to still be here beside me...I miss her, a lot."
Karax stood up and faced him, taking her sunglasses off. "What happened to her?"
The formerly cold OC started to warm around an angsting OC. Negative points!
"She was...taken by the Heartless. After that, I was taken, and... That's about it."
Karax sighed. "I'm...sorry. There's just a dark aura surrounding you. It's making me uneasy, that's all. Do you, by any chance, control more darkness than the average Nobody?"
Sure, he does…he’s a Gary Stu, right?
A black flame burned in the plam of his left hand. "Yeah! Cool isn't it?"
Whoo-hoo…black flame…Axel, you got yourself a prey.
She disappeared into her portal. "I guess..."
Zyrex's eyebrows were raised. "Strange woman..."
-XEMNAS'S SUITE IN ANOTHER WORLD-
He was bored of watching sports and was now watching TWTNW on his 52" plasma tv, (that'd be nice to have, wouldn't it?). He didn't like that Marluxia was in charge, the members all had new places, and that there was yet another new member. Because of this, he decided to go there and make a few changes.
YES, ZEMUNASU! Bring back the Organization XIII we all love!
-THE WORLD THAT NEVER WAS-
SNIP. Xemnas search for the members.
"Where are they?"
Forget them, Xemnas. They had gone to the Land of Fatal OOC.