Steve
You know what I like about my brother, Steve? Today is my dad's birthday and Sterling is living away from home. Steve gave my dad a gift and said that it was from both him and Sterling. Sterling isn't around during the week days and I thought it was so thoughtful of him to add another person's name to it when it was from him.
Through talking to some people with English majors, I realized that my writing kind of sucks. It doesn't flow very well and has comma splices/run-on sentences/etc. The bad thing is, I don't even notice the errors. Hopefully my writing will improve through reading books on how to write better. =)